Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Like it for keeping it simple.
It touches your heart somewhere.

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

lovely update so geet on her way to channis wedding something gonna happen but geet is unaware of it on the journey met a sardarji who had admitted his son in medical college that hit geet and her parents nerev it seems there is no way to escape the past they reached their destination where she was welcomed by her family geet enjoyes her time with her family and was happy that her decision to come to the wedding was right afterall

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

lovely upadte geet is a simple girl which her cousin always noticed she wanted to give her beauty tips but kbows its useless as geets simplicity is her beauty geet went to gurudwara and felt peaceful mohindars bro is so cunning he first made him agree for geets marriage and then asked her hand for his son whos is a rotten egg and would never suffice for geet but he lied that geets alliance has been fixed with maan who is her naintaras di bil maan bhaiyaa hayyee geet in fix and shocked as she had no idea cursing herself and her life again

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Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Just started reading your story. Its different and i have to say it has made me curious to know what will happen to Geet. Will she be able to put aside the heartache she has gone through for failing the test for the fourth time and as a result losing her self belief and hope of achieving her dreams. And yes our dreams aren't always just our own. They impact our loved ones too who go through the same emotional roller coaster with us.

It is very hard to pick yourself up after losing a bit of your self confidence but it seemed like she had managed to try and get herself back to a shadow of her former self and now she's had the shocking news of marriage with Maan whom she has always thought of as a brother in law.

Waiting to read Maans introduction and his point of view.

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ReelyROSExx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

I just lovee u r way of writing

waiting to see what s in store for Geet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

part 3-felt like crying for geet she lied to that man poor girl didnt get over from that so they r now in hp to attend her cousins marriage she is also enjoying there atlast there is a smile on her face

Edited by Drashtilove - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Part 4 -lovely update it feels nice to see geet happy she even greatful that her father fogot about her wedding but those elders r surely going to convince mohinder about her marriage nice part

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

nice parts thnx 4 pm

Edited by Drashtilove - 10 years ago

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

very nice

story is with many different angles

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

hi thanks 4 da pm! wonderful updates! Well written! Geet gng 2 HP 4 a wedding! she enjoys n this makes her pain! so Maan n Geet's marriage fixed! update soon

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