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All stood out praying for Geet, each sec was hell for them, they heart beating fast as it was nearly four hours Geet was inside but still no news, Maan heart wants to rush inside and see his Geet but he know it was not correct

Te light turned to green, After some time dr came out all rush to him

Dadi Maan: shilpa aunty

Dr smile at them: don't wory maaji she is safe all sighed in relife Maan felt he got his life,his breath back

Dr: Maan be ready to face her tantrums,hmm patting his cheeks with a smile

Maan hold her hands : thanku aunty,she node her head

Dadi: wat happen

Dr: nothing to worry maaji, te bullet just pierced her skin,it didt went inside, so we have to put sutures, dadi fold her hand and pray to god thanking him,she is unconscious

Dadi - Anni: can we see her

Dr: not now after we shift her to ICU but she is unconscious now, we have transfused blood so it will take time to react and also to gain conscious

Maan heart was nearly felt like run for marathon,he was happy tat nothing happen to his Geet but one side he is sad as she have to go thru all tis coz of him,he cursed himself for his carelessness,Anni hugged Dadi and Maan, they got they life back hearing te good news

Dadi : thanku shilpa u don't know wat u done to us

Dr : maaji its my duty as ur daughter , so wait for her, she left

They waited till Geet was shifted to ICU, at once she shifted all rush to see her, Dadi cupped her face and kissed her face, Anni too kissed her face,both are crying seeing her,they were caressing her face..

Maan just stood near te entrance,leaning on te door and staring at his Geet who lying unconscious surrounded by all machines.. his heart felt relife, all his fear,his pain all vanished seeing her fine, tears were flowing from his eyes..he felt peace after so many hours of storm..he just glaring at her capturing her features in his eyes to feel tat nothing happen to his Geet..his Geet is front of him, no one can snatch her from him..

He saw her face which was pale, her bandage on her forehead , her shoulders was dressed, and her waist were bandges where te bullet hit, her leg too had a bandage

Maan recollect how she was happy and her excitement to celebrate their first valentine, but now she is lying unconscious , his heart crying to see his misty, he know if she wake up she wont stay in a place for a sec too but now he is lying unconscious , his gaze move to te room which was full of white colour and thought how she will crib for white colour saying its boring colour..

Dadi look at him who was standing on te entrance : Maan

Maan trance broke and look at dadi,his legs slowly took him near his Misty, Anni move to give space for him..Maan sat beside her and hold her hand and kissed it ,dadi and Anni saw him and smile with tears, Dadi caress his hair

Dadi : i said naa Maan nothing will happen she came back to make u to pull ur hair, all chuckled

Maan : but i will take revenge for scaring us ,with tears in his eyes

Anni : bhai in front of her u will shut and words will be typing he he he

Maan glare at her , Dadi chuckled and kiss his hair, all felt happy to see they angel fine in front of their eyes.. nurse came and inform tat dr is calling them, leaving Anni in te room, Dadi-Maan went to meet dr

Both are sitting in front of dr

Dr : hmm Maan now u r fine, thank god nothing happen to Geet or i would have seen my hell in my Maan's hand haina Maan

Maan : sory aunty i was , he really felt bad for his behaviour

Dr smile : im just joking Maan

Dadi : shilpa is everything fine

Dr : yes maa, bullet just pierced her waist but didt penetrate inside her body, so her internal organs are safe, but she lost lots of blood so we have to do blood transfusion,Maan was staring at dr, it will take time too react as her body have to accept te new blood cells, she have hurt her elbow and her leg was twisted, but it will heal soon, she will have pain for some time but it will be fine

Maan know she is fine but she have to go thru all tis pain , Dadi pray to god and smile at her

Dadi : thanku shilpa

Dr : she have to stay in hospital for some days for observation

Maan : ok dr

They discuss for some time and left to ICU, they waited outside , Maan saw dadi who was looking so tired, he went and sat beside her

Maan: Dadi u three go home i will look after her

Dadi: its ok Maan

Maan: no dadi its already late and any how she is sleeping so u all go and take rest i will look after her wen she open her eyes i will call u ,Anni take her,Adi take them and stay with them today

Adi: ok Maan, i will take care

Raghav gesture Prithiv to escort them to km,now only Maan was there..Raghav was standing out and instructing his mens, as it was khurana's hospitals, tis whole floor is booked under them so no one dare to enter tis area even though they have to be careful..

Maan went inside ICU and sat beside her, he stare at her face..he slowly pushed her hair and kissed her forehead, he took her hand and kissed it

Maan: Geet, he sat holding her hand as if he left it she will vanish,he was kissing her hand and linger his lips on her skin like feeling her, im sory Geet im sory pls open ur eyes and talk with me fight with me pls don't punish me like tis,

He was holding her hand and crying burying his face in her neck

Maan : pls open ur eyes i cant see like tis pls, his tears flowing fallng on her skin

After some time he felt some movements in her hand..he raised himself and saw her , her fingers moving,his heart got his beat again, he saw her eyes which was rotating inside trying to open..

Geet slowly open her eyes and her image was blurred..she look at te ceiling to clear her vision,then she felt a hold on her hand, she no need to see who it was, she turn and look at him,he felt like he got his birth again seeing his Geet,

Maan : Geet came as whisper as his throat dried , tears were flowing from his eyes,

Geet saw his face, so much pain and fear, his eyes was red due to crying..she know wat would have went thru him, she slowly raised her finger and touch his cheeks,wiping his tears, her touch cooled his burning soul..he felt like he got water after struggling in desert for ages

Geet: got, her throat was dry so words were not audible

Maan : wat

Geet gesture him to cum close , Maan lean on her :scared

Maan: im nearly dead to seeing u like tis

Geet throat was chocking:u thought, if i go

Maan did't get her words: wat

Geet: If i go u planned to see mini wali girl naa

Maan raised himself and look at her to register her words , he chuckled and buried his face on her neck, he was waiting for tis thing, his Geet who know to make him smile even in worst situation She caresses his hair, he was soothing his heart feeling her

Geet can sense his pain: but u fate was strongly tied with me,i wont leave u so easily

Maan hugged and saw her who was smiling with so much of love in her eyes..he just kissed her forehead,and his lips travel all over her face to feel her..these many hours without his Geet he nearly went to his hell and came..he cant imagine a life without his Misty..he just kissing her face..Geet's face not only wetted by his kiss but his tears too

Geet : I Love U,Maan stop kissing her,he raised himself and look at her, she was smiling at him

Maan peck her lips : I Love U Geet,I Love U,

Geet : im sory Maan

Maan startled to hear sory from her : sory

Geet : im sory Maan for not listening to my husband's words,Maan gave a look, in our village if a girl craved some one's name in her heart he will became her husband and she was tie to him,Maan kissed her forehead, u said not to go but im te who was stubborn and took u along with kutty,putting both ur lives in danger im sory i dont know tis will happen,her words were breaking

Maan closed her mouth : shh

Geet removed his hands : wat if something happen to u or kutty i would have die, before she speaks Maan stop her and glare at her,thanks to tat man who shoot me instead of u

Maan got angry : shut up just shut up,Geet showed her puppy face, who asked u to cum in between haan, do u know wat went thru me, seeing u like tis, dare u do tat again i will kill u.. do u think i will live without u,Geet giggle,u r laughing at me, wait after u get well i will show who is MSK

Geet : its possible tat i dont know MSK fully, but i know my Maan,with love filled eyes, Maan kissed her hands, I Love U

Maan hugged her,but Geet winched in pain, Maan got panick and look at her

Maan : wat happen,

He was worried before she say anything he press te intercom, DR rush and saw her..nurse asked him to go out but he was not ready to leave his Geet's hand

Dr : Maan only few mins then u can have all ur Geet

Geet giggled, Maan glared and left her hand and went out before warning her with his eyes

Dr checked her and smile at her : hmm how u feeling Geet

Geet : hmm aunty

Dr : became Jhansi ki rani doing big big stunts haan,Geet pout, but Maan have nearly died seeing u like tis

Geet : i know anuty but i cant see him like tat so tat only i got te bullet,

Dr stunned to see Maaneet's unconditional love for each other, no one can say who is lucky to have whom..she smile at her

Dr : ok take rest, don't need to say tat Maan know how to take care of u,caressing her cheeks, Geet smiles

Maan was pacing out thinking wat is taking too long for dr, he cant be away from his Geet for a sec too..he was bitting his nails, Dr came out he rush to her

Maan : wat happen

Dr smile : nothing , she is fine but she have little bit pain, we have given pain killer, take care of her hmm

Maan : ok, can i see her

Dr : if i stop u will listen, Maan look at her node no with a naughty grin, she pinch his cheek,go, she left

Maan rush inside and sat beside her holding her hand, Geet smile at him, she cupped his face

Geet : im fine Maan , nothing happen to me till my Maan is there,

Maan didt say anything, he just buried his face in her neck and nuzzling her skin with his nose feeling her..his fear was still there in him..Geet can sense his pain,she hold his hair,she look here and there

Geet :Maan

Maan : hmm,burying his face deep inside her

Geet : where are others

Maan stop and saw her,pushing her hair: i send them home

Geet look at him: so u can romance with me naa

Maan kissed her hands: how u feeling now

Geet: hmmm

Maan: im sory Geet for not protecting u

Geet closed his mouth : no need sory ,thank god nothing happen to u and Kutty, she is fine naa,he felt overwhelmed hearing her words.

He bend and kissed her cheeks lingering his lips on her skin..Maan slowly kissed her forehead on te bandage , then he kissed on her shoulder, he was kissing on her wounds..he move down,slide her dress upwards and kissed her waist and his lips linger on her bandage for some time..His lips was shivering, to feel her wound thinking abt te incident

Geet just caressed his hair as he was kissing her waist..then he move down and kissed her ankle where she had another bandage for her sprain,he was kissing all over wounds and face still trying to forget te incendents which shook him to te extend

He till now not scared for anything, but with in few hours his whole body became numb and he feared seeing his Geet in pool of blood..only he know wat his heart went thru all this time..so he want to sooth his burning soul feeling her

Geet can feel his shiverness still: Maan, she pulled him to face and saw te wound , she got worried and trace his wound with her thumb, Maan u r hurt

Maan can see her worry , kissing her hand : its nothing

Geet kissed his forehead on his wounds,he look at her

Maan :I LOVE U,kissing her face,I LOVE U,

Geet: I LOVE U TOO

Maan :don't ever think to leave me i cant live without u, im incomplete without u Geet

Geet : not in ur dream too,with a smile, he hugged her

After some time, Maan thought some thing,raised himself and saw te time , he look at her with a grin, she twisted her eyebrows like asking wat

Maan kissed her nose : HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

Geet was confuse Maan showed te time..Geet then got it was 12 clock and today VALENTINES DAY

Geet smiles : HAPPY VALENTINES DAY..

She gesture him to bend wen he did she just kissed his cheeks..Maan smile,she again gesture to show another cheeks with baby face,Maan showed she kissed it..Maan smile at her and kissed her nose,but suddenly Geet thought something and frown at Maan,Maan got confuse with her sudden expression.

Maan : wat happen Geet

Geet node no and turn to other side..Maan confuse with her sudden anger,he came to other side and look at who was pouting and cribbing

Maan sat beside her : Geet wat happen

Geet: nothing

Maan: Geet

Geet : then wat i said i should celebrate VALENTINES DAYand ask u to decore te whole place with red but see where ever i see its white..i know u prayer to god naa for cursing ur fav colour, tats why im staying here, with pout

Maan pulled her : dare u say like tis

Geet : i will , kanjoos cant even celebrate ur firstVALENTINE'S DAY as per ur gf's wish, wat is te use of ur name and fame , money, always chanting im MSK MSK can do anything

Maan sighed and laid beside her : Geet u mouth didt pain

Geet : no , u go u only know to romance my sautan , but in all tis things u r zero

Maan roll his eyes but smirk: really u thinking im un romantic

Geet look at him who was eyeing her lips : only know to eat my lips nothing else

Maan bend and whisper in her ear : i know many more things Geet, bitting her ear

Geet : ahh, NSK (naughtysk),here im not well u r talking shamlessly, chi chi for tat u send everyone naa, go i don't want u,she pushed him,

Maan rolled his eyes : Geet i think tis all side effects of her wound in ur head,Geet didt get his words but seeing his smile, she know he is teasing her

Geet : kallulimnagan dd, poda, before she continues ,

Maan placed his finger on her lips : chup bikul chup, Geet just bite his finger

Maan : ouch ,and glare at her who showed her puppy face

Maan smiled and pushed her hair behind her ear : now sleep,Geet node no,why

Geet : i want to drool u,

Maan : Geet

Geet: im not getting sleep u tell story

Maan gap at her: story r u baby

Geet: hmm rubbing her face on his chest

Maan chuckled to see her baby face: i don't know any story

Geet: chi chi bad Maan how will u tell stories to our babies

Maan: babies

Geet: hmm my kutty our pets and our baby boy

Maan: baby boy

Geet: yes we already have girl baby and one boy is enough who will take ur responsibility and lessen ur burden

Maan stunned with her care,he love to hear abt they future from his Geet,he want to hear more

Maan : wat it became a girl haan

Geet: no i know just shut up and hear me

Maan closed his mouth,for first time she is talking abt their kids so he don't want disturb her and shut his mouth

Geet: he should be dido like u in look and smartness another carbon copy of MSK..then we both will became old and we will go for hm

Maan: second haan,with a smirk

Geet: no,Maan twisted his eyes..kanjoos u earning so much u wont take ur wife for hm for every year

Maan hugged her: im ready to go every month

Geet: then close kc for ever haan.with a glare,Maan frown, listen, Maan node hmm, after u retired Msk will fully belong to me and i will kick my sautan ur kc

Maan : then

Geet: then wat we will live happily i want to enjoy my full life with my Maan,Maan stare at her,wat u staring, thinking im dreaming too much,Maan node no,Yes i love to dream naapinching his nose

Maan: i will make all dreams true Geet,kissing her forehead

Geet : i know, both staring at each other,Maan can feel her tiredness

Maan : enough Geet now sleep,Geet node with a baby face..Geet its paining

Geet node yes: little bit

Maan: all coz of me,Geet look at him,he came to shoot me,

Geet clenched Maan's shirt: who

Maan: my business rivals,Geet got shocked and staring him,

Geet : u are bearing all tis and handling ur business all alone naa

Maan: no Geet i never thought my work as burden i love to work its my passion..i faced so much like tis tats why i keep my family out of tis

Geet kissed his heart

Maan: r u scared

Geet node yes: wat if something happen

Maan: nothing will happen to any one before tat i will die

Geet glare and smack his lips with her palm

Maan: ouch Geet

Geet : then wat if fate planned to do some thing like tat i will kick it ..even if God decide to take ur soul he will get confuse

Maan twisted his eyes brows: confuse

Geet: yes ur soul is here,pointing to her heart,so he will get confuse thinking whose life to take and he will run away pulling his hair, as Maan Geet is not separate soul,they are one soul MAANEET, with a dimple smile

Maan stunned with her words and her love for him, really he is blessed person to get his angel, he kissed her lips,Geet pushed him.Maan frown

Geet: yuck my mouth taste medicine

Maan: i will changed it and he again started to kiss her..

Maan nibbling her, he was not harsh today, but showing his pain and fear in his kiss..he just laid beside without putting weight on her..Geet can feel gentlessness in his kiss as if he is trying to feel her and sooth his heart saying his Geet is near him

Geet too responds him feeling his pain,he gesture her to open her mouth and she did, his tongue plunge inside her mouth..Geet's mouth was tasting bitter but he love tis taste of hers too and started to explore all her hidden places,he was draining all her nectar. Geet was just clencng his shirt and pulling him more on her

Geet was shuddering and moaning, both drown in their kiss..Maan felt she is strugglng for breath, he just stop and raised himself, he rest his forehead on her's,both are panting

Maan : why u love me so much

Geet put her hands on his shoulders: coz ur my Maan, kissing his nose

Maan: im scared Geet seeing ur love do i deserve it,burying his face inside her neck..Geet smile

Geet: hello Mr.Khurana here im sick instead of making me sleep u r sleeping on me very bad tis is te way to look after a patient

Maan raised himself and look at who was pouting..He know she was trying to make him light,he just peck her lips and pulled her on him

Geet: now say me story

Maan: Geet i know some other way to make u sleep,with a smirk

Geet: oh really

Maan : wen Msk is there how sleep wont cum

Geet : idiot wen u are there only sleep wont cum for any girls

Maan: wat to tat is Msk's charm

Geet : oh really Maan node and bend to kiss her

Maan: VALENTINE KISS murmuring inside her mouth..

Te kiss turned into another and next till he felt her respond slowly reducing and stopped, he raised himself and saw Geet sleeping,he chuckled and made her lye properly on him

He was hugging her and thinking abt te incidents, his whole body was burning, he want to kill tat b***** who made him fear and cry in pain and hurt his MISTY, he wont leave any one..all have to face MSK ki wrath..he kissed her hair and caressing her face,he look at te room and thought abt her crib..soon his eyes too drooped in triedness..

Morning

Geet woke up and saw she was lying on te bed then he realize she was in hospital..she recollect she slept on Maan then where he is..

Suddenly a lips kissed her cheeks: im here HAPPY VALENTINE MISTY

Geet smile at and showed her another cheeks: HAPPY VALENTINE,Maan frown,Geet raised her eyebrows

Maan: with so much effort i did tis but my Misty didt notice anything

Geet: wat

Maan point to see te room, Wen Geet's gaze move she open her mouth in awe seeing te whole room was decorated in red and arranged with red roses..words happy VALENTINE msgs were written all over te walls,not even a single place was seen in white., te whole place had frangnance smell erasing te medicine smell,

Maan chuckled to see Geet's expression..he love to see tis smile for tat he can do anything,after Geet said abt valentines day how can Maan let her sad, so he arranged over night.. he was MSK no one dare to questions him nor deny him..

Geet: omg Maan she look him and then te decors and again him

Maan: wat to do some one complain to babaji tat her bf is no:1 buddhu so her babaji ask me do all tis,with a innocent face

She was staring at him and hugged him kissing his heart..

Maan : did u like

Geet: i love it thanku so much..i thought our first valentine will be spoiled but u made it wow im so happy

Both were hugging but soon they trance broke hearing te door open..Geet gulp her saliva seeing three pairs of eyes glaring at her


PRECAP : GEET WAS CAGED WITH EVERYONE'S LOVE..

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Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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SORY FRIENDS FOR TE DELAY..MY NET WAS SO SLOW SO TAT I CANT POST TE PICS..I WILL TRY TO COMPENSATE FOR TE DELAY AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE..
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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awesome update
geet is fine
maan wishing first valentine day😊
geet future plan😉
maaneet valentine day in hospital superb way in hospital
I loved the update
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MAan was very scared ... He can't see get like this ...
Geet is all ok n maan be ready geet gonna pull ur hair heheheh...

Geet get conciseness phweee... Geet can understand maan condition ... So trying to behave normal ...
Lol maan geet ko demand puri Karoo
Maan can do anything for geet
Oops as khurana come

Di sorry for short comments me having xam Tomm

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