Maaneet SS : Baby on board : Final pg 97

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DivyaMala

@-MishtyBlue-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

That was one amazing SS loved it so much!!

beautifully written n superbly sketched charcters..

loved every bit of humours in the previous parts!! Couldnt comment there mentioning it now!! 😃

continue writting many SS, FF n OS!! Love to see ur work further!!

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#702

loved the final part 👍🏼
it had two babies, a naughty dad and a very moody mom...hehe..
maan was exited about the upcoming baby and is making his life hell with her desires for food...
a very good job..well done!!!!!!

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

lovely ending their life is so blissful they son arav so cute wants his sis geet n her hormons maan had to deal with that he had to wake up n made food but geet wanted to sleep finally their angle came their family complete loved the story thnx 4 pm

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monika

@rashmiverma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#704

sweet stry... loved it so much

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priyasree

@priyasree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Wonderful story n lovely ending

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#706

It's awesome. Maneet are so much happy with their son arav. Their life was going smooth . their romance was same like before.I loved the way maan arav used to talk with unborn baby . geet just used to admire them. Geet's craving spoiled maan's sleep but he was so much calm for only his geet.finally their sweet angel.arrives. I was laughing when geet was pouring her all frustration on maan in labour room. Perfect ending with perfect hug. It was awesome ending. Loved it.

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#707

awesm endng Roch

maaneet r blessd wit baby boy nd nw blessd wit baby gal i must say 4m d 1st part till d last one while readng ur story i hv laughd nd had smile on my face till i finishd readng entire update ill be waitng 4 ur nxt story plz do write more😃

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#708

Beautiful story with amazing end. Tk you

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#709

Nice story, very entertaining and very funny at times. Geet eventually caught out but Maan overlooks it all and forgives her as he loves her. Geet finally accepts this shocking news and also realises that she too has fallen for Maan. Lovely ending with their Aru and their little Angel.