SS-We Are Family 2 :Thread 4:Last Part/Pg 71, Epilogue/Pg 77 : 31 May

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sandymg

@sandymg

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

superb ss

geet finally understood that rajveer has gone from their life...

happy to see all of them together..

loved it!!! 😊

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Awesome update
finally maaneet cleared thier Misunderstanding
and beautiful Epi..loved it alot
thanks for sharing this story ...n pms

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Wow Such A Beautiful And Cheerful Ending

Maan and Geet managed to keep their love and marriage together
while Maansi never stopped arguing with her Badi Dadaji
Geet giving birth to twin boys and now Maan and Geet both are complete and have a beautiful feisty family
An Absolutely Fantastic Story

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

I know this story has been finished but still I could not comment on last three parts..

So here i am as I have promised you to comment on each and every part..😊

Part 20

This is something which I did not expect..

I have seen people blaming Geet for causing pain to Maan and I remember saying that I will not blame Geet until you disclose the actual reason..

Now when I got to know the reason I dont know what to say..

I seriously thought there would be much more to it.. So I am slightly disappointed..

Sorry this not to blame you or make you upset..

I hope you want a genuine feedback rather than someone saying The update is nice..

I always felt bad for Geet thinking what she must be going through..

But this update has completely one hundred percent taken my heart for MAan..

He was sooo angry that he even called his Grand father with his name which he never ever did before..

That shows how much of anguish he is hiding within him..

He is utterly broken with Geet signing the papers..

At one point while reading even I felt that Geet would tear the papers..

But the moment she signed the papers it didnot take me a minute to think that her fear is much more strong than her love for MAan..

And when Maan said the same thing I almost felt like crying.

Finally he said about Rajveer being dead and Geet is confused with that..

Seriously if later Geet realizes her mistake which I think she did by now and then if she knows what she has lost still I would be sooo happy with Maneet unison but not completely..

But then that is what love is!! Right!! Loving and Accepting each other with their flaws..

I dont know what to say about Geet..

I want to scream at her, curse her, blame her for doing this to Maan but at the same time I can understand her fear and her fear filled love which made her take this step that makes me pity her..

Maan is completely broken now he left the mansion(Okay I have read the remaining parts but I am going to write as if I am reading it the first time.. hope you wont mind)

I know he cannot leave his family and go away like that.. May be he needs time to calm his mind but what I am curious about is how will Geet mend her broken relationship..

And where is Maansi..

This is one more thought I had while reading this update..

What is she going to do?!

Surely Maansi has bigger hand in getting Maneet together before I hope she does the same now even..

Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Part 21

Finally finally Maneet union..

How cutely maansi said she is going to run away and Dadaji how smartly he stopped her.

It shows whatever the problem but the elders always know how to tackle their younger ones except Maansi being exception..

I always felt Maansi is much more mature than Maneet..😆

And she has proved it time and again..

See now even how cutely she made MAan realize wat wrong he has done..

But I felt somewhere it should have been Geet..

But anyways happy to see the family back together..

Geet is completely out of her senses seeing MAan leaving her and go..

This has made a huge impact and she realized how it would feel to leave your love and go away..

I guess now she has realized how Maan would have felt when she left him 4 years back and even few days back..

On the other hand Maan even though wants to get separated from Geet if that is what she wants still want to be close to her.

This shows his undying love for Geet..

Now no more separation only happiness in their family..

Finally it is WE ARE FAMILY..😃

Oops we have one more part to say that!! Right!!

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Part 22

Finally Maan's fraud has come out..

Dadima is soo intelligent..😉😆

Now Geet is

Maansi too cute yaar .. I just love her.. How easily she fooled Geet about not going to school. That why I always say that she is smarter than Maneet...😆

Main bimar nahi pregnant hoon Maan.

Now who will make Maan understand this..

Uska bus chale toh woh delivery hone tak Geet ko hospital mein hi rehne dega..😆

Sab kuch badal sakta hai par maan ka yeh over possessive and over protective nature toh kabhi nahi badlega..

Finally Geet has realized what she has done in her foolishness and that Rajveer is not going to come back ever..

ManeetSi trio is super cute and funny how Maan and Maansi tease Geet. Now two more additions to their happy family..

Haha Geet is really repeating the Khurana history..😆

Geet wants to go haveli but Maan doesnot wnat to send her..

Obviously possessive jo hai apni jaan keliye..

Finally Geet made him agree...

Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Epilogue

Maneet on a holiday with their kids and having fun time..

Finally the end of WE ARE FAMILY has come..😭

Dont know what else I can say..

Seriously loved it immensely..

I love your work dear the way you bring the emotions out with simple words..

I never came across any huge words or complicated sentences..

But then those mere words has the power to touch our hearts..

I am not exaggerating thinga but this is what I felt reading this story..

It truly touched my heart..

The story is very simple but the way you portrayed the emotions and feelings of each and every charecter..👏

I like each and every charecter of this story.. Everyone had a role to play in this story than a mere charecter to fill the space..

Sorry if I could not appreciate their role in my comments but what i said above is true..

Finally All the Best for your future stories and I give your readers another beautiful piece of work..

I thoroughly enjoyed this one..😃

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snowgud

@snowgud

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

I enjoyed reading this story very much.Will miss this story and Mansi badly 😭 I loved the way Mansi teamed up with Maan and irritated Geet.she is such a adorable cute naughty kid.Now her twin brothers have also joined her team.Finally Maan got his happy family.very beautifully written 👏 👏 Mansi's cute antics and her moments were very beautifully written through out the story which always made me smile 😛 Thanks for giving up such an amazing story 😛

Edited by snowgud - 10 years ago

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: kkmouli
I know this story has been finished but still I could not comment on last three parts..
So here i am as I have promised you to comment on each and every part..😊

Part 20
This is something which I did not expect..
I have seen people blaming Geet for causing pain to Maan and I remember saying that I will not blame Geet until you disclose the actual reason..
Now when I got to know the reason I dont know what to say..
I seriously thought there would be much more to it.. So I am slightly disappointed..
Sorry this not to blame you or make you upset..
I hope you want a genuine feedback rather than someone saying The update is nice..

I always felt bad for Geet thinking what she must be going through..
But this update has completely one hundred percent taken my heart for MAan..
He was sooo angry that he even called his Grand father with his name which he never ever did before..
That shows how much of anguish he is hiding within him..
He is utterly broken with Geet signing the papers..
At one point while reading even I felt that Geet would tear the papers..
But the moment she signed the papers it didnot take me a minute to think that her fear is much more strong than her love for MAan..
And when Maan said the same thing I almost felt like crying.
Finally he said about Rajveer being dead and Geet is confused with that..
Seriously if later Geet realizes her mistake which I think she did by now and then if she knows what she has lost still I would be sooo happy with Maneet unison but not completely..
But then that is what love is!! Right!! Loving and Accepting each other with their flaws..
I dont know what to say about Geet..
I want to scream at her, curse her, blame her for doing this to Maan but at the same time I can understand her fear and her fear filled love which made her take this step that makes me pity her..
Maan is completely broken now he left the mansion(Okay I have read the remaining parts but I am going to write as if I am reading it the first time.. hope you wont mind)
I know he cannot leave his family and go away like that.. May be he needs time to calm his mind but what I am curious about is how will Geet mend her broken relationship..
And where is Maansi..
This is one more thought I had while reading this update..
What is she going to do?!
Surely Maansi has bigger hand in getting Maneet together before I hope she does the same now even..

Loved your comment... gosh this is wat i accept from my readers.. a healthy and good criticism and thank god i have one of my reader like you coz this will help me improve...

and as per geet's reason.. i wanted it to be simple coz every time we show something big.. so this time her unreasonable fear without knowing the truth was my target

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: kkmouli
Epilogue
Maneet on a holiday with their kids and having fun time..
Finally the end of WE ARE FAMILY has come..😭
Dont know what else I can say..
Seriously loved it immensely..
I love your work dear the way you bring the emotions out with simple words..
I never came across any huge words or complicated sentences..
But then those mere words has the power to touch our hearts..
I am not exaggerating thinga but this is what I felt reading this story..
It truly touched my heart..
The story is very simple but the way you portrayed the emotions and feelings of each and every charecter..👏
I like each and every charecter of this story.. Everyone had a role to play in this story than a mere charecter to fill the space..
Sorry if I could not appreciate their role in my comments but what i said above is true..

Finally All the Best for your future stories and I give your readers another beautiful piece of work..
I thoroughly enjoyed this one..😃

Omg.. u know wat u make me fall in love with ur comments coz i just love the way u say something good as well as something tat will help me improve more..