CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93 - Page 34

hi thanks 4 da pm! marvellous banner! Oh no concluding part?? so soon? 😔 beautiful emotional update! superbly written! Maan js kisses her! Raj calls! Geet emabrrssed! Maan asks abt Mayan n Nupur! Maan happy! Maan admires Geet! Maan sincerely confesses his love! Geet tells him she is nt ready n doesn't love him! Maan says he wil wait 4 her! Geet tells him she they will nt b happy! dadi hears! she decides 2 make Geet fall 4 Maan! Maan out of town! Geet misses him n thinks abt him! nothing interests her! she is restless! Rajji advises her! Geet sees Maan wen she closes her eyes! rocking teaser! update soon! 👏 😊

Geet told Maan she doesn't love him and doesn't want to rush things for it may hurt him later if she doesn't fall for him. But I thought she was already in love with him after the HP fight sequence? Didn't Geet said to herself she feels for Maan?

Shocking part about the update was Maan understood her. He confessed his feelings so sincerely. He didn't misinterpret her this time and actually said he is ready to wait. Until then his love is enough for both of them. What happened to him suddenly?

Dadima overheard their talks and she felt Geet right. So she jumped into their conversation?

And where has Maan suddenly gone? Is it Dadima's plan? To make Geet miss Maan by sending him away? She is purposely sending Geet to his rooms as well I guess.

Geet is still confused about her feelings and thinking her feelings to be guilt.

I just felt bad for Maan the most. The guy finally confessed with all his heart and Geet couldn't understand him or his feelings.

But Avi, I am sorry I didn't understand most of the update. Nothing is clear to me. Why are you ending this story so suddenly and in rush?

-Sanjana!

^ After the HP sequence she put aside her doubts of him and recognized him as a decent person.


She was always PREJUDICED against him because of her childhood experiences with him

Maan on the other hand was the epitome of PRIDE (self pride) in this case

A twist on Pride and Prejudice.


She was not in love with him. She was indebted that he had saved her life and she wanted to thank him.

Through out the story she has not been in love with him. There is attraction now and a physical appeal with the kissing but the ehsaas of love has not made its way to her mind



As for the story ending in a rush, it was supposed to be a comedy

I don't want to make it a romance. Even the ending will be mostly funny not the standard suhaag raat and passion etc

Aree concluding part, so soon😲 yeh kaise ho gaya...

you are rushing every thing and ending it Aviii...romance had just started...and tabhi realisation bhi aa gaya?? 😕 comedy was going in a mindblowing way,and we were enjooyin also

Purvi see my post on previous page please

WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it

Awesome update.hope geet soon reliazes that she is in love with maan.

very nice part dear . .and serious too ... hihi .. maan again lost in dreams of having geet with him in future ... at last geet put forward her inner tourmil to maan ... feeling bad for him but geet is right at her place too.. dadi overheard their talks ... thought to help them ..i know dadi surely had some plans 😉 ...aww. geet missing maan .. and i guess started falling in love too ..lets see how she would realize her love for maan . .

..ohh ..its going to end ...am so sad .. am surely going to miss this story ..which made laugh at many times ...it have all flavers romance ,comedy , friendship (adi-maan),love ..plz don't end it soon na dear .. i am greedy for it.. ..ho sake tho start a new one too. .

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Why ending ?????? 😭😭😭