GHSP Family FF Thread 2 Part 27 PG 53 & 27A Pg 55 28/7

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: priya_21
dear maine ye ff nhi read ki hai
if u get time please pm mein all update link

i want to read

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now teaser time

teaser is superb

kya wo man maan hi hai

geet is in pain

wo aaneg kyun nhi bd sakti
ydi maan bd sakta hai

aage badha ne ke liye time chahiye as she just recently came to knew about his wedding to nurse and 2 children though her heart was not believing but still it was the truth.secondly aage aage dekho kya hota hai ye to sirf picture hai, story to abhi baki hai.

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago

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..Maroon..

@..Maroon..

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

haven't read this , so only commenting on ur writing style...

u r good, start writing dear...

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

OK haven't read this story ...

But his teaser ..while reading it felt like new story is started 😛 ..

Nicely written ..

Maan moved on /? Then Geet ?? She cant move on ???

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jcby

@jcby

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Very interesting teaser...increasing curiosity for the next update. ...pls post soon 😳

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Awesome updates. Vivaan and Maan both are married. What will happen to Geet. Great twist.

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

I didn't read this ff
so just commenting on your writing style..
I liked it
congrats for your attempt
thanks for pm @idunno
keep writing awesome attempt

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Nice teaser
hope dat man is someone realated to nina past n loves her and wants her back in his life..😆

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: taahir004
Interesting Teaser

Even Geet's dad know how much Maan searched and missed Geet
now who is the man ...is it Maan

man is mystery ...and is suspense of this story, figure out suspense? about update i will not update further till i will get 30 plus like...as every one left this story only we few peoples are there to read it and no body is there to write and this story become like my story ,and i am only the writer, even you don't write updates than how i enjoy writing without challenge? teaser i had given are the layout of future story, i am not going to reveal secret of man so soon, it will take time.