Depth Of Love -maaneet ff- Thread 2!!!Updated Part 36- Pg 34 - Page 9

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Part - 30

Geet left for her room and cried hard...Her phone was continuously buzzing ...she tried to control her hiccups and took the call

geet tum theek to ho...maa baba ne kuch kaha to nahi

maan..ye sab kya ho gaya,maa baba bohot pareshan hai...ab kya hoga

geet don worry , mai baba se baat karunga,wo sab samajh jayenge...pls don't cry jaan

She was no where near stopping

Listening to geet cries and helplessness...he clinched his fist ,he just wanted to kill that bas***d who told darji abt them.

Its not acceptable anymore...since childhood they are just sacrificing ..No complaints ... but he was loosing his calm now...

GEET i said stop crying ...will you...he shouted angrily to her..

geet constricted in fear ...

just stop fearing ppl ,why we were hiding frm others in the first place ,,its my mistake,i should have told baba sab kuch,shouldnt have listen to you..aaj ye sab hota he nahi...its my miskate and now
i will correct it..bus you have taken too much.

Geet was quietly listening to him,her heart was pounding soo fast ,she knew what is going on in his mind ,he will meet baba and try to convince him and geet was fearing his encounter with baba...

If baba willl say something which instigates maan then what will happen...she believes maan but in anger if he will say something to baba .

Phirr kya hoga ...babaji...she thought

This will be the situation where she will either have to hurt maan or baba

she was soo afraid of it!! she can never do this...to choose between maan and baba...

maan aap baba se nahi baat karenge..appko meri kasam hai

I am outside your house and will not leave without meeting baba..

she moaned helplessly...nahi maan plsss abhi nahi ...

when her room's door was pushed harshly and supriya entered...

her phone slipped from her bed and fell somewhere on bed ..

supriya's eyes were red and tired..

she took geet's hand and kept it on her head: tell me the truth ,what is your relationship with him...

she didnt knew how to speak such shameful words to her daughter ,but she has to ask for the sake of safety of geet..

Is he forcing you phsically geet,tumhare aur uske beech me

supriya couldnt complete the sentence..

geet didnt knew what her mother was trying to ask,After yesterday night she knew there is something more to this relationship but what was that she was not very clear..

looking down geet was in deep thought ...

maan heard every single word from her mother loud and clear...and geet's speechlessness..he was soo embarassed and felt so low when geet and her mother were in this situation because of him..

Room was quiet ,there was pindrop silence ...he could hear supriya's painful cries and hiccups..

A lone tear escaped his eyes...his body was numb and he was exhausted emotionally with their own people not getting their love ,he felt somebody was snatching his soul slowly and throwing him to hell..He murmured on phone ...

Maa..ye aapne kya pooch liya ..she doesn't even knows what you are asking...this pure our geet is...

He threw his phone harshly into pieces..and walked away from her house ,walked away from his geet ,from her maa baba...as far as he could...geet's speechlessness made him so scared..he cannot face her, he thought, if supriya made her feel all negative about those feelings she was just learning.Now it was not in him to meet eyes with her maa baba or even geet. He was not sure what geet will answer them...but with supriya asking her like this...it sounds so wrong...

Geet removed her mother's hand on her forehead and held it in both her palms pressing,she confidently answered without loosing her eyes contact with supriya..

maa, like krishna(GOD) is to you, Maan is to me..
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she took a deep breath and said
I just know one thing maa and that is he never forced me into anything ...he can do nothing wrong to me...

geet had soo much trust and respect in her voice for maan...

Supriya felt so timid nd small beside their colossal love getting her answer..what was she thinking when she asked this to geet..
it was not any ordinary relationship they had, she was so wrong,she felt ashamed of herself ,she covered her mouth with her pallo and left saying sorry to geet..
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Geet tried calling maan number of times but it was not reachable..her eyes gave away waiting for him,she thought may be maan accepted her pleas and decided otherwise and he didn't came

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Next morning supriya woke her up and asked her to start packing as sachin was not ready to stay in this house for even a day..geet was scared to see all hullabaloo in house...all bags packed ,sachin was on phone with his friend...doing all arrangements for their stay ..Vinod requesting sachin to think over it again,but this time sachin was sure what he has to do and that was to take her daughter and wife away from this place..

Geet was upset to leave her House where she had such bful memories of her chilhood ,with maa baba and maan..

Maan didn't called her since last night which was very strange,she wanted to let him know that she is coming to delhi,she kept trying in between to no success.His not calling her and phone going unreachable was bothering her .



Part 31 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4398527/depth-of-love-maaneet-ff-thread-2-updated-part-36-pg-34?pn=20
Edited by varshr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sad part. Maan wanted to talk to Geet's parents but she asked him not to. Maan misunderstood her silence and without listening to her reply went from there. Hope no mu between them now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
omg. god why geet didn't u speak before maab left
oh no maan left hope he return before its too late
I'm having bad feeling
plz don't separate maaneet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooops maaneet
Maan please pick d call again seperation

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