Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1] - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
nice part.. waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki

Lovely ... U mentioned there's gonna be a long wait for romance.. Does it mean in the story wise or with slow updates or anytng!?

Prologue looks intriguing... So many question marks in my head... Looking forward to know how Maneet got married... And though married they r clearly not like a married couple😲
Pls update soon can't wait



I meant that it will take time for something like romance or love brewing between the charcters.
As for updts i update as soon as i write the chps.And writing sometimes takes time.
Thankyou for being here ms.nautanki ! :)
I m really glad that you liked it.
Edited by Commelina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Kabhi kabhi silence too hurts!
U know the feeling where everyone tries being strong for u!

Shayad geet k ghar wale kuch kehte tho hi acha hota!

And even after all the disappointment her marriage is also not that good!

Poor her!

Please don't drag the flashback too much... varna hum sab depression me chelejayenge😆

Well written!

Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Interesting and promising story!
Just a small glitch, when she has opted for medical stream, shouldn't it be B.Sc. rather than BA? Or maybe she had studied both arts and medical subjects.



Yes , you are right . It should be b.sc . But you ll soon get to know why it is BA and not not bsc. And after plus two there are many who opt for Arts despite belonging to Science stream till 12th.
I hope the story as it unfolds further meets your expectations.
Thankyou for your feedback !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

Kabhi kabhi silence too hurts!

U know the feeling where everyone tries being strong for u!

Shayad geet k ghar wale kuch kehte tho hi acha hota!

And even after all the disappointment her marriage is also not that good!

Poor her!

Please don't drag the flashback too much... varna hum sab depression me chelejayenge😆

Well written!

Waiting for the next!



hey spoorthi ! Was waiting for your response.
No i do not plan to drag it anymore atleast the depressing thoughts . Things will soon gear up for the most awaited marraige . Although there might be a 2 -3 parts about how she ended up marrying the mighty Maan and a teaser of Maan of the story.
Thankyou for being here Spoorthi.
Part 2 hopefully will be up by tonight.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: susm

Hai C. First congrats for new story. N sorry for late comment as my net not working. Wow prolong n part1 updated. Interesting maaneet r married but living in different rooms r say strangers. Geet want to be doctor but her dreams shattered. So by ur concept got Geet dreams . Man is tired. We have to maaneet desires. Waiting for next. Please update.


thankyou sushmita for being here.
And do not apologise for being late. The fact that you commented is more than enough.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mishtypie

Fab updat C

Dis is wt happbs when v r nt able 2 clear dd exam nd all d ppl ill be intrstd abt us
Very well written abt geet's feelngs👏
Waitng 4 d nxt part update soon



hey mishtypie ! Glad you liked it.
Hurray ! I guess i have become a groupbie now. Do you see the color change ?:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Commelina



hey spoorthi ! Was waiting for your response.
No i do not plan to drag it anymore atleast the depressing thoughts . Things will soon gear up for the most awaited marraige . Although there might be a 2 -3 parts about how she ended up marrying the mighty Maan and a teaser of Maan of the story.
Thankyou for being here Spoorthi.
Part 2 hopefully will be up by tonight.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
emotional one...update next soon...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Feeling 4 Geet! she tried so hard n cld nt pass! she tried so many times! she is despondent! update soon

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