Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

superb part.. maaneet first meeting lovely .. maan thought she was a small, poor geet she was angry.. waiting for next part

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Commelina

@Commelina

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: spoorthi28
Hay Babaji ye kya bol rahi hai writer sahiba
The entry of hero in the next part!😲

Kya maan hero nahi hai😡

Lekin intro me tho a boring geet was married to a robotic maan nahi??😕

Jitna acha update utna hi confusing note🤔

Finally sara wedding wala jhemela done!"phew"

Nice first meeting

Waiting for the next!

Spoorthi dear do not worry so muc.
Maan is our hero.
By the note i meant ki we will meet Maan of the present. The updte that you read was of Maan and Geet 8 yrs ago.
Sorry for the confusion.:|
I can see you really hate weddings.:D

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

amazing update their meeting geet found him very borning but he helped her with ice cream aww liked the name Ms.Chubby cheeks geet got angry really maan thought she is a baby is it seven years they got married or their meeting loved the part thnx 4 update

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

NICE PART... GEET DOING SOO MUCH FOR FAMILY... BUT AT THE END ONLY GET HUMILATION IN RETURN...

JUST LOVE THE WAY... MAAN TEASE GEET... MS CHUBBY CHICKS... 😃 😃

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Read at one go nd its very interesting to read . Maaneet r married. Journey to become maaneet is vry interesting nd intriguing

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Nice part C

So geet did remb her nd maan's 1st meetng nd recald it😃

He is dev's younger bro though geet cald him by his bt sm stupid chachi made her 2 cal him bhaiya nd ofcource geet didnt wantd 2 cal him bhaiya thank god👍🏼

Nd maan just cleard dat he can also tease a person 4 ef Ms.chubby cheeks😆

Waitng 4 d nxt part C update soon

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neel11

@neel11

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Nice waiting for the next update

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Commelina

Spoorthi dear do not worry so muc.
Maan is our hero.
By the note i meant ki we will meet Maan of the present. The updte that you read was of Maan and Geet 8 yrs ago.
Sorry for the confusion.:|
I can see you really hate weddings.:D

Flashback maan

Present wala maan

I suggest u being the writer don't distinguish the character so much that it becomes confusing!

Sweety maan tho maan hai... even if it's ur comments or notes we readers take it all seriously!🤣

Chalo waiting for the next update. ..😊