MG-SS||Hold on-to me||COMPLETE||part 13+epi @pg47 on 1/6|| THE END

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Part 3 is awesome as usual

Loved all of it

Hope geet will open up to maan love them

And loving ur writing

Waiting for next

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Son those magical words for not main but for vikram who has no time for his wife. Geet went away when in the morning she saw herself in another man's arms. She is not accusing maan for this but to herself. Maan came to talk with her and expressed his hidden feelings for her. But seeing no reaction from geet, he left her giving food wishes for her life. Waiting for next dear

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

beautiful part.. maaneet both are missing each other.. waiting for next part

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

dekhte hai abb geet kya karti hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

splendid update! Well written! Feeling 4 Maan n Geet! Geet realises wt she did n is uspet at herself! MAan meets her n tells her nothing happened! bt he loves her! Maan leaves! Geet doesn't see him at all! she misses him! update soon

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

awesome story

finished all pt in one go

maan fall fr his client's wife

and geet is so shy woman

her husband not have time

fr hr neither fr his daughter

she also falling fr maan and she

confessed it wen she was drank

both have some close moments

but to not cross their limits

after coming to sense she refused

to meet maan but he came to room and told

her wat happened and he took hr leave

and never show his face to hr geet missing

him as he become her friend

now waiting

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Preeti Menon

@OmushDefo

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Interesting concept. Waiting to read the rest of the story

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

thank you for regular updates

liked part 4 so much

felt more for Maan

eagerly waiting to read how they will meet again

great work 👏

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Part 4

A Sad Update

Vikram not around and Geet in loneliness as she herself had told Maan that they will see each again and she knew he been her friend she was losing out but again she had to do it .
both Maan and Geet carried on in their lives but the void and pain was constant

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

so they didn't cross their limits...that's but its sad that they are apart...
geet's husband doesn't care and she is all alone..
waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!