MG-SS||Hold on-to me||COMPLETE||part 13+epi @pg47 on 1/6|| THE END - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.but sad thats such a very good story has ended soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...! this was one hell of an AMAZING FF.. aapne emotions itna ache se describe kare hain saare.. I could actually feel Geet's pain.. I also felt like killing her husband but he met his fate.. 👏👏👏..
At some point I thought Adi is gonna betray Maan but even he stood up with the right people.. waah.. Geet ka depression and Maan ka breaking point aapne ekdum perfectly likha hai.. I just loved it.. Maan did fell for his client's wife but in the end Geet felt for the man who loved her and cared for her..
The tiny confession bit after the rain was cute.. I even liked how you didnt make geet alright in a wink after the baby.. she was still insecure for the baby when Maan said he loves Geet More.. 👏.. I will really miss this FF for sure.. but m gonna re-read it after some time.. 😉😉

Luv Rucha
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing.at first maan was in dilemma seeing Grey's blank reaction. He couldn't able to proceed their relation further utill geet herself showed some emotions. Finally maneet become one. N geet got pregnant and she become normal too. It was really amazing journey of maneet. At the end they blessed with little doll.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely ending Pooja
I enjoyed it😃
especially when he answers Tumhe and gives her the reason ..
indeed the equation is clear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Pooja,
Loved this ff and the way Maan took care of Geet was awesome, you really portrayed the love as unconditional and everlasting. Also Geets trust on Maan was so pure and his caring, loved the way he saved her from her husband and brought her out of her sorrow.
Thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow its just awesome.
part 12 13 and epi loved every bit of it.

great piece of work by you👏

i just adore this Maan he is so selfless and dedicated his entire life to Geet.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear Mann make love to geet do that geet may feel him and he success in it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update..Maan was finally successful in his attempt to make Geet feel his love and the end result was overwhelming for him.. Now he has a perfect family which he was craving for.. Beautifully written.. Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice...finally maan got all the happiness in the world and so did geet the young naive girl...they found each other and happiness in each other and their little bundle of joy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb excellent written they you used simple but powerfull words to describe their emo what amaizing
good going

finally his true love won and broke her shell

😊

they got happines which they desrve wow amzing

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