Os: The17th Match!! (completed on pg.3) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi sporthy
nice story
maan and geet love each other but didn't confess..maan's mother took advantage of this so geet has to left ..now after so many years maneet met gain ..hope so this time they get each other
thank u for lovely os ..
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

hi sporthy

nice story
maan and geet love each other but didn't confess..maan's mother took advantage of this so geet has to left ..now after so many years maneet met gain ..hope so this time they get each other
thank u for lovely os ..
waiting for next part


Oh hi

Glad you liked it!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Nice one
cant wait 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last part!!



Barakhaa Se Bachaa Luun Tujhe Sine Se Lagaa Luun Aa Chhupaa Luun Aa Chhuupaa Luun


Power cuts these days... I'm placing a candle here in case...

He stopped talking when he heard a click of the bathroom door n she stepped out waring that saree. ... it was a light printed chiffon saree which he brought long back for her of course. .. he thought once he would propose then he would gift her this... n now seeing her waring it he forgot to breathe. ..

Sorry I'm using ur wife's clothes hope u don't mind!!

Her words only woke up his long suppressed dream... taking slow steps towards her he looked at their reflection in the mirror they looked anything but perfect slowly moving her hair to other side he whispered in her ears...



Dil Ne Pukaaraa Dekho Rut Kaa Ishaaraa Dekho Uf Ye Nazaaraa Dekho Kaisaa Lagataa Hai, Bolo?




I'm not married!

And I'm glad the saree reached the right person... he walked out quickly not having control over his emotions...

Catching her breath she composed herself quickly... now just because they meet again n after all that revelations things are more or less clear but just because of it she can't act like a teenager right...

She walked out to see him searching something in the kitchen. .. he looked so handsome even after all these years... n babaji y is he waring that transparent shirt!!

Geet control. ..taking a deep breath

what are u looking for...

Wo...umm I don't know how to cook so was wondering if I could find something for us to eat maybe. ..

And

I found apples. .. he said making a stupid face scratching his head...

Move let me see ... She said shaking her head at him...

Tucking her pallu near her waist she started putting together the stuff which could make a decent meal..

By the way what were u doing in the restaurant today. .

Oh now I work for an event management company ... so was there to check on the venue before things finalise. .

Ummm...

Anjali ...

Don't make it spicy. .. u know my whole month burns n I can't handle it... then u will end up in making dessert too...

Acha ... can't u say it straight that u want dessert too...

He only grinned at her comment

He was slowly peeping into the dishes while she was busy stirring the curry...

Maan don't touch it it's hot...

Hmmm...

Do u have maids who does the cooking...

I usually have it in the office. .. when im home I ring our cook he stays nearby he quickly prepares a meal n leaves

Have these apples n get down from the counter. .. now!! She said thrusting a plate of sliced apples in his hands... he was quite amused seeing her bossy side

Uff Anjali n angar spicy combination her thought chuckling

U know that day when u gave me that news I was so heart broken I just received the news of my promotion n wanted to propose u in the park

Propose???her hands stilled which were busy with the vegetables

Y did u think I followed u to the park... I so wanted to hear u rejected that match n that bandar not knowing it was me whom I was cursing all the while. ..

Where were u then I need u maan I thought ... u weren't interested n maa was so hurt n broken... where were u??

A sob escaped her lips remembering her tough times...

I was so lost Anjali all the while I thought u were happy n was with ur love... the constant blush n the glow on ur face were making things worst for me... I had to leave for my own good...

Phir all this business n expansions kept me occupied...

There was an uncomfortable silence in the house. .. both were lost in what ifs of their lives..

Sometimes things go beyond our control with out even after planning every step of their lives

They had their dinner fighting over the dessert leaving the past to rest...

Late in the night when the weather become more calm n soothing she found him sitting at the doorstep outside lost in thoughts

His mom never told him that she was searching for a match for him... marriage topic was never brought up in their home... if only he knew what all was happening in his house back then with out him noticing

Mean while she made two cups of coffee n settled beside him sipping her own...

Days passed picking her up n dropping her back had become part of his schedule. .. Every weekend she made sure to visit him n spend some quality time talking about everything n sometimes nothing...

And the day soon arived she had to go back...
The night was so thick... he didn't know how to stop her n she didn't know how to stay back.. he drove her to the airport not leaving her hand

She didn't want him to either she fumbled while picking a cigarette from her bag... her hands shivered while lighting it...

And as usual he came n pulled it out of her lips scolding her for smoking n lecturing about its bad effects. .. he getting furious every passing moment his voice rose to the level it attracterd crowd people started looking at them..

Leaving the lighter lying on the floor she clutched her bags n pulled him with the other out of the airport. ..driving through the heavy traffic in the heavy rain all the while wiping her tears with the back of her hand n he poured his anger on his phone ...



Aisaa Lagataa Hai Kuchh Ho Jaayegaa Mast Pavan Ke Ye Jhoken Sainyaa Dekh Rahe Ho O Dekh Rahe Ho



When she stopped the car in front of their home he looked at her she started sobbing with hiccups... hitting the steering wheel again and again...


Then he said those words she was waiting to hear from so long


Anjali!

Let's get married!!


The end!!





Hay pep!
Though the next concept is ready but haven't decided on the title yet

So do let me know ur views on this

-spoorthi
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part. Waiting for your next os😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os yaar..maan mom's one wrong decision have separated and change maaneet life alot..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambbiha

Nice part. Waiting for your next os😉

Glad u liked it! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

lovely os yaar..maan mom's one wrong decision have separated and change maaneet life alot..


Thanks for reading! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Maaneet_

awesome os, loved it!!!


Bbeauty😉

Glad😃

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