Love you Always- Updated Part 3 on Page 1 26/08/2015

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It is 24 December2014, the year biggest fashion event's last day where many renowned names among the designers and models are present. Each and every person is busy is setting one thing or the other so that the event ends up as a big success yet again like every year.
"Put this decorative piece on the corner of the stairs on the stage" said one person arranging things.
"Make sure the lights get dimmed when the show stopper comes" said another
"Do you have the list of the models of the last designer; make sure that the models know their positions." Said another guy.
"Are the preparations for Christmas ready, since at 12pm Christmas will start. So the surprise we have decided to give the designers and models must be ready." Said one of the head of organizer of the fashion event
"Yes Ma'am everything is sorted out" said the worker.
Among the well renowned names of designers was obviously the most handsome bachelor of India, known other than Maan Singh Khuranna owner of Khuranna Designs. A very focused man who achieves whatever he aims for. He is famous for his bridal collections and formal wears. He is most popular among young girls due to his heart throbbing personality.
Today he is presenting is bridal and formal wears in this event.
"Hey Yash, can you give me the list of the models who will be wearing my outfits"
"Yeah sure. Wait a minute" said Yash one of his assistants.
Yash ran to one of the tables and bought the list and handed over to Maan
"Here you go"
Maan read the list and his eyes got stuck on the last name
"Oh so you are my show stopper. Now you can't be saved Geet Handa. Now whatever I will say you will have to do and that too in front of everyone. What did you say when we will be under the mistle toe then only you will give me what I want. Now wait and watch how I will surprise my love and the audience."
Maan smirked at his thoughts and made a plan what is to be done along with the organizers.
Geet Handa was a beautiful, young model who had achieved so much in a very less time. She only used to do formal wear events. She was the girl whom everyone looked with respect and the girl who wasn't scandalized till now from the day she started her career as a model.
From last year Maan and Geet are dating, though no one knows about that. They are very careful and don't want to disclose it to media or their colleagues. Both of them believe that relationship is something that should be kept between the two and there should be no trace of it in the outer world.
They first met at a fashion event where Geet was a model who had to wear a dress designed by Khuranna Designs.
"I am not going to wear to wear this dress. Go tell your designer...ummm what is his name...yeah MK"
"But ma'am please, sir has strictly ordered it that the show opener has to wear this dress in any case and it's you ma'am." Said the girl
"Ok then I am leaving. Tell your designer."
"No please Ma'am, please wait. I will call sir and you can talk to him." Said the girl
"Ok" Geet said with a straight face
The girl went from there in search of MK, the designer. She saw him ordering his assistant something and came rushing towards him
"Sir...Sir... Sir can you please stop the show opener; she is saying that she will not wear the dress and she is leaving.
" Ok then ask someone else"
"No sir it would be very difficult, all the models have been booked. It would be very difficult to get another"
"Now who is this girl? Why does she want to ruin my event?" thought Maan
Maan was a bit furious now and wante to see that who is this girl?
Maan went to the room and saw a very petite figure, standing in front of the mirror wearing denim jeans with white top and a scarf around her neck. Her brown straight hair cascading down her back.
"Well Ma'am, I am the designer. My assistant told me that you don't want to wear the dress. May I know the reason." Maan said in a stern way.
Geet turned around, smiled at him and uttered
"Don't get me wrong MK. I guess as I am working with you the first time so you don't know me. I have certain principles and I will not change them."
Maan nodded so that she could proceed further
"The dress you are giving me will show too much of my skin... the blouse you see of that sari, it is backless, then it's also sleeveless and also shows my midriff a lot. Also your assistant wanted it to be worn low waist. So I am not comfortable with it. I do not believe that showing your skin will give the designs or style more beauty. The other designers know this and they give me appropriate outfits or else they don't ask me to present their designs."
"I hope you understand. I am sorry. I will take your leave."
"But I can offer you more money for it. I t would be very difficult for me to get another model and then tell her everything in such less time. You know you have being practicing and you know your positions and stuff." Maan told her
"Sorry, But I can't. It's against my morals. And as far money is concerned, I am not interested. It's only because of my passion that I am in this field but with my own principles."
Geet was about to take her bag when one last time he uttered
"Ok. I understand your sentiments. Please could you wait for two minutes. I have another dress and I desperately need a show opener. So if you agree can my assistant show that to you.I am sure that you will agree with that.
Geet smiled and said
"Sure Mk."
"You can call me Maan"
"Sure Maan"
"I am quite impressed by you. They are very less girls like you. Models can go to extent of walking around in bikinis when offered a lot of money and you want to get paid for not showing your skin."
"Everyone has its own ways of doing work Maan" Gett gave him a big smile.
Maan smiled at that.
After that show Maan was quite impressed by her. They met a few time in different parties and events. Ultimately their professional relationship turned into friendship and ultimately love.
It has been one year now and they are dating.
Maan was waiting for Geet to come so that he can show her her dress that she has to wear. While waiting he again got lost in his thoughts.
"Oh Geet I still remember the day you confessed your love"


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There was an award show where Maan came with Sasha, one of his best friends hand in hand. Maan had confessed his feeling to Sasha towards Geet and now he wanted her to confess too since he knew that their relationship was more than friendship.

So Sasha made a plan with him. She came as his date to the award show since no one knew about Geet and Maan and they didn't want to disclose that they are dating.

While Geet came alone and was waiting on the table to see Maan.

But when Maan entered the door, Geet eyes almost sprang out seeing Maan with a girl hand in hand wearing a knee length skimpy dress and talking to him and laughing with him

Geet stood up and was about to go to them when one her colleague came to greet her. She was talking to that man while her eyes were glaring Maan coming to the table right across her where she was to be seated.

Geet was talking with gritted teeth when her mind was somewhere else.

"Who is this girl?? Maan didn't mention anyone coming with him... and look at them clinging together... she is laughing and talking to him like they are long lost friends... Wait Wait friends or more than that.. No No Geet you know Maan he isn't interested in anyone... If he would have then he would have told me... after all he is your best friend. Geet you are thinking a lot... just go to him and ask..."

She went there and stood in front of him and uttered in a menacing way

"Hi Mk, Nice to see you here"

When Maan saw intimating demeanor he took his hand off from Sasha's waist. Sasha felt that and took his hand back to the small of her back. Maan looked at Sasha from the corner of his eyes and told her that he didn't want to follow the plan and his lady lioness could attack him anytime now.

Maan reluctantly uttered

"Oh Geet, Hi! Nice to see you too.

Geet nodded and looked at Sasha in a stern manner asking him who is she

"Oh and this is Sasha, my...

He was about to utter one of my friends when Sasha cut him and said

"Oh I am Sasha Malhotra, his date today."

And at that point Geet looked at Maan if she could eat him right now.

"Oh nice to meet you. Enjoy!"

Geet uttered in a furious way and turned around and moved to the table she was allocated.

"Sasha what did you do? I was about to say..."

"Yeah Yeah I know what you were about to say. But if you would have said that then how our plan would have been successful. Did you look at her expressions..."

Maan muttered to himself

"Yeah as if this lioness would eat me alive"

"What did you say"

"Nothing"

"You didn't see her eyes... she was jealous of me..."

But Sasha if this goes overboard than I am telling her the truth...

Maan just wait and watch... I promise you that she will confess to you very soon.

They reached their table and sat while the awrd show started.

Geet kept on glancing from time to time. At one point when Sasha kept her hand on his.

Geet glared at him and turned to the show again

Maan right that instant took away his hand.

"Sasha this is getting too much" said Maan

"Maan just look at the stage ok"

Maan also turned to the stage.

Finally the category for the fashion started where first Maan got the award for Best designer in Bridal wear. When he came back after taking the award Sasha stood up and gave a kiss to him on his cheek.

At that point Maan eyes grew large as he didn't expect that and here Geet's hands turned into fists and she was muttering profanities to her.

"Who the hell is she to kiss him. She should remain in her limits. She is only date for one day not for lifetime. I should have been the one with him to congratulate and kiss him for his success.." Geet thought

Geet didn't knew what she is saying but in that she had muttered the truth to her self that she didn't want anyone else with her Maan, her friend and now love.

"Maan look at her... She is boiling now and soon you will get the reward of all this effort." Sasha uttered to Maan smiling inwardly.

Maan muttered to himself.

" If it is that she is getting jealous and boiling out of anger then very soon Maan she will boil you in very hot boiling water and then this girl very next to me...

After that Geet got the award for the best model.

When she came back to her table, Maan was standing there

"Congratulation Miss Geet", Maan said in a proud way.

The pride of her success could be seen in his eyes.

"Thank you Mk. Congratulations to you too" uttered Geet in a ignoring way

Maan knew that Geet anger point had reached well above as whenever she was angry she never used to call him by his fisrt name.

"Thank you" Maan smiled at her

"Hope you are enjoying with your date whom you never told me about"

Geet was turning more furious just by seeing him talking to her like this

"Ahh Geet you know..."

Maan was just about to tell Geet about the whole plan when he got interrupted yet again when Sahsa interevend

"Hey Geet, congratulations."

"Thankyou" Geet said with rage in her eyes

Sasha then leaned a bit towards Maan and said

"Baby should we leave for the after party"

Maan now couldn't even voice out either yes or no now...

And Geet when heard her calling him baby was the last straw.

She turned without saying anything and went to her allocated table.

Maan and Sasha left half an hour before the award show ended and reached to another venue where there would be the after party for all

"Now she will follow you" said Sasha

"She won't come" Maan was sure that she won't come to the after party

"She will" Said said fully determined

"How do you know?" Said Maan

"Maan she is jealous right now... she will be having some sort of uneasiness when she knows that you are with another girl... and when a girl loves someone then these feeling are bound to emerge. She has some feeling for you but she is just not aware of it. We are just trying to bring the feeling to her mouth thats it..."

"Sasha, I know she loves me, but I don't know... there could be another way to bring her feelings to her mouth"

"Maan you don't know us girls... We are like this... and jealousy is the simplest and easiest way out. So just wait ok"

"As you say Madam..." Maan finally agreed to Sasha to follow her plan

They reached there and were talking to their collegues when Sasha saw Geet coming in from the door and her eyes searching for the one and only man, Maan

Sasha nudged Maan and directing her eyes towards Geet.

Maan was overwhelmed by her presence. She was looking so pretty in theses dim lights wearing a black gown with diamantes work. Her hair open cascading down her back.

Maan and Sasha kept on talking to the clients for a few minutes and then excused themselves. While Geet sat at a corner and Maan's eyes couldn't stop glancing now and then.

Sasha took Maan to the dance floor and now they were dancing on a very slow song.

"Sasha this is happening too much"

"Maan you fel in love with a girl who isn't saying her feeling. If it would be any other girl then till now she would have confessed."

Maan grinned a bit and said

"My Geet is like this, a bit confused soul"

And Sasha grinned at that

When Geet saw this, tears started coming out of her eyes

"Why can't I see Maan with some other girl. Why do I feel pain when I see him laughing and enjoying with some one else. Have I started to fall for him. Has this friendship changed for me. I don't understand."

Geet lost in her thought moved to the bar and ordered a soft drink

But the the bar tender by mistake changed the order and gave Geet a hard drink

When Geet first took a sip

"The taste is really different."

"Oh Geet it is just your mind. It's the same"

Geet drank the whole glass and then ordered for another.

The bar tender now gave her a soft drink

"No this is not the same. Give me the same one which you gave me before."

The bar tender then gave her the same drink

"Yes this is the one"

By third glass Geet was really drunk.

She was feeling tipsy and her head was spinning. She moved towards the dance floor and then tapped at Maan's shoulder.

"Finally she is here to confess now"

When Maan turned back he was stunned.

Geet was smiling at him a little weardily

"Oh Geet. How come you are here? You never come to after parties"

And just when he was proceeding to ask more Geet held her head and was about to fall down when Maan saved her from falling down flat on the ground.

Their eyes just locked at that instant.

Maan was the first one to come back when he smelled a strange smell...

"Geet did you have a drink"

"Ummm... No I had a soft drink"

Geet told him innocently

And Maan knew that by mistake she had taken a wrong drink and the result was there

Maan bid bye to Sasha and took Geet along with him

When Geet came outside

"I don't want to go home. I want to enjoy just like you" Geet said in a childishly way.

But Maan took her to her apartment and made her lie on the bed irrespective of her zid when Geet out of the blue said

" You know I didn't like your friend holding your hand. I want to be to hold it. I wanted to congratulate you first but that bitch did that first and she even kissed you. I didn't like it"

Maan smiled at that

Geet turned to him

"You know what something was happening here" Geet said while pointing to her heart.

Tears started shining in her eyes.

"Geet u should sleep. You are not in your senses. We will talk tomorrow okay"

Maan stod up and was about to leave when Geet held his wrist and uttered

"I Love you"

Maan was stunned by hearing that. Those three words which he was waiting patiently to hear from her till now, she uttered them in these circumstances when she wasn't even in her senses. He couldn't believe his ears now

"What did u say?"

"I Love you Maan. You know my heart used to do weird things whenever you came in front of me it started beating insanely. Sometimes I used to fear that the person standing next to me would hear my heart thudding. I used to smile on my own thinking about you. You know one day Lisa said that I have gone insane. You know she said that I would have to go to a mental hospital if I woudn't stop smiling lost in my thoughts."

Maan chuckled at that

"Your smile, your laugh... I just want to hear it. It's the best music to hear you know."

Maan yet again smiled listening to her

You know what today you hurt me a lot

Maan face now showed no expression now.

"I hate that bitch. Why did she hold your hand. Why did she kiss you. I know I am jealous. I can't see you with any other girl Maan. Please... I want that right, I want that place in your heart, in your life where only Geet can be present.Dare you give it to anyone."

And just by saying this she dossed off

"Oh Geet, You don't know what you have confessed girl. I am in love with you from the first day. Thought it took time for me to understand my feelings but before I could say anything I wanted to here your feeling towards me. And you surprised me by saying those three words right away. No one can take that place that I have in my heart for you. And the right you are talking about. You will get that very soon.

Maan kissed her forehead and left from there after tucking her in her cozy bed

Next day Geet woke up, hand on her head

"What happened to me. As far as I remebr I was at the party last night. What happened there. Who dropped me?"

These questions were roaming in her mind when her cellphone ringed telling her that a message is being waiting for it to be read

Geet grabbed her cellphone from the side table and unlocked it and saw the message

"Geet, take a panadol with some water so that the headache goes away. I dropped you home last night since u were a bit tipsy by having a hard drink. And once you are back to normal call me." Maan

Geet got up and had painkiller. After a few minutes when her mind was back in state she remembered everything. It came in a tornado speed

"Oh God, I confesed Maan my feeling. What will he think. He will definitely think that I am a despo... Oh shit...I will have to call him right now and apologise to him

Geet called him and before he could say anything

"Maan I am so sorry. I wasn't in the right state of mind last night. I am really sorry for saying all that... Please forgive me."

"Geet... Geet, let me speak" Maan said in order to calm her down

But Geet continued without hearing him

"Please Maan don't take wrong meaning to it. Those are my feeling and I am not asking you to reciprocate them. Obviously you have your own choices. I will leave from here and will not sign any modeling assignment with MK designs.

Maan got angry just be listening this

"Just shut up Geet. Will you"

Geet just zipped her mouth right that instant. Tears started coming out from her hazel eyes streaming down her cheek. Her lips trembling.

Maan could hear her sob now

"Oh god what will I do of this girl."Maan muttered to himself

While Geet held the phone close to her ears waiting to listen his next words, a voice came from the other side of the ear

"I Love you Geet"

Maan had came to her house to confess his feelings

Geet was stunned to hear this. Her eyes turned big in surprise.

"Whhhattt"

"I Love you Miss Geet Handa"

And Geet just took away her cellphone from her ear

"I love you Geet. It's not only you Geet. It's me too."

Maan wiped her tears that were continuously dropping from her eyes and hugged her. Geet was abit surprise by the whole scenorai but after a few minutes reciprocate

Time just stood still for them. They didn't need any confirmation now. They knew now that they were made for eachother now.

After a few moments they left eachother when Geet uttered

"From when"

"From the day first I saw you, I was impressed by you. And then one after the other our meeting I got to know that you are the one."

Geet smiled.

"Then I wanted to know your feeling so Sasha, who is a very good friend of mine made this plan to make you jealous though it turned out a bit serious but surely bore fruit.

Geet smacked his arm and pointed finger towards him

"Dare you do this again I will boil u and the girl in hot boiling water"

And both of them chuckeled.

Maan came back in thoughts when he heard sweet musical laugh from the entrance.


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Maan came back in thoughts when he heard sweet musical laugh from the entrance

Maan was admiring her when she came to him

"Good Morning MK" said Geet in a very cheerful way

"Good Morning Misty" Said Maan while smiling and whispering the later part.

"Ok. Now come on tell me the dress which I have to wear. I have to see the fitting too. I have been asking you for God knows when and you aren't telling me or showing me"

"Oh that can do later but fisrt give what I need" said Maan in a mischievous way

"Maan I already told you I will only kiss you when the mistle toe is over our heads"

"Geet com'on, how can be the mistle toe over your head and that too today"

Maan went on playing along while he knew that his Misty will be surprised at the end of the day.

"Come on Geet it has been one year"

"Maan I have said na"

"Ok, don't spoil your mood. Ask Yash your position and in an hour your dress will arrive"

Geet went from there

The show was about to start in 2 hours and there was hustle bustle everywhere.

Maan was preparing Geet her along with other members while Geet was oblivious to all the current happenings.

Maan had kept hidden her dress as he wanted her to see the dress at last moment.

"Yash hand over this dress to the show stopper now, and ask her to get ready.

Yash nodded and left from there

After a few minutes Yash came back running to him

"MK, Problem" said Yash

Tensed lines appered on Maan's face

"What?"

The show stopper doesn't want to wear this dress

Maan showed anger to him while smiling inwardly.

"Ok I will look in to it."

Maan went towards where Geet was getting ready. Her makeup was already done and was waiting for him

Maan knocked at the door and entered

"Now what Geet" said Maan very casually

Geet lokked at him furiously

"Maan u know that I don't wear such dresses"

"Will you not wear for me too, look its so beautiful and I know u love this colour." said Maan making a sad face to make her agree

"No Maan. I said I am not going to. The thing I am have my rules and I will never defy them..."

"Okay okay.. stop lecturing me with your so called rules... I have been hearing them a lot lately"

Geet turned and pouted...

Maan came before her and hugged her from back

"Are you angry with me?"

Geet nodded in yes and then in no...

Maan smiled inwardly..

"Okay baba how can I let other people see my Geet like that..."

Red hue crept on her cheeks and she turned around and hugged Maan...

"Why are you nervous Geet.. Its just a backless dress... and look it has full sleeves even...Go and just change and I will see how much skin shows.. just for me... If u are not comfortable than we can do something else.. But this was specially designed by me for my love...please just for me... just check it out...please.. Even after that if you don't like it then I promise I will replace it"

Geet knew that this dress was very close to him and he desperately wanted her to wear it for him him. And Geet being insanely in love with him didn't want to disappoint him. So she agreed on wearing the dress.

Geet came out wearing the dress.

Geet nervously came out pulling the neck line up as due to the heavy work on the front was it was making it fall down

Maal look at it... This dress has a fault.. look the front is falling down due to the heavy work...

Geet smiled inwardly as she knew that she won... Indirectly she didn't disappoint Maan and her self made rules were not broken as well.

Maan was awestruck when Geet came out in the long gown. The red colour was complimenting her so well. And the intricate golden work was shining just like her eyes... He knew that only Geet could do justice to that dress. Her hand roaming in the front were distracting his full view.

"Maan"

"Maan..."

Maan was so lost in her beauty that he couldn't even hear her calling him

Geet than came forward and poked him on the shoulder...

I am going to change Maan

Maan obviously didn't hear her fully and then got shocked...

"What Geet... Why?"

"Maan look at its front, its falling... Ur dress has got a defect"

Maan frowned and then understood that Geet had not seen the dori at the back

Maan came close to her

"Geet, don't be too happy that u made MK lose..."

Maan bought his hands at the back while her face was now close to his chest

He while caressing her and taking his own sweet time tied the dori at the back and then kissed her forehead

Geet pouted seeing that and then smiled when he kissed her

MSK never makes defected pieces but can be surly be in love with a defected piece

Geet was smiling when hearing and then frowned. She smacked his hands. Maan removed them right that instant.

Geet looked herself in the mirror and was awestruck herself as how her beauty was enhanced by the dress.

Maan came back with the dupatta and draped it in such a way that none of her skin was visible.

"How can I make u break your own rules when that is what made me impressed by you... Made me respect you" Maan said while looking at the mirror.

Geet blushed and down casted her head.

Lastly she wore her jewelry and fully got ready. Mean while Maan was still admiring her.

"Geet if you are looking so gorgeous today then what will happen on our wedding day"

Geet smiled at him and pushed him outside

"Geet do you remember your promise"

"Which promise"

"Which promise...You forot so early" said Maan

Right that instant Geet remembered and smacked the door on his face blushing

"This Maan.. what wil I do with him... But what do I do... I Love him"

Finally the show started and last one was Maan's turn.

The show was going successfully when it was time for Geet to step on the stage

Maan showed the sign of thumbs up and she started off in full confidence.

Maan was looking in the monitor and was grinng

"None of the models could have carried the dress like Geet Ma'am is carrying. Its like its made for her to suit her personality." said one of the assistants

Maan heart filled with pride hearing praises for Geet in the background.

Once she came back, the designer that is Maan had to go with the show stopper in the end which will finally mark the end of the great show of the year

Geet came back and Maan was ready to go with her

He rested his one hand at the small of his back and started walking.

Geet felt as if current went through her spine and she got stiff right that instant.

She walked as if in trance seeing him smiling. The loud applause was not heard by her. She kept on looking on his sharp features enjoying his success.

After the loud hooting and clapping the clock struck 12 and its voice could be heard in the venue and party popper stared bursting... fireworks on the sky... Happiness could be seen on each and everyone's faces.

After all the commotion the lights went out and silence prevailed. From the top of the ceiling something was coming down. After some time when it was fully visible. It was a well decorated fully lighted chrismas tree. Once it was down another section of the ceiling opened and rose petals started being showering on Maan and Geet.

Geet was shocked to see that and stunned and overwhelmed. Maan was smiling while looking at her. Everyone there including the media was stunned by this.

The speaker was announcing the end of the Show and wishing "Merry Christmas" but all eyes were on Maan and Geet. At the back of thier mind they knew what was happening but they wanted to hear it out loud. Once the petals stopped a large silver thing started dropping down slowly on the heads of Maan and Geet.

"Now what will you do Geet" Whispered Maan

Geet stunned to see the Mistle toe right over their head. She just couldn't voice her thoughts.

At that time one person from the audience announced

Guy's the guy has to kiss the girl standing under the mistle toe. Soon everyone started chanting.

Maan smirked and turned towards Geet

"So Geet, Look the mistle toe is just above your head and you promised me. " Maan said smirking

Geet (ST): "Now how would I have known that Maan would actually surprise me like this... But Geet you promised him... But in front of everyone..."

"Maan in front of everyone." Geet asked reluctantly

"yes..."

Geet a bit reluctantly agreed and moved closer to him and closed her eyes

Maan knew that she wouldn't initiate anything being a girl. Seeing her eyes closed, the nervousness on her face, Maan smiled at her and hugged her.

"Geet.. u don't need to be nervous. I know u are a girl of principles and would never refrain from following and fulfilling your promises. I know what ever I will say you will surrender but I don't want that before our marriage."

Geet was stunned to hear him say that and opened her eyes

"Maan how do you know that I want all this after marriage..."

"Geet I have known you enough now."

Geet smiled at him.

"If not this then you have to agree on another thing"

Maan then dropped down on his knees with her hand on one hand

Geet kept her hand on her mouth. Somewhere she knew what was coming

"Geet Handa, on this very special eve, I want to propose you in front of all. I am not a man of words and I don't even know how to express myself right now. But I want to tell you one thing from the first meeting you have inspired this man. You have completed my life with all the things that I wanted. You are perfect piece for this defected piece (Maan winked at her). I didn't know when our friendship became more and turned into love. Geet I want to spend my rest of the life with you. I cant imagine my life without you. Will you give me the chance to fulfill your every dream."

Geet couldn't find her voice.

Maan kept looking at her and smiling

After sometime when Geet found her voice

"Yes Yes Maan. I would be delighted to spend my life with you."

Maan got up and took her in her arms and swirled her in a round.

"I Love you"

"I love you too"

While the flashes of the camera started and there was no end to them. As the most eligible bachelor designer had proposed the most gorgeous model of India.

Helloo everyone!! So this marks the end of this OS. Hopefully you enjoyed it. Please leave your comments and hit the like button. Eagerly waiting!!

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Superb start ...so maan n geet r in love n dating from past one year .. Geet is a model but she has her own limitation ...n for money she does not want to break her morls ...nice ..plz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start. Waiting to read how Maan has planned to surprise Geet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting os, waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Congo for this os .. Lovely start and a different concept .. Geet model with her own principles and Maan a designer .. both love each other but media is not aware of it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
congrats on the new OS! thanks 4 posting! Part 1 - fab update! well written! Maan is a famous designer! Geet is a model! Maaneet r in love bt nobody knows! Maan planning something! Their first meeting was well incorporated! Geet refused 2 wear the dress as it was against her moarls! Maan impressed! he gt her another outfit! they started to meet at parties etc n fell in love! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Feisty Start

Maan a famous designer while Geet a model but with integrity and morals on their very first meeting Geet had impressed Maan and he seemed to like her personality .
now he wants to kiss his lady love in front of the world under the mistletoe

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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
wow..amazing starting
likd it alot
eager to know how geet confessed her love..update nxt soon

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