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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 6 : Promotion Ki Barfi

He typed furiously on his keyboard as a white squared box of sweets sat on his workdesk mocking him. The sweet taste still lingered on his tongue as the muscular organ rolled in his mouth removing the bits of barfi that were stuck in the crevices of his molars.
A little while ago Shiv Saxena his new boss and ex junior had come to his cubicle leaving the confines of his air conditioned cabin to just present him a box of sweets.
And his first statement had been ,'how are you guys working without an ac?'
'The same way you had been working until yesterday.', he had replied.
That had made his mouth shut and he had come straight to the point.
Saxena had mentioned that he had wanted to hand the sweet box personally to him. After all there had been a time when Saxena had worked under him. After 15 minutes of bragging about his responsibilities and work load Saxena had made his way back to his cabin but not before thursting one of the barfis in his mouth.

Shiv saxena or Sanki Saala as he was known among his collegues had been very recently granted a generous promotion.
From a mere junior architect he had jumped to the post of Senior Head Architect of the department.
The same post for which he himself , Maan Singh Khurana had been working his arse off for the last one year.
And quoting Saxena this sweet box was 'Promotion Ki Barfi'. The treat of his success.
Two days ago when his Cheif Hari Sadu had called the team members of Kashi Dam Project for a meeting , he had walked into the conference room with heightened hopes and a heart drumming against his rib cage in rapid and loud manner.

The Kashi Dam Project had been a milestone for the company as well his own career.
Being one of the finest and skilled architects , he had been appointed as the team leader of the project.
There had been expectations from him.
And so he had worked tirelessly.
Many a nights sleep had been sacrificed. And many meals had been skipped for he had been busy working.
The hard work had bore fruits.
The project had been a tremendous success. It had reaffirmed the roots of the company in the Construction field.
The stock exchange market witnessed a sudden leap in the value of the shares of DLF Company. New projects and deals had flowed in owing to his and his team members hard work.
Success parties had been thrown and there had been talks about his talent and capabilities.
Among all this occurences his heart had secretly desired for a promotion and rise in his pay.
The Chief had unreservedly sang his praises and whenever their paths crossed he would pat his back and say, 'Khurana you are an asset to our company.'
Seeing the attitude of Chief he along with many of his staffs had come to believe that it was only a matter of time when Maan Khurana would be the Head Architect.

So it had been quite a blow when the Chief standing behind his leather chair , his hands resting on the top of the chair had announced, 'Ladies and gentlemen i take this oppurtunity to inform that Mr. Shiv Saxena would be the new head architect.'
With fisted hands , his nails leaving crescent shaped marks on the soft skin of his palm , he had watched the Chief shake hands with Sanki Saxena and also seen the shocked expressions of his co members.
But more than being shocked he had been hurt.
Cheated and Betrayed .
These were the two primary emotions he had felt at that moment.
In front of his own eyes he had seen his hard work go in vain.
His ego had also suffered a blow.
Sanki Saxena had minimal knowledge of architecture. He couldnt distinguish between buildings of Victorian or Elizabethan age. God knows how and from where had he acquired his degree. But it was a universal fact that man was an inefficient fool.
All he knew was to find faults and flatter higher officials.
He sighed mentally. Wasnt the skill of flattery one of the biggest and most coveted art in the corporate world. Whoever knew the art , his road to success was smoother.
With a throbbing head he had felt like leaving the meeting then and there itself. However he had not.
A man of control , he had not let his smile falter even if the pain that emanated in his heart was unbearable . He had congratulated that insufferable man and had patiently waited for the meeting to get over .
Continued below
Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago
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He was lost in his thoughts when someone tapped on his back .
He turned on his revolving chair to find his friend cum colleague Sameera Rawat sitting on a chair belonging to next cubicle with a milton tiffin box in her hand.
'Maan Yaar kitna kaam karoge? Its lunch time ! Wont u eat?'
'No. I dont feel like going to canteen.'
'Then dont go. Atleast help me finish my lunch. Roti sabzi hai. I cooked myself. Khaoge?'
He looked at the expectant eyes of his friend.
'Kis cheez ki sabzi hai? Karela(bittergourd) ?'
'Huh? Tumhe karela pasand hai?'
'No. But just now i had something excessively sweet and need something bitter to neutralize it.'
'Bhindi ki sabzi. Haan achaar ( pickle ) bhi hai . Chalega?'
'As long as it is not sweet sab chalega.', he said taking a morsel of roti with bhindi sabzi and achaar and putting in his mouth.
'Wow ! Ye tumne banaya? '
He saw her blush and then nod her head.
He pushed his chair back and stood up asking , ' Going to fetch coffee for myself. Want one?'
'Nah. I am a green tea person. '
While he was about to turn she called him ,' Vaise Maan tumne aisa kya meetha khaya ki karele ki jarurat pad gyi?'
'Promotion ki Barfi ! Tujhe nhi mili kya?' he chuckled
'Mili toh thi par khayi nhi. Extra calories you know ' , she said winking at him.
'Ofcourse i know Ms. Health concious.', he said walking away from his cubicle to the coffee machine.
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Thankyou for your likes and comments. I cannot thank you people enough for such support and love.
Old readers thanku for the constant support while a very warm welcome to the new ones.
Despite the fact that there are very few maaneet scenes in the whole story till now you still continue reading and liking it. A sincere thank you for such support.
I have the rest 3 chps written after which we will have only Maan and Geet scenes. Yes within these 3 chps Maaneet get married and start their life of dreams and desires in Delhi.
Few infos
The above chp : Maan works in Delhi.
Age : Maan 25 yrs and Geet 21 yrs
when they met at Nt and dev's marraige Maan was 18 and Geet 14 .
I would request u to give weightage to each chap for every scene here is written keeping in mind their future .
Enough of my blabbering.
Precap :
'Maan tumhari shaadi pakki kar di hai hamne ?"
'WTH ! I have no plans of marraige '
...
'Ek baar mil lo ladki se. Tum toh jaante bhi hoge Geet ko . Mile toh the.'

'Geet? kaun geet ?'

So i leave you here.
Apna khayal rakhna.
Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update on its way
Hello frds !
This is to tell u that i am loving all your comments. But due to busy schedule unable to reply so i hope you do not mind. And because of similar reasons i am unable to send pms.
I do read every comment and will soon reply when work load lightens.
Happy reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely Update

Maan has worked very hard and deserved the promotion but seems
someone else that is not even deserving of it got it
Maan should try harder and open up his own construction company or get into another company , Sameera also works with Maan and seems like they are good colleagues but she blushed when he said the food isgood and asked if she cokked it does she like him in any way

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan work hard but promotion got to another one. Right name for him. Came to insult maan n he himself got insulted by maan words. So Sameera is maan friend. Precap interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update again.. Can't wait for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update.. so sad to see maan hurt because of promotion thing.. waiting for net part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hari Sadu 😆 Maan surely needs to contact Naukari.com...
but that
's the reality at many places, flattery weighs more than hard work..
Maan is hurt, not only his hard work did not pay off but unfair to him someone else got the promotion for his efforts..
so Sameera is his colleague, who seems to like him..
wonderful update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aha...dreams to become a doctor !
I can totally relate. I wasnt able to crack aipmt in the frst attempt.
Lot of pressure and emotional drama.
Good job!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Promotion ki barfi+ karela...

nice part...

cant wait for nxt part...

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