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Hello friends... how are you all... I am still on my holiday..šŸ˜›.. but I have something for you all... a new story... aah... I can hear sighs here and there.šŸ˜‰... but what can I do... this is eating up my head from few days... and Humsaaya will be updated only I return to India... hope that's fine with you all...šŸ˜†



and a big thank you for my Jerry... i.e., valli 30 for the beautiful banner... šŸ¤—šŸ˜³...



bhabhiji aap iss baar aap Bach gayi...🤣




so anybody interested ... only epilogue is to be written...šŸ˜‰



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Part # 1



Its raining heavily... and a young handsome man and a beautiful girl were standing on middle of the road... he said...I am sorry.. Geet... I have to do this... for my family... for dadi.. for mama...it's not about me.. it's about Dev... his child ... his unborn child and my dadi... who is in hospital... There is no other way... I .. I am sorry...


I know I promised you a future with me... but... now I am standing in a place where is there is no future for me also... how can I give a future.. I know I can't love anybody else now... but my family's responsibility is on me... and I can't burden you with my responsibilities...


It will be good for you too... we planned a future but... he .. showing his hand upwards... had written something else ... the only thing I can do is to wish you a happy life a head Geet... I wish you find someone who will love you more than me and will keep you happy unlike me... he saying the words but those are not less than a knife for him which is stabbing his heart... and they are doing the same to her... she wanted to share his sorrow but... he is pushing her away... she wanted to say many things... but no words are coming from her mouth...


she opens her bag and take something out... she moves towards him and shows her hand which is having a small box... the sindhur box... the symbol of his proposal to her... he proposed her in a unique way... by giving her a sindhur box instead of a ring... that was their most wonderful day... she asked... I will do what ever u say... but I want you to fill my Maang... ...I just want to be ur geet where ever I go... I want to live my life as ur wife even if u r not with me... even it is only known to me ... I will not claim you in any way... I just want this before leaving... will you do this... and after this I will never show my face to you... I will leave this place ... plzzz... think this as my last wish... he immediately came forward and put his palm on her lips... don't say this ever geet... I can never even imagine that... promise me that you will not do anything of that sort... I want you to live your life...


she removed his palm and said... them grant me this wish...


he knew this will be tough for geet... he so much wanted to fulfil her wish... but this will ruin her life... no... he can't do this... I am sorry geet... I can't fulfil ur this wish... this will be the end to your happiness... and I want you to be happy where ever you are... I can't do this... I am sorry once again... and I will be sorry all my life ... but I can't do this...


geet tried to pursue him for that... it's ok Maan... we will find a way to come out of the situation... I think we can talk to your family... plzz... MAAN give us a chance...


Maan cried seeing her like that... what do you think geet... I haven't told them... I have hinted dadi... long back... infact she was excited then... but now... she asked me to forget you and move on in my life... she didn't once thought about us...


Geet felt rejection... no this is not rejection... rejection will be when his dadi will reject after meeting her... but here she is not given a chance to prove herself...


geet - let me meet her once maan... let her listen our side too... may be she is not ready to hear from you... but may be she will hear from me... let's try maan...


maan was frustrated... he is being pressurised from all sides...his family, his business, his brothers death, and dev's unborn child, Dev's girlfriend, but that's not Geet's fault... she is trying to make them work together...but... with no other go he shouted... what can't you understand geet... you are not welcome in my house... and I can't take you there where you will not be treated warmly... I can see the future geet... even if we can pursue them... they will never love you nor accept you with their heart... and I don't want that... you don't deserve that geet, you deserve much more than a person who cannot truly be on ur side even after promising so many things...


Geet even tried after that... but maan didn't agree with her...turned around showing his back...


she looked at him and understood that it is his final decision and no one can change that not even her... she looked at him for some more time... he stood there like a rock... he didn't move... but she knew he is also feeling the same pain which she is feeling... she looked at him one last time and turned to leave from there...


she started walking in that heavy rain and thought... how can I be happy without you maan... you are my happiness... and now with your turning back... even happiness does the same... I know I can never someone like I love you... don't do this maan... plz... call me back... plz... she turned back and saw him... he is stood there unmoved... Geet turned and moved forward... she is walking lifeless... she has no power to move forward also... but she kept dragging herself...


Maan turned as he couldn't no longer hear her sobs or foot steps... he with a heavy heart left from there...


She fell down on the road crying her heart Out... her phone rang... she picked up and said... dad ... and cried... her dad felt something wrong... within 10 min he reached and hugged her ... she held him tightly and cried more... why me dad... why me...


but he has no words to answer her question...as he understood maan has left ... never to come back...


one week later... she left India forever with her dad... her dad left everything to be with his daughter who is heartbroken ...




Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new story...
Oh..maan Geet's separation...its really painful...

Geet left India with her dad...for forever...& maan is with his family for
Fulfilling duty

Waiting for next update... Add me in your pm list
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting storymazn & geet love each other
Dev is no more so maan fulfill his responsibility geet left india
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very painful start. Congrats for a new story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Soo sad dear... Felt really bad for maaneet. For no fault of theirs they r suffering. Poor geet yaar. Maan has obligations for family and he is doing it but geet wat for she is suffering. Hope both will be fine.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting start, eager to read the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very emotional part.. I cried reading this part. Maan sacrifice his love n broke geet heart fr his family happiness... Hw can dadi force him.. Feel very sad fr maaneet.. Hope geet merge stronger...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept...
eagerly waiting to read this story...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo on the new story di :)
Sadddy saddy start!!
Dev..i hate him..pyaar kiya, unborn baby and then he died..
and dadi...why she is doing like this
very sad for geet...maan took the decision without asking her for once
and the proposal was unique. .loved it
plz continue soon

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