Web of Love (3) - [Ch 69/70- P. 100] 30th April - Page 62

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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 70

emotional update!

Maan was so affected by Sameer's death that he left his home!

glad Maan went to see Mina! liked her concern!

sad that Maan blames himself for Sameer's death and said he killed him! Maan was not at fault!

so he did not go as he would see Pari aka Geet!

Maan went home but was never the same! hated that he drifted from his family.

when will Maan realise Pari is Geet!

continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 69 - Interesting part. So finally they got to know about sameer & naina loved each other but they didn't know why they died.

What mina wanted to tell Vicky about maan...maan being andy.

Doesn't tweesha know that geet knows more things about this as they were friends and geet was close to naina.?

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 70 - So andy died when maan born. He was in guilt that he was responsible for sameer's death. He was busy in finding pari.

He left that iife long behind, to find answers about sameer, pari. When mina forced him to get back to life he was again maan but he was not the same person again. And now he very adjusted to this life and found love in geet and kinda happy with her.

Now I am scared. What if he comes to know about geet is pari, what will happen with them.? Will he break up with her and accuse her of killing sameer or cusing to his death.? So it gonna complicated ahead.

So sameer's death was one more reason for maan to go away aloof with his mother.

I think if Vicky comes and shares all this --- mina and naina's letter, naina and sameer being involved ---what will happen.? Will Everything be destroyed once again.?

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Posted: 7 years ago

About your note. Thnx for considering to complete the story and not publish till it finished. It's a beautiful story and I wish you all the best for its publication. You are a great writer. Your every story kept me stuck and wait eagerly for updates.

Thanx a lot for continuing WOL. I am ok with you updating in blog with passwords.

I am already following you in the blog. My wordpress ID is "Madhuri53 / Madhuri Kulkarni.

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Posted: 7 years ago
I noticed you've updated, I had every plan to be here on the 27th but the last few days have been hectic and in more ways painful, and I aint even speaking figuratively lol

So comments on the interview, and the two parts are shortly coming

However as for you publishing, go for it
You trully deserve to be the author you desire but more so, WOL deserves more recognition
Though i personally don't love blogs, rather far from it but don't worry Avi has me sorted lol (whipped and shaped lol)

Happy birthday once again Avi
Be the Wonderous Whou as always (WW lol)


And Bing, keep telling stories in any medium possible, some people are just born to write

See you soon😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
I encourage you that go with blog and please share the published book link to buy with Author name.
My IF username is mishtikhurana.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi...just started reading your FF... Anddd you have deleted earlier parts... please upload again or can you accept my request on WordPress??
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch 69

The opening of the letter is confirming the relation that Sameer and Naina had to Mina and Tweesha.

I always wondered about secrets and how they impact people.

This was the worst type of reveal for the sister; poor her, not knowing about something so important and now never able to get her brother back either.

That helps her in opening something about a secret she is holding regarding Maan.

Vicky will perhaps now know about Andy and Pari.

Knowledge is a double edged sword; it can reveal and hurt at the same time; though I am not sure how in this case.

Loved the way you described the atmosphere; sacred and shrouded at once.

Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch 70

The agony that death does to a person and that too when it is a suicide; you transmitted that so well.

Mina not able to recognize him; he is not the person he was before. Again a wonderful way to show that change in character through the eyes of another character. Your writing especially in this part is so emotional without being teary. It has a heart tearing ability.

Again with the way Mina tries to comfort and care, trying to draw him from the past and into the present. What can I say? There is a reason to love you and you prove it everytime you write.

I am torn by his grief and hopeful by his care for Mina.

He has lost Sameer and Pari both and though Sameer is gone I want to know how he gets his Pari back but you have already done that in the beginning.

Oh what a mighty WEB you have woven Shika.

Superb riveting writing!

Thanks for this being my gift!

I am okay with romance but this heart touching stuff stays with me forever.

Thanks for updating.

Password protected blog is fine.
I am dqno1.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Apologies for the delay

Someone close is very sick and so my mind was not into reading writing or anything.

They are better now so I can breathe again.

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