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Part 13


Geet-I LOVE YOU!
shock would be understatement for maan right now.., he left her
Maan-WHAT!
Maan(st)- this girl is crazy, in one meet she thinks she loves me..
Maan- r u crazy or something, from how long u know me that u reached to this conclusion of loving me..
Geet was still lost in him so didn't reply him..., Maan was getting irritated with her behavior and his patience level was reaching at its breaking point
he shook her now why are u not answering me.., this brought Geet out from her dream world and she concentrated on his words instead of him..
look miss. handa u r testing my patience level, answer me!

Geet(st)- babaji i confessed, that too so easily its maan's magic i guess(giggled at this thought), now as i confessed there is no need to worry about , i should answer his every question, and tell him how much i love him..
Geet-woh.. finally u spoke something, welcome to real world ..(sarcastically he said)
Maan- now answer my questions.. and this time i what serious answers, okay.., Why were u sending my those poems?
Geet- that i answered already, because i love u as simple as that..
Maan- r u serious??
Geet- yes very much..
Maan- but how can u love me, u don't even know me..
Geet- who said i don't know you?, i know u from last 7 years..
Maan- 7 years??
Geet- yes 7 years, from 7 years i have have been waiting for u.., finally my wait is over..
Maan- u sound crazy right now
Geet- call me anything but i can't stop loving u..
Maan- as far as i remember we haven't met before, u don't even know me properly then how can u love and if u r talking about love at first sight then forget it , its just a infatuation which will get over soon and.. but geet cut him in between...
Geet- u don't herad me properly i said i know u from last seven years and if it was just an attraction then why it din't get over in these years, why i still feel same for u, why this heart start beating fast when u r near me, why when u stand before me the whole world seems to disappear, why..but maan stop her from saying further..
maan- STOP, u r sounding crazy right now, i don't care from how long u were waiting for me, i don't care how much u love me, what i care is stop distrubing me with those poems got it!
Geet- my poems disturb u?
Maan- yes, they disturb me!
Geet- why?
Maan- I don't know?
Geet- u don't know! , then its good for me i will not stop sending those poems i will send them!
Maan- what! no u will not dare to do that, do u get it, he gripped her arm more tightly..(this time)
Geet- you can ignore me?
Maan- what type of question is this, i can easily ignore you (he said with a smirk on his face)
Geet- so it would be easy for u to ignore my poems too right?, so ignore them too but i will send them.. after hearing geet that smirk was wiped off from his face...
Maan- don't u understand a simple thing ..
Geet- i very well understand it as its simple for u ignore me it would be more simple for u to ignore my poems..
Maan- u know what ! talking to u is wastage of time , it would be better to block ur number..
Geet- i will buy a new sim..
Maan(angrily)- then i would change my own number!
Geet- i will get that number, that's not so hard for me, vicky and even dadima can easily give me that number... and if u plan to change it again then i would suggest for businessmen like u its not good to change his number again n again ur clients will not like it, haina?(now smirk was transferred to her face)
Maan- ahh! don't u understand i don't love u! loving u is far i don't even know u properly! and i m sure u also don't know me personally then how come u love u me!
Geet- that i don't know why i love u but being with u gives me a special feeling its kind of ...ahh i don't know something undefined , don't u feel the same.. Maan was surprised to hear her, her thoughts were so similar to him he too feel same whenever he look at those eyes and at this moment he is feeling same , the same undefined emotion in her eyes, he was lost in them..


He was brought back from his world of eyes with geet words..
Geet- u say u don't know me and even i don't know u personally, right? , so let's get to know each other(she said happily)
Maan- i'm not interested in knowing u, get it! and i'm warning u ,don't send me those poems again and end ur this 7 years old love here only and forget me, he harshly left her and glared her..

At the same time Nishi was searching Geet in Hall along with cursing vicky- what was the need for asking couples to come on dance floor this early, idiot vicky can't he wait for few more minutes i would have been back after attending call but no , till date he haven't done anything which is in my favor, ahh now where i search geet and plus who dimmed this lights, nishi stop! ur itelligence level have also dropped its that vicky's party so he is the one responsible for doing this too...
In tension she was roaming in whole hall but was not successful in finding geet when suddenly she collided with someone ahhh! and it was none other than Vicky.. Miss. nerdy be careful he suggested
Nishi- shut up u idiot and where is Geet?
Vicky- cool down miss.nerdy why getting so hyper she must be dancing with someone and enjoying herself , why u getting so hyper?
Nishi- u really think she would be dancing with someone? She glared him..
vICKY- Oh Yeh i forget, she is not that bold types anyways she must be enjoying while looking at other couples so stop worrying about her , let's have dance , today i don't have anyone and u look free too let's have dance, he offered his hand..
Nishi(dangerously glared him), Vicky- what!, u don't wanna dance its okay.. but she didn't stop her glaring session okay okay let me announce her name , she have to sing also and stop glaring and come with me..

Both Vicky and Nishi reached at stage..
Vicky- hello, everyone sorry to disturb ur lovely moment but we have a special guest who want to mesmerise you all with her lovely voice, and she is my friend Geet Handa, i would request Geet Handa to come on stage, so geet wherever u r please come on stage..

THis announcement brought Maaneet from their eyelock session, and brought them back in real world, they again heard vicky announcing Geet's name..
Maan- u sing??
Geet(st)- oh babaji with maan i forget everything, i have sing too, babaji please give me ur blessing , hope i don't do any blunder(she was talking to her babaji in her usual style i.e. by looking up) Maan shook his head while looking at her..
Maan(st)- whenever i ask her anything she never answer quickly..
Geet(looked at him)- i was going to sing for dadima but now i will sing for u..
Maan- u don't have to, i'm not interested to hear u..
Geet- but i'm interested to make u hear my inner thoughts..

There on stage Nishi was getting more worried now..
Nishi- vicky where is geet, have u invited kidnappers too??
Vicky looked at her with the expression of r u serious and again announced Geet's name..

Hearing her name, geet passed a beautiful smile to maan and moved towards stage..
Seeing Geet coming towards stage Nishi was relieved, here she is! geet now stage is all urs, have it
Geet gave a nervous smile to him, Nishi move to say something to geet but vicky stopped her and said not now..
Geet, which song will u sing, tell me so that i can insturst the musicians to play according to it , Geet told her song to him, hmm interesting , okay! All The very Best!, vicky wished her and along with Nishi stepped down from stage...
Geet nervously held the mike and said- hello everyone, i'm going to sing a song, hope u all enjoy it..
Geet eyes were searching for Maan , and it seems that he too heard it and came infront of stage, though lights were still dim but geet can easily recognize her maan , right!
and she started...


Na tum hamen jaano, na hum tumhen jaane...
Magar lagtaa hai kuch aisaa meraa humdum mil gayaaa...
(You do not know me, I do not know you..
Yet somehow I feel as if I have found my soul mate..)

Hearing her lines maan know she is talking about their recent conversation..


Yeh mausam yeh raat chhup hai...
Woh honton kii baat chhup hai..
Khamoshii sunaanii lagii hai dastaan...
nazar bangayi hai dil ki zubaan...
(These surroundings and this night are quiet
Those words on our lips are quiet
The silence has begun to tell a story
Our glances have become the language of our hearts)

these lines were depicting their current situation, though right now they are not talking with words but their eyes have found a new language to talk with each other...




Mohabbat ke mod pe hum...
Mile sab ko chhoDke hum...
DhaDakhte dilon ka leke yeh caravaan...
Chale aaj donon jaane kahaan..

(At the crossing of love
We met and left everything behind
We took our beating hearts with us on this caravan
Let us go together today, I don't know where)

It was Geet's dream to be with him always, and go far away from this world..., from these words she conveyed her message to Maan, but he ignored her and broked the eyelock which was continuing from the time when geet started her song..
leaving her eyes , geet bare arms caught his attention which was giving him prove of how he manhandled her as his fingers have now left their imprints on her both arms , upper portion of her white arms were now red because of his tight hold, she was wearing a sleeveless gown for today's party so marks were clearly visible to him, maan regretted his actions, this girl is crazy for once she didn't utter that she was in pain.., in regret he left from there..


Geet saw him going away and felt bad and ended her song with last words...



Na tum hamen jaano, na hum tumhen jaanen...


Magar lagtaa hai kuch aisaa meraa humdum mil gayaaa...







after writing this part i'm quite nervous, hope u all like it..
now waiting for ur reviews ...

criticism and suggestions both are welcome!
thank you for spending ur valuable time in reading it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous update dear, wow great choice of song👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic and Vibrant Update

Geet finally telling Maan how she loves him from seven years
while he tells her to stop with her poems but she is adamant that she will send him even if he does stop her
Once Again Geet has been rejected but this time Maan is thinking her as the girl Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update
maan is not ready listen geet saying she love him from past 7 years
geet choose perfect song
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Posted: 10 years ago
fentastic n lovely update waiting for next asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved maaneet conversation and song was perfect !, good selection!
loved it allot
update next part soon!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan again rejected her but this time he thinks
she is sam but maan don't know y her poems effecting
him he told her to stop sending him but she denies
geet sing song in party and maan knows she singing
these lines fr him
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsum update.. maaneet conversation r so cute.. finlly geet says to him hw much she loves him frm 7 yr but maan again reject her but he thinks she is sam .. geet sing a song for him.. maan plz saw her face..

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