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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Jus read all d parts in a go...
really a emotional story...
dey loved bt desity parted dem diffrent ways..
now wanna see..wat dadi ll do to reunite dis lost souls...

penned d emotions of geet very beautifully di..
njoy ur holidays..
thanks for pm...
am waiitn...
for next part..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

hi thanks 4 da pm n fantastic update! well written! Maan meets his son! Geet doesn't reveal to Summy tht Maan is his dad! she will tell hm wen he is older! Sunny reluctant to go with Maan as doesn't knw Maan! Maan hurt! Geet tells Sunny Maan is her best friend! Maan take Sunny 4 pizza! Naina see MAan smile after a long time! Dadi panning something! Wt? so it seems like she wants Sunny as he is the heir! Geet's dad reveals he did come n see Maab bt he was already married! Maan say goodbye! Geet will always love him! Maan in tears! update soon

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

read the story in one go

and it is a very emotional and sad

but geet finally made peace with maan and forgave him

and she wants maan to know his son

maan was hurt at being called a stranger by his own son

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Very emotional

Maan is hurt when his own sin told he is stranger

Geet too intro maan as her friend not as his father

Geets dad came to info maan

But he got married to nandini n he came back withour saying anything

Both parted now

How will they get together again

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Thanks for the wonderful response... 😳... I am loving this... 😉...

Part # 8

Maan looked as geet went to her car, got in and left... he felt heavy... Geet didn't even stop to hear his reply... he silently said... I too love you Geet ...

he took his car and drove to the hill... he sat there hours... he didn't know it until it is sun rise...

In mansion... both Savitri Devi and Naina are tensed as Maan didn't return ...

Maan returned after sunrise... he looked worn out...his eyes were red... his clothes were in a bad shape... Naina came running as soon as she saw him... Maan... where were you... why didn't you come last night...

Maan - nothing maa... and he moved towards his room... he moved few steps... Savitri Devi called him...Maan... we have something to ask...

Naina - maa... let him go ... we will talk him at breakfast...

SD - but naina...

Naina - maa... just a few minutes...

Naina was convincing SD and Maan moved from there without eating for anything...

he entered his room... discarded his clothes and entered shower...

Naina and SD were waiting for more than an hour... Maan came down talking on his phone... yes Adi... I will handle...

Maan came down and walked straight out side... there he saw media standing at his gate waiting for some news...

Maan called his security officer... let them in... SD and naina stood shocked... as he never interacted with media... they stood there watching them...

within minutes... media people stood in front of him... he is most sought out personality coz he never entertains them... and sour grapes are always sweet... this aloofness increased their curiosity and he is followed without his knowledge... but they could not find anything which is news for them... but now they got a news... so they surrounded him..

Maan said... Shoot...

Media Person - Mr. Khurana we have a news that you met a girl in XYZ place yesterday... and had spent a lot of time...

SD and Naina wondered how does these people know ... they thought XYZ place is secure... so only they chose that place... but no place is secure from media... they sighed... they waited for Maan's reply...

Maan directly answered them... She is from my collage... we met after four years.. that's it... I was there for a meeting and saw her...

MP - But Mr. khurana... someone has seen you hugging her... what about that...

Maan replied in cool manner... the person who saw me didn't tell you that it was a hug of few seconds and that too a good bye hug... didn't the person tell you she left immediately after that... Maan counter questioned them...

Maan - I am talking to you all this coz I didn't want you to drag her in to any nonsense... I know if I avoided you, you would make stories... I am normal person like you all.. and I also have friends like you all... won't you meet ur friends and hug them... he questioned them...

Some murmured ... but we don't hide from the world...

Maan - I am not hiding... I like my privacy...I don't want my life to be on paper everyday... and I think you wouldn't publish your family life ... would you...

the person kept quiet...

Another Media person - Mr. khurana... will you plz tells us something about ur new project ...

Maan - official details are handled by adi... he will give you the details... and he moved inside the mansion...

the security persons guided the media outside... the media also didn't bother much as Maan replied them... so they left the matter... they didn't probe into details...

Maan sat for Bf and SD came...

SD - Maan, we too want to know whom you met... who is that girl...

Maan - I think you have already heard what I said outside...

SD - we are not a fool to believe all that Maan...

Maan - It's up to you whether u believe it or not... I have nothing more to say...

Maan shouted... Nakul... get my breakfast...

SD - we know... who she is Maan... we have seen you there at XYZ place...

Maan - so... he said having his breakfast...

SD - and I am the person who told adi to change the meeting venue...

Maan looked at her now... and why did you do that...what do you want dadi...

SD - Sunny...

Maan stood up with anger visible in his eyes... and why do you want Sunny...

SD - coz we know that he our grandchild like devika...

Maan - no... he is not... he is Aman Singh Handa ... son of Geet Singh Handa...she is no where related to khurana's.. nor she carries a khurana name... and devika is devika khurana... so he is not your grand child...

SD - a mere last name can't change the fact that he is a khurana...

Maan looked at SD and laughed out loud... out of all the persons you are telling this dadi... it's seems you aged speedily... coz.. as far as I remember... four years back your views on this matter were quite different... and you have no right to call someone's name a mere... they are far better than many here...

Savitri Devi remained quiet... she knew he is taunting her...

Naina - what is this Maan... is this the way you talk to your dadi...

Maan - my dadi...no mom... she is not my dadi... you might have forgotten... I don't have a family... I am all alone in this world... I am a bloody orphan...

SD shouted... Maan...

Maan - why dadi... did I say something wrong...

SD - we are still alive Maan... how can you say that...

Maan - coz that's the truth...a family is what who understands you and loves you... but you never understood me... you knew what I want but you denied everything... what you thought is only Dev... you are Dev's dadi... not mine... she is dev's mom... not mine... and Nandini is dev's love ... not mine... and the little girl she is also dev's kid... not mine... I don't have anyone in this house Mrs. khurana... I don't have a family... I have no one ... And such a person is called orphan only... he shouted in anguish...

Maan vs. Dadi continued...

ignore the mistakes...

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

awesome update. Maan finally taking out all his anger on daadi. Whatever he said is so true. no one thought about his happiness four years back and he is suffering all along.

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

nice one

maan whole night sat on hill and came mansion

after sunrises he was so disturbed he knows geet

still waiting fr him and his son has rights on him

he's a person which his own family restrict

him for having his happiness

media at door maan first time allows them to

question him he might knows they have caught

him with geet so he wants no problems fr geet

but his daadi is out class she wants sunny fab

wat a selfishness he denied daadi straightly

now he can't hurt his own son and her love

jo usse ke jeene ki wajah hai maan ka beta

so maan is also there wer he was in four years back

maan let out his anger on daadi bcoz she is wrong

and this is his duty now to protect his son from

getting harm

i can't believe they still not seeing how maan leading

his life like robot still his happiness didn't matters

to them he than right fr staying he is orphan

and his son is not he still alive to take care fr

his son happiness dislikes his family

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#298

kya dialouge mara Maan ne? maan gayr...muha...!

I knew dadi will demand her pota, and for her geet is just mere person.ab bhi akkal thikane nahi aayi.they were not there for Maan's happiness, for them dev was everything and they only think about his happiness ,where is maan in all this? he is quite right that he is Orphan, and he dont belong to khurana and so his son is also not khurana he is happy were he belongs to at least her father think happiness of her daughter he didnt dis ownd her, where thses people together never think of maan's happiness, they had made him living corspe who without any feling fulfeeling his family's wishes, who is there for his happiness?none,so cruel but so true...! and maan first time interect with media just was not wanted to drag geet in all this mess.love this update.