MG-SS||Hold on-to me||COMPLETE||part 13+epi @pg47 on 1/6|| THE END

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#451

oh so sweet, finally maan was there to hold on to geet and give her what she deserved😊
i am glad that geet came out of her shell and held on to maan😊
going to miss this ss 😊

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#452

fabulous update, awesome epilogue dear

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#453

amazing update... finally maan took their relation to next step and slowly geet responded though it take time for her... geet delivered a baby girl and happy ending for maaneet...

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Snoove

@Snoove

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#454

amazing ending dear maan geet blessed with a baby girl

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Amazing story dear!!
Maan had truly loved Geet and had turned a complete deewana or shall I say a jogi in her love!!
A woman could kill for such love!!
The doctor's feelings portrayed the yearn of ebery girl's heart- to have a man out there who could love like MAAN..
Koi pyaar kare toh Maan jaisi shiddat se kare!!

You discovered an entirely new facet of a devotional love by a man...
Hats off!! You are a wonderful writer...
During the last 3 parts, I was completely focused on Maan's plight, his love, his pain, his miseries!!
After Vikram's death, when Maan questioned the doc that when wud he ever matter to Geet; that moment was so headtbreaking and tenderly poignant that my heart went out for him and all I wamted was to give him a hug!!
How can a man love a woman so much??

He kept on loving her with his whole being- no questions, no demands- simply a wish for her well being even at the cost of exchanging his soul with the devil. He had no desires for himself...

Lovely story...
The epilogue was beautiful...

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GC_TheKing

@GC_TheKing

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Lovely update. Finally Maaneet become one and Geet gave birth of a cute little baby.

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#457

Awesome updates pooja..

it was just a bliss to read the epilogue and last part..

the way u expressed there emotions in smiple words is just amazing..

really pooja this ss brought the new side of ur writings dear😊

just loved it alot..

atlast finally his pure love wined over her heart

just loved the baby part

so pure relation..😃

👏👏⭐️ pooja u truely deserve a hatts off after this yaar👏⭐️

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Beautiful ending... Finally maan's love hv brought geet fr her dark past n sanity... Plus a beautiful life with their baby... But maans love never lessen. Tks fr giving us this wonderful story.