SS-We Are Family 2 :Thread 4:Last Part/Pg 71, Epilogue/Pg 77 : 31 May

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kkmouli

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@sdlife19

Badly wanna comment for ur replies.. but ri8 nw my mom screaming to have dinner.. 😭😉

so will reply later..

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Loved your comment... gosh this is wat i accept from my readers.. a healthy and good criticism and thank god i have one of my reader like you coz this will help me improve...

and as per geet's reason.. i wanted it to be simple coz every time we show something big.. so this time her unreasonable fear without knowing the truth was my target

Okie.. today i have broken record in finishing my meal.. 😛😆

Thank you dear for not getting upset because i was really scared thinking u might get upset..

Its my pleasure if i could help u out in any way possible..😃

i know comments hav the power to improve or even spoil writer's imagination and writing..

you are always a good writer dear and i seriously dont understand how could u simply shake our hearts with simple words.. that is the main thing which attracted me to ur stories.. i can never get tired of saying this..😃

Coming to geet's fear i understood what u wanna show..

finally i understood onething.. this ff is completely totally qbout maan's love..

him blackmailing geet and getting married just to stqy close to her bt not accepting maansi just bcoz he thought she is rajveer's child.. then causing pqin to geet just to nt shw his weakness his love to her.. repenting after knowing truth that he couldnt stay beside her wen she is facing verythng alone.. giving all d happiness after knowing truth.. then again got shattered when geet left him once again still easily forgiving her simply because he loves her..

The complete ff is about Maan's true love for geet.. here i am nt saying geet's love is nt true bt definetly nt strong as maan's love..

so even though i hav issues with geet's reasoning bt now i am OK as anth bhala toh sab bhala..😉😆

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sdlife19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: kkmouli

Okie.. today i have broken record in finishing my meal.. 😛😆

Thank you dear for not getting upset because i was really scared thinking u might get upset..
Its my pleasure if i could help u out in any way possible..😃
i know comments hav the power to improve or even spoil writer's imagination and writing..
you are always a good writer dear and i seriously dont understand how could u simply shake our hearts with simple words.. that is the main thing which attracted me to ur stories.. i can never get tired of saying this..😃

Coming to geet's fear i understood what u wanna show..
finally i understood onething.. this ff is completely totally qbout maan's love..
him blackmailing geet and getting married just to stqy close to her bt not accepting maansi just bcoz he thought she is rajveer's child.. then causing pqin to geet just to nt shw his weakness his love to her.. repenting after knowing truth that he couldnt stay beside her wen she is facing verythng alone.. giving all d happiness after knowing truth.. then again got shattered when geet left him once again still easily forgiving her simply because he loves her..
The complete ff is about Maan's true love for geet.. here i am nt saying geet's love is nt true bt definetly nt strong as maan's love..
so even though i hav issues with geet's reasoning bt now i am OK as anth bhala toh sab bhala..😉😆

OMG... You know in both my We Are Family 1 and 2 no one actually got the main concept of the story... It was a part family story but the main concept was about Maan's love.. his selfless love and his struggles to have geet closer and love her by either showing anger or something else and hats of dear.. I mean u are a genius for me coz you are the first person to get deeper into my story and know the real about WRF and I cant just say how much happy I'm coz this is the biggest honor a writer can have where the reader goes deep into the story..

and Yes.. i do encourage criticism but not something tat is beyond and specially criticism when some readers compare a fiction to real life and argue and the way u analyze the updates i just love it... and i would love to have this from you for all my stories even if if means u are late in commenting but i will wait for tat...

And about simple language.. I just want to make the story simple.. And tats the reason i use both English and Hindi coz at times we cant express better in English so its a must to use Hindi for me to get the right emotions...

And one request if you ever have time and have a blog account i would love you to read my First Paranormal Story on Werewolf.. I hope u do consider this request from me coz i would love someone like you to read and tell me where how I'm going with a tats story..

And i hope u have eaten well for dinner 😛
Thank u dear😛

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: sdlife19

OMG... You know in both my We Are Family 1 and 2 no one actually got the main concept of the story... It was a part family story but the main concept was about Maan's love.. his selfless love and his struggles to have geet closer and love her by either showing anger or something else and hats of dear.. I mean u are a genius for me coz you are the first person to get deeper into my story and know the real about WRF and I cant just say how much happy I'm coz this is the biggest honor a writer can have where the reader goes deep into the story..

and Yes.. i do encourage criticism but not something tat is beyond and specially criticism when some readers compare a fiction to real life and argue and the way u analyze the updates i just love it... and i would love to have this from you for all my stories even if if means u are late in commenting but i will wait for tat...

And about simple language.. I just want to make the story simple.. And tats the reason i use both English and Hindi coz at times we cant express better in English so its a must to use Hindi for me to get the right emotions...

And one request if you ever have time and have a blog account i would love you to read my First Paranormal Story on Werewolf.. I hope u do consider this request from me coz i would love someone like you to read and tell me where how I'm going with a tats story..

And i hope u have eaten well for dinner 😛
Thank u dear😛

okay!!!! Give me some time to breath and get my senses bck ... Just check your PM you will know y!!😉 I have send that even before reading your post..😃

I am simply overwhemled and my smile is so bright that my mom actually thought I have gone mad.. No one actualy gav such a compliment for my comment.😉😆😳well again its nt their mistake bcoz as far as i remember i never gave such a detail cmmnt till now.. i guess..😛😉😆 mostly my cmmnts wud be my guesses reg future parts..😛😆 rather than wat i felt abt that particular part.. i am actually more than glad that i actually got ur idea of the story..😃

Yes good criticism is must bcoz that is the best way to improve our writing and thinking.. 😃That's y i wud be more eager about comments from one particular reader of mine bcoz she mostly says wat is wrong in the update rather than wat she actually liked..😛😆

well a fiction is meant to be a fiction.. story hai toh story jaise pado na.. Yaha bhi real life ke logics apply karoge toh how will u enjoy the story.. Kya movies mein jo bhi dikhate hai woh sab real life mein hota hai kyaa!! I am talking about pure commercial films.. 😉 But still we enjoy those If at all such movies are done by our favourite actors.. Tab toh koi logic nahi doondthe hum..

Toh agar yaha bhi real life ki tarah hi chahiye ho toh isi fiction kyun kehte.. offcourse even i want slight logic in the story rather than completely being illogical.. if that is there then i dnt mind reading any story even if i knw that it is almost impossible to happen in real life..

yaar yaha hamari life mein problems kam hai kya jo stories mein bhi real life ki tarah chahte hai log.

okay i dnt want to be judgemental may be they like to read facts rather than fiction but this is my view.. i am here to read a happy maneet story so that i can forget my tensions and worries at least for some time even if the story is far from bein a reality..

bt still i expect a slight logic from it if nt completely..

so i can understand y u want me to read your paranormal story.. but let me tell u one thng clearly dear.. main itni bhi intelligent nahi hoon jitna tum mujhe samaj rahi ho.. main toh andhere mein teer chalayi thi aur woh nishane pe lag gaya.. 😛

i wud love to read any of ur stories dear 😃bt just temme one thng dnt u love me anymore for giving such nice comments if i dnt read that ff..😭😛😆

okie jokes apart.. i just wana knw whthr it is sad or kind of dark story..

dark in the sense wer maan is evil types.. then plz give me some time.. i am nt in a position to read sad ffs or wer maan is playboy casanova or.kind of evil types..

i am seriously nt in for such updates right nw.. i am really sorry..

but if there is nothing of that sort then u can count me in..😃

But again i am telling u dnt expect much frm me..

ek baar nishane pe lagne se baar baar nahi lagne wala and then dnt get disappointed.later..😛😆

Coming to my dinner.. my mom was actually in shock mode wen i finished my dinner in 5minutes and literally ran off to take my mobile..🤣

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

Awesome chapters !

Really loved the cute little Maansi and her bossing around the whole family.

The Khurana's has laid full-proofed plan to catch The Chopra, and he did fall prey.

Geet being scared, she did the same thing again.

And Maan's outburst and his questions were right, she should have trust him and with him, instead of running away.

Both were drifting away for their own reasons, she in her fear and he in his pain.

But when he decided to give her what she demands, she realize her mistakes and realized what she want in her life.

And the Maansi part was the heart-touching moment.

She played as their catalyst.

Awesome story .. loved the whole plot and story flow and background.

And once again sorry for the very long delay and commenting in a single post.

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cuteeagle65

@cuteeagle65

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

superb lovely aewesome SS loved it beautifully written the way maaneet were their kids so cute I had tears reading it lovely story all cr well written

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

hi shobha

read the entire story ..

it was nice ..specially maan's love for geet ,,even after facing so much ,he still loves geet so much ..ready to do anything for her ..

geet after doing so much stupidity finally realise the pain maan was going through ...

love maan and maansi bonding ..

now maneet had twins too ..living a blessful life ..

thank u for wonderful story ..

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Lovely ff !! The one thing that I always love about ur works and writings is the way you portray the complexity of human emotions and feelings !!!! It's just marvellous !!!! That makes ur stories realistic as well !! I loved how maan understands why geet left him but at the same time not able to accept it as he feels that she didn't trust him !! Makes complete sense !! Same way geet wants him to hate her and divorce but not able to accept that when it happens in real !!! Maansi was the thread that bound d maaneet together !! She was adorable and clever !! Loved maan's family !!! They finally succeeded in becoming a family along with armaan and adhaan, overcoming all hurdles !! I just lovvveeeddd ur writing !! Fab story !!

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