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Previous ... PART : 3
Recap : He looks at the tree again , he knew where she is sitting ,she was smiling and a faint smile appears on his face , , Mr singhania saw him smiling .. really ?? maan is smiling at this time ?? ,... she waves at him and he waves back ... mr singhania follow his eyes and there was monkey on the opposite tree ,as geet was in leaves now ... he was confused ,is maan waving at monkey ??? but he didn't dare to ask from him ...and they go off ...sitting in car , maan once again looks back , he felt bad for leaving her here , she was still on the tree ...

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Part 4



Once they were out of sight , geet climbs down and goes back to her hut , the place in which she was living for past three years ... she also fell down ,when she was running to save herself from hounds , and as she had less injuries ,she succeeded in saving herself , but she didn't have anyone to go back , so started living there , in the jungle away from real world ... She built that small hut herself after working for many days ... now she got adjusted with the place ... she had nothing to eat or wear still never complained , she searched food for her in jungle, and once while walking and roaming for long time she fond out road , and after that she started going out of jungle some time , to see people and their life so that living in jungle she don't forget how people live

After applying some oil and balm on her feet she lays down on straws , it was turning dark and she was a bit tired too ... coz she went to leave him until road and then came back ...

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In his way ,maan orders his driver to go to mansion directly and not to the hospital ,he wanted to meet his family ,he reaches home , his family was so worried and all were waiting for him , he enters his huge mansion , still in same black kurta and torn jeans ,..

His father came and hugged him ," kahaan chalay gay the , kitna parehsaan kia hum ko " [ where have u been ?? we were so worried ]

Dadi : beta aap theek to hain ?[ r u ok ?]

Ani : bhai dekhain kya haalat ho gai aap ki [ look what is ur condition] ,she had tears in her eyes ...

Maan : ap sub parehsaan na hon , main bilkul theek hun , [ dont worry , i m all right ]

Dadi : hospital chaliye maan , ap ko itni chot lagi ha [ lets go to hospital , u r injured ]

Maan : is ki koi zarurat nahi ha dadi ,main ... [ its not needed .. i m ... ]

Raj [ father] :aap ki koi baat nahi sunain gay hum , fresh ho jayen doctor aap k checkup k liye aa rhay hain [we wont listen anything , go and fresh up .. doctor will come for check up ] ... his father calls the best doctors of dehli

Maan : its all ... his father cuts before he complete

Raj : kaha na nahi , u r my only son , main risk nahi lena chahta ...

Maan : hmm theek ha , main fresh ho jaata hun ... he knew his father will not leave till he is fully satisfied ...

Dadi : hmm aur sirf aram , is k ilawa hum kuch nahi sunain gay ... [ u will take rest only , we wont hear anything else ] he was so rich for world but for his family he was only son and they all had extra caring attitude towards him ...

He sights and go off to take bath , ... after long warm bath , he comes out his casual dress was already settled on bed , he wear it , while his father n dadi enters his room with a team of doctors ...,

Doctor : good evening mr khurana !

Maan : evening ! dad , dadi it was not needed ..

Dadi : we already told u . no arguments

Father : doctor check him properly n if we need to take him to the hospital do tell plz ..

Maan lays on his bed leisurely , doctor checks his leg first .

Doctor : mr khurana , its not normal injury , its deep wound ..u got fired ???

Maan : yes ! they fired and bullet hit my leg

Doctor checks fully again

" Mr khurana , bullet has been removed so cleanly , and what u applied on it that it healed this much so quickly ?? "

Maan remembers , how she was gonna apply balm and how she took his care all along ... her way of talking , he didn't even reply to doctor who was waiting for his words ...

Dadi : maan ,r u ok ??

Maan comes back to present ,"yes I m ok dadi"

Doctor : whatever u applied ,it was good , n we r prescribing these medicines ,u have to take them n rest as the injury isn't fully ok , and they all leave

Rajesh : ab btaiye kya hua tha maan ,yeh sab ?? [ ok now tell us what happened ]

Maan : some goons followed me ,n breaks of my car failed , they attacked and I fell into the pit ,wahaan se nikalne main der ho gai , [ it took time to come out ] , he skipped the major details , about his strange adventure ..

Dadi : aur yeh sab main ap ki help kis ne ki , doctor ne btaaya k goli nikaali gai ha , aur yeh dawa [ and whats all this ? doctor told that bullet has been removed .. and this medicine ?]

Maan : dadi wo sub , haan ! gaon k kuch logon ne help ki thi .. [ dadi , some villagers helped me ]

Rajesh : maan they helped u a lot then we must do something for them , I mean helping them financially , what village was that ??

Maan : I ... I don't know the name ...

what could he tell that it looks pit from above and down there , its her world ?never in his life he would tell anyone about her small carefree world ? no .. " leave it , I will manage everything later ..

Dadi : nahi bete ,raj sahi keh rhay hain , hum khud un logon se milain gay aur wo jo mangain gay hum de sakte hain beta [ no ... raj is right , we will meet those people n we can give them whatever they want ]

Maan remembers what she demanded on his offer " nahi dadi , kuch cheezain nahi de sakte .." [ no dadi we cant give few things ]

Rajesh thinks what happened to him , he believed to buy everything with money then what happened today : I think u r not fully well , u must take rest ...

Dadi : haan bte , he is right , aur raj ap apne team ko bhej kar wahan k logon ka pata laga li jiye .. [ yes he is right .. n raj u send ur men and search about those people '

Maan says instantly : ., nahin ! [ " no! " ]

Raj : maan ,u don't worry my team will find out in an hour .

Maan thinks in their life time they cant find her in that jungle " nahi dad ! main khud mil lun ga un se theek ho kar , un ko acha lagay ga .. [ no dad , i will meet them myself once i m ok .. they will feel good ]

Raj : haan yeh b theek hai , phir hum bhi chalain gay aap k sath [ thats fine .. we will also go with u ]

Dadi : hum bhi un logon se milna chahtey hain khud [ i also wanna meet those people ]

Maan : ji ... n thinks " impossible .. he remembers her words " hum aj k baad nahin milain gay , tu apni dunya main aur me yahaan " he so loved her accent and wanted to hear more but she was right they couldn't meet again ..

Raj : ab aap aram kar lain , hum chaltey hain .. [ now u take rest ... we r leaving ]

Maan nodes and they leave him in his room . he lays on his bed n remind the whole incident , how he woke up on grass straws , that torn kurta and her small poor world , he goes to washroom and take that kurta n place it safely in cupboard , he looks at his suits , his wardrobe was filled with best designer suits, every stuff n color, he thinks about her that she didn't have dress.. he comes to bed again n keep thinking ...

Her world was so different , she was beautiful he admitted , even living at that place she was pretty , how will she look if she wears some designer dresses ,makeup and accessories ... he starts imagining her looks ... then how will she react when she will know he lives here ?he imagine her in mansion ... He keeps imagining things till his mind get tired and he drifts off to sleep ...

Again the same dream which was taking his sleep away from many years disturbed him , he again hears a small girl begging him " plz save me , they will take me away " ...

He jerks her, who r u ? "

"geet , I m geet ... plz save me from them , I don't wanna go there "

he see a lady and a man looks like guard coming towards her ... " see ,they r coming ... plz take me with u , I will stay like a good girl "

" r u mad ? y will I take a mad girl like u with me ,"? he was himself so young probably 10 , he looks at his father , who was talking to someone on phone

The man and woman come towards them and take her away from him , she says again " pls ... plss.." she keeps begging until she was out of sight .. he didnt do anything ...they take her away ...

Then he see some people trying to kill a girl , she was same girl ... " Geet ! Geeet " he shouts and wakes up n find himself on bed

NEXT : .PART : 5 ..

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Thats it for now .. Thanks for the good response to previous parts ... Hope u enjoy reading this too ..ignore mistake 😊

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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story..I love to read more..Geet live in jungle..not go to city..because not one their for her..Maan not save her..I hope when Maan go back with her & bring some cloth for her..She tell him story..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Maan hides the information about geet
Maan getting dreams... Is she geet?
Will maan go to meet her... Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update
Maan dream /flashback quite interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update. Maan back with his family but doesn't want to tell them about Geet. Looks like he has been dreaming of Geet for long so must be some connection. waiting to read next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally Maan came home...all r worried for him!! Wow...geet did a fabulous job
dadi and Raj wanted to help those people .why maan didn't tell abt her? And the dream, is geet's past related to Maan? !?!
Thank you for the update and pm di :)
loved it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely story
geet live her life her own world
maan cameback 2 mansion
looking forward
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..Back home Maan is being taken care of by his family.. On inquiring about the incident, Maan explained them but avoided Geet's details.. Superb..Waiting for next..
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superb part.. maan came home safely.. his family was very emotimal to see him like that.. doctor checked him.. but maan was only thinking about geet .. and what was that dream about..

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