Beauty and a Dusht Danav MG *** Ch 6, pg 129 ** new thread link pg 1

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divya

@-Divya.S-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

thanq so much for the pm.. I read your work there.. it was very nice.. n here though geet seems lil neive but she also semms to be strong.. n Maan, his past is really painful n its. natural for him to be the way he is.. was thinking that will u continue this or drop it there only.. Glad that ua continuing it.. do continue it soon n pm me when u update.. thanks again.. n congratulations for ua new story..

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: dqno1

kya hua?😲

rote huve gandi lagogi😆

Haan meri nosy bhi beh rahi hai Hahahah 😆😆

Bold - Bs continue karing aur hamain pata hi nahi 😲

Ja dost dekh li teri dosti *moo pherring* 😡

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Interesting teaser. As expected Geet won't take it meekly 😆

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

hi avi

nice teaser

waiting to see what geet going to do to get her job back!!

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

another unique concept

like very much

maan's past not allowing to see that all girls/ women are not gold digger

geet's constant failing took as throwing her on him

nice teaser

Edited by aparna3011 - 10 years ago

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LM1991

@LM1991

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Avi,

Teasing teaser. Can't wait to read the update!

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wow...I really love your spin on the Kurbaan Hua sequence...

Maan's distrust of women runs deep inside from his childhood only when he saw his father being a victim at the hands of a gold-digger and unable to face it committing suicide

and thats why Maan colors all women in the same light and hates them...deciding to stay away from the opposite sex competely

Ooo... we're definitely getting a feisty Geet here... way to go girl, if you cant respond show your feeling in other ways glare glare glare, don't take any crap from this rake😉

Fired...??? well this love story gonna be passionate...has all the sparks and making for them😉

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Nice teaser... waiting for more

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Nice teaser ddear!
The UST between Maan and Geet is scorching them.
Maan is behaving at his egoistic best and wants to hide his vulnerability behind his 'arrogant jerk' mask.
Let Geet bring him a notch or two down by showing him the mirror.
I am cheering for you kudiye, knock down the munda, go for it!!