CHURA LIYA (5) new story link pg 93 - Page 32

Part 19
Superb too good update maan kiss geey and darji and dadi saw it and and announce their engagement Niall this are confused soul geet is still in shock first kiss then engagement and maan is in top of the world and dreamin and geet went to his room to tell him she don want to marry humans there also maan started kissing her and geet she don't wat is happening to her and maan told if she don't wNt marriage then affair img awesome update
Pls give me link and password for next update

I felt sad for Maan ... when she said she is not in love with him ... N his reply was overwhelming...

She just needed to realize her love ... n rajji did a part to make her realize she is in love with Maan ...

I liked the last part... She is missing him badly but won't admit to herself that she misses him ...

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Main nahi thi islye yeh word itne din baad suna tu ne😳

Ab Thap Thap ki line lag jayegi😆😆

Uh-huh Wed ko mera roza hoga In Sha Allah😊

will see😉

Next concluding part 😲
Thap Thap bolne ka mauqa nhi dya 🤢 😭

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Next concluding part 😲
Thap Thap bolne ka mauqa nhi dya 🤢 😭

Originally posted by: custodian75

Part 20

Atlast Geet tells maan what she feels. And this time he listens. He does not just hears, he listens and understand her. And so does daadi. And what Geet says is true. It is not fair to force her when she is not rudely ready.

Distance makes the heart grow fonder. Geet is missing Maan.

Looks like you are in a hurry to finish. But you can'i do that, you have a track record to maintain.

See locket 100 chapters, next one 50 chapters and now it should atleast be 25 chapters. So hopefully we get another 5 chapters?

Originally posted by: SonalikaSingh

oh god avi ! certainly the humour got heart-wrenching.

what a twist.

my heart went out to maan. bechara bulldog se devdas ban gaya. 😊😊

it reminds me the london scene of GHSP- ek raat tumhare paas nahi tha to itne sawal, aur jo tum mujhe hamesha ke liye chod ke jaa rahi thi, uska kya Geet. 😆😆😆 i cant believe i remember the dialogues.😃

ab jaldi se new update de do. i just cant bear my hero and heroine so saddy saddy.

maan lookes good in his bulldog mode 😃😃

love u avi...write soon

You literally brought the teaser out from me

i hope geet ko jald he apny payar ka ehsass ho jay.

TEASER



Answer to some doubts and concerns about the coming part being the last part


Geet was in love with Maan:
After the HP sequence she put aside her doubts of him and recognized him as a decent person.


She was always PREJUDICED against him because of her childhood experiences with him

Maan on the other hand was the epitome of PRIDE (self pride) in this case

This story was a twist on Pride and Prejudice.


She was not in love with him. She was indebted that he had saved her life and she wanted to thank him.

Through out the story she has not been in love with him. There was attraction and a physical appeal with the kissing but the ehsaas of love has not made its way to her mind



As for the story ending in a rush, it was supposed to be a comedy

I don't want to make it a romance. Even the ending will be mostly funny not the standard suhaag raat and passion etc

I have written that a lot and I want to write this differently.

As a reader you have lots of expectations from me

As a writer, I can only write what comes to me.

I hope you are not terribly disappointed because honestly spending all my free time to write stories is not to disappoint my fellow Maaneetians.

What a Mind blowing teaser 😳

nice part. finally both communicated in a way each understood the other and no golmaal😆. Geet is right in voicing out her doubts and fears. Unless she feels love for him, it doesn't mean anything. She is almost there. looking forward to next part.

Thanks for pm .