Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Fab updates C

Geet is gong 2 attend her cousin's weddng nd it hlpd her 2 xm out of her depression😊

Geet got proposal 4m choydharys 4 their son gurmeet bt geet's dad knw abt so cald bhola baala gurmeet so gurmeet ka patta cut😆

Nw cms our hero Maan Singh Khurana haayee

Hw can geet cal him bhaiyaa 😲

So geet's marriage is fixd wit maan hv 2 c hw much truth is in dis news ill be waitng 4 d nxt part C update soon😃

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Downhill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

lovely update..i love the way the story is progressing n geet's character is very realistic

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Shraddha Sinari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

MAAN BHAIYA... LOL @=@

BOTH THE PARTS WERE FABULOUS... DESTINY MADE BOTH OF THEIR RISHTA...

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Susmitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Hi first I want to thank u PM. Sorry for not commenting for last 2updates.n thanks but being with me n sending PMs. I liked this. Story is really progressing well n realistic. I liked how Geet character is changing. N waiting for Maan entry.

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annirogc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

superb parts.. geet family going to hp for marriage function.. atleast her mood was changed.. rumours spread that geet was going to marry maan.. poor geet she was sad.. omg geet was calling maan bhaiyaa.. waiting for next part

Edited by annirogc - 10 years ago

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Awesme updates
really liking dis story..
Update next soon

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raven1992

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

great update from maan bhaiyya to maan going to be a long journey

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Part 3

Lovely Update

Geet and her parents are on the way to Hoshiapur and while been in the train and elderly man comes and sit next to Geet talking about his son been in medical school and Geet realizes that with herself her parents too were dreaming of her future and they too must be in pain .
when the man asks Geet what she is doing she lies and says she is doing 1st year MBA .
they have reached the Handa Haveli and all are happy to see them so questions start pouring in

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Chapter 4

Awesome Update

Mr and Mrs Choudhary are sad that Geet cannot marry their son
as she has to marry with Maan and here Geet calls him Bhayia while Rajji tells her to stop calling him bhayhia as they will be husband and wife now what will happen as Geet's father just said that to Mr Choudhary

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Commelina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: susm
Hi first I want to thank u PM. Sorry for not commenting for last 2updates.n thanks but being with me n sending PMs. I liked this. Story is really progressing well n realistic. I liked how Geet character is changing. N waiting for Maan entry.

Sushmita you do not need to apologize. We all have a world apart from this. So chill pill girl.
I am glad you commented .
Maan will soon make an entry.

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