GHSP Family FF Thread 2 Part 27 PG 53 & 27A Pg 55 28/7 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Geet is feeling lonely and wants to move on. Her emotions are very well described.
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago

GHSP FAMILY FANFICTION

Hi all buddies, sorry to disrupt you again as i said before , this is the story jannat fiction has started, and continue by Tahhir, where amature and expirience writer unite together and can write one story in umbrella of many writers.this is the challenge to all the writers to amend and mend each others mistakes and perfections, it is fun and hope someone of you will come forward and will continue giving different direction to this story...
SUMMERY OF THIS STORY

Geet's parents and Maan's parents were friends.but afterwards Sameer Geet's father become friends of Rudra singhania father of Vivaan and this friendship lid him on the path of crime and become money greedy man and started to do all illegal work and both become biggest Don of country.
Due to Sameer's illegal work Maan's parents and his own wife left him. Samar was loving his wife immensely but he cant live his business for her happiness and so they end up in separation.
Samar blame Maan's parents for this incident and to take his revenge he hired the biggest Don locka to kidnap them and finish them, and one day they kidnap and murdered but their body never found...the past was haunting Samar as his conscious was telling him whatever he did was wrong...by living this past story move forward in present.
Samar and Rudra wants Geet to marry Vivaan , and in that way they were wanted their friendship converted in to relationship but geet denied ans ask maan to become her zootha boyfriend, but due to this story become complicated and Rudra and Maan become their enemy, and Rudra planted attack on maneet and vivaan came to knew true face of his father, and he confronted him, and move on with sameera.Vivaan came to knew that geet knew his dad's secret so was not ready to get marry to vivaan, and vivaan marry to Sameera.
Sameera was in love with Maan and was his ex girl friend, left maan by realising maan loves geet but is not admitting publicly, Maan has created feelings for geet and geet also started same.they meet accident due to attack and geet and maan came back to India and Maan ask Geet for few days not go out as their family reputation was in stack,and indirectly admit his love for her, even geet feeling was same and due to that she run away from maan and her father.
leap of 5 years, geet become singer, and become famous with her bend called Hanna ...
she perform in Italy where she meet vivaan and become happy that he moved on, will become father very soon.Sameera and vivaan get marry and she is pregnant.Here she came to knew that Maan move forward got marry to one nurse and going to become father of his second child, and in accident he forgot his memory and forgot geet too. geet become too much depressed with this news
she became depressed and ...read further.
Ghsp ff- part 27 by idunno
please read and let me know how you like this update and if anyone wants to continue or not?
http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=125154451&PN=53
Read new update on page no 52...good luck

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Posted: 10 years ago
feeling bad fr geet...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 27A continue from page no 52...read now...!

Sahar International Airport Mumbai, Gone in massive facelift, I can't say I am in India, I become Amazes by looking at Airport, total facelift, just can't imagine...!
Mumbai Airport.jpg

Geet cant imagine in last 4 years so much has changed.As soon she came out her father was waiting outside, she cant control her emotions and just run and come in embrace of her father, Hi dad I miss you so...much...!
Samar, I too beta, come will go and they just started to move and at the same time ...to her surprise she has seen the person get down from car...Maan Singh Khurrana with his bodyguard and attitude of MSK, Geet cant move her eye's, it was coincident or he came for her...? she just stand there ...with shocked eye...and MSK start walking .she think he is coming towards her so she gave him smile and forward her hand for hand shake but he passed by her and embarrass girl coming behind her...hi Donna how r you...? journey was peaceful? and they all moved away from there and Geet stand just by looking at him shocked and sad...Indeed he didn't recognised her.
Sanjay has seen all this seen carnio and said to Geet come beta he has forgot you and she went away with heavy heart; as she lost chance of even good friendship with him...that is called destiny...she meet him was her destiny, fall in love was her destiny and separated that is also destiny, and he forgot her that is also destiny...is destiny will unite them again...? wo bhi to destiny hi batayegi...hum sab to rangmanch ke kathputliyan hai jinki dor uparwale ke hath mein hai, kab, kaun kaise milega aur kaise bichadega, ye to koi nahin bata sakta hai na...?...hume to bas aage badhte jaana hai...! hum apna kaam kare , samay apna, uske gehraiyon mein na jaane kitne anjaan rahasya chupe hue hai...jo apni samaj ke bahar hai, phir bhi kutch to hai, koi to hai, kahin to hai...par kya hai? kabhi kabhi ye zindagi ek paheli ban ke rahe jaati hai, kabhi kabhi ye zindagi hum bade bade khawab dikhati hai, aur kabhi unhi khwabo ko apne pair tale rond ke chali jati hai...
Zindagi kaisi hai paheli haye...Kabhi to hasaye...kabhi ye rulaye...zindagi...?
https://youtu.be/ZIqtfCpC8og
Geet's car was moving aur badalte hue mumbai ke nakshe ko dekh rahi thi...
Ek woh bhi daur thaa, ek ye bhi daur hai
hum kal bhi tanha the hum aaj bhi tanha
they enter to juhu area, and she remember how as an child she used to come here with vivian and they used to make ret ke ghar...and what not? how innocent was our life was...? she got little smile on her face...and ye lo unka ghar bhi aa gaya...!
They get down from their car and proceed further to living area, and geet said wow dad aapne to pura ghar ka naksha hi badal dala...like interior of house.
then he took her to her bedroom and she realised how her room has been refurbished..and just one word came out of her mouth mind blowing ...who did this...?only professional can do such work,
on the way father daughter duo did not talk much as Samar was wanted to give her own pace to open up to him as he knows how disturbed geet is now...he just said to her ..relax and take rest we will talk on dinner time.Geet refuse, and said she wants to rest so meet u tomorrow at breakfast time.
Geet refresh herself and went to sleep with the dream of tomorrow...?

xxx
Here in Km Dadima is sleeping on her bad , her half body is paralysed, she can talk, understand but she cant move by herself, there was tear in her eye and was thinking something, at that time Maan enter in her room with her wife and ask her she is feeling ok..? but daddi was quite angry she didn't speak and just turn her face, he said Dadi look if u wants to live peacefully , why can't you sign this paper?
Maan why should I sign tell me, so that u can expel me from your house isn't it? Daddi you are getting me wrong, I wants to open up big chain of hotels , so i need that land...?
no i want give u that land, wo amanat hai meri, main use doongi jo iska haqdar hai.to abse hume poochna nahin ye land ke bare mein...Daddi wo land to main leke hi rahunga ga chahe tum maano ya na maano...!
kya karega tu zabardasti? Apni bibi ko aankh nahi dikha sakta to mere pass aa gaya...?
a servant interpreted to them, sir. darwaje pe koi hai jo daddi ko milna chahta hai...kya andar aane du? kya naam hai uska...? sahebji uska naam hai geet...kya...daddi and maan both speak together...Maan ask her who is Geet dadima? tumhari personal assistance?,
xxx


To be continue...!

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

Geet coming back to India after 4 years but surprising that Maan too was at the airport but now who is this Donna /
I can understand Maan not recognizing Geet as he has no memory of her but I wonder will his memory come back
Geet was shocked even though she knows about his memory loss but to actually face the reality that he does not know her is sad .
Geet now back home with her father and is surprised also at the house

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Update

Geet coming back to India after 4 years but surprising that Maan too was at the airport but now who is this Donna /
I can understand Maan not recognizing Geet as he has no memory of her but I wonder will his memory come back
Geet was shocked even though she knows about his memory loss but to actually face the reality that he does not know her is sad .
Geet now back home with her father and is surprised also at the house

It is still continued and now screen has shift to KM and just given glance of Dadi and Maan's conversation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update geet back after 4 yrs she amazed how everything iius changed geet see maan who wals right past her dosent even recognise her which makes her sad she is blown away by seeing the house poor dadi is paralysied maan wants aland but dadi is not ready to give him she has clearly said she wouldnt both r surprised ansd shocked to know geet has come to see dadi lets see by seeing geet if it sparks some memory
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da lovely update! Well written! Geet back in India! Maan at the airport! Maan doesn't recognise her! she is sad! who is Donna? Dadi upset with Maan! Poor dadi! Geet at KM 2 see dadi! Maan asks who she is!
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Posted: 10 years ago
What is this. Maan is changed this much that he is threatening his dadi for a mere piece of land.
Geet is back to home.
Awesome update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice updates
maan has changed alot..is it becz of nina.?
Geet back in india..maan didnt recognised her?

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