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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic and Scary Update

Geet goes to the Dargah and Maan also went there he though that both Sam and Daadima has planned this but this was truth that Geet went there and it seems from there she got missing
Maan keeps on telling Sam to let go of Geet and think about they life together while Armaan goes out of his way to help Sam

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part - 47

Police ask them to come next day and they'll find abt the car in the meantime...

They track the car and it's been missing since evening and it's abandoned at some sub-urb ...

Now police also think that it's some kidnap...maybe for money...

But they didn't receive any call asking for ransome...

And knowing Geet's back ground she is already in the custody of Sam and who'll pay for her?

It's absurd and maybe it's some previous rivalry...

But Geet had no rivals, haina? maybe it's MSK, her only rival as of now...

Maan asks where they abandoned the car and getting the inputs he thinks that Geet must be in some place far away from that location...as he thinks of all the places he is struck with one spot, he knows that place well and he knows that Geet could only be there...

Maan knows what could be wrong and who's behind this kidnap...

Yes, it's some old rivalry...Maan remembers chota bhai...

The last time Geet went missing he had a fight with chota bhai, that goon, and that was b'coz of that stupid girl only...

From the time Maan met that pagal ladhki his life has been changed upside down, his life was always pre-planned and now nothing goes per plan, specially nothing goes as per MSK's wish...even love for that matter is going against his wish...

And the only reason Maan could find for all his troubles is Geet, the one and only Geet Handa...chalthi phirthi disaster...haina?

Maan immediately rushes to chota bhai's den...

Chota bhai is waiting for Maan only...

Maan: chota bhaiii

The lion roars missing his lioness...

Chota bhai: Khurana sab, aayiye, aayiye

Maan: ye tumne teek nahi kiya

Chota bhai: mein toh sirf apni mehmaan ka swagat kar raha hoon Khurana sab, aur aap toh hummare khaas mehmaan hai, bin bhulaye kabhi bhi aap yahan aa sakthe, haina?

He reminds of the last time Maan was here...

Maan: lekhin iss bar mein toh apne marzi se yahan nahi aaya hoon

C bahi: lekhin mujhe patha tha ki aap yaha zaroor aayenge

Maan: bathao jaldhi, kahan hai Geet?

C bhai laughs...

C bhai: Geet, hmm achcha naam hai,aur item bhi achchi hai

C bhai shows his dirty interest in his eyes...

Maan reads his intensions and his blood boils inside, the volcano is activated...

Maan wants to punch him on his face but he controls himself for he has to get to Geet first...

C bahi: tum issiko doondhthe doondhthe aaye the na uss din?

Maan stares him as if he would burn him to ahshes...

C bhai: itna pyaar karthe ho usse?

Maan: tummm kahan hai Geet?

Maan folds his fist in anger...

C bhai: itne bhi kya jaldhi hai? abhi toh bhai ne usski swagat teek se bhi nahi ki

He laughs cunningly...

Maan: agar tummari nazar bhi usske taraf gayi toh samjho tummara jaan tumhara nahi hai

Maan emits fire in his words and warns bhai...

How dare he thinks bad of Geet? haina?

C bhai: tum toh dekhoge ki mein kya kya kartha hoon, issiliye toh tum yahan aaye hona?

C bhai doesn't care abt MSK's warnings...he is hurt and he wants revenge...

Maan: aaj toh tumme patha chalega ki MSK kaun hai

C bhai: Khurana sab hum sab jaanthe hai, aap ko bhi aur uss pagal ko bhi

How dare he called Geet pagal...

And Maan is all the more angry that he is taking advantage of Geet's illness...

Maan realizes that how foolish it was for him to leave alone someone who's mental ability is nothing more than a 10 yr old ...

Maan knows that he has made a big mistake and it is up to him to set things right...

He hates when ppl try to use weaker ppl for their benefits...

If he had any problem with Maan he had to come to him, why Geet?

Even the gunda knows where to attack? So Geet has become his weakness without his knowledge...that's what he was fearing of and his fears already have come true...

Here he is bound by his weakness, his hands tied by emotions, stupid feelings which always make u weak, if not for this stupid girl MSK would have crushed this mean animal within a minute and taught him his lessons...but now he has to make sure Geet is safe first...

That's why MSK hates any kind of bonding...or love and affection, it sucks, haina?

Instead of making you strong these feelings make U weak...

Maan: meinne poocha Geet kahan hai?

Maan couldn't control himself and he bursts...his eyes are burning red and he could barely control his nerves...but the thought of Geet only stops him...

Bhai gets an urgent msg and he is upset...

He looks at his men and they all get ready...

Maan: himmat hai toh seedhe seedhe mera samne karo

Maan gets ready for an one to one tiff...but bhai is not yet ready for that...

Cbhai: lekhin abhi bhai ko koi aur zaroori kaam hai

Bhai's boss is coming and he had to go...

Bhai signals his men to take care of Maan and he leaves...

Maan's pressure keeps raising...and his anger too...

Maan: Geeet Geeet

Maan starts to look for her...

He is then surrounded by a gang of goons...

Maan gets ready to attack but one of them attacks him from behind and Maan falls unconscious...

The moment he regains his conscious and opens his eyes he finds Geet also tied along with him...

Geet is happy to see him awake...

Geet: Khrish, aap teek toh haina?

She is so worried abt him that she has been crying all night and praying to her babaji to help Khrish...

Geet blames herself for what happened to Khrish...

Geet keeps crying...: ye sab toh meri hi galthi hai, haina Khrish?

She places her hand on his wounded forehead...

Just then Maan realizes that he is being hit hard and so he had fainted...

Geet: bahut dukhtha hai?

Maan keeps staring her worried eyes...

She is not bothered abt herself, she is only worried abt her Khrish...

Maan places his hand on her's...

Geet shivers a bit as his touch sparks a current in her system...

Maan then finds out that she had dressed his wound with her dupatta...

And with the touch of her hand he is relieved of all the pain and he feels so warm and cared...

They are lost in each other for a while...

Then Maan comes back to his senses...

Maan: Geet, Geet

Geet also comes back to reality...

Geet: mujhe maaf kardho Khrish, mein bahut bhuri hoon

Maan: ssshhh

Maan keeps his fingers on her lips and asks her to be quiet...

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Her eyes meet and from then the only conversation is between their eyes...

Geet pleads guilty and feels sorry for what happened...

Maan assures her that everything will be fine and he is here to sav her ...

Geet knows that she is always safe when she is with her Khrish but she is worried that she has put Khrish in trouble unnecessarily...

She was so happy when she met Khrish at the dargah and in her utter bliss that her babaji had chosen her life and it's only with her Khrish, she blindly followed him when he left from there...

As soon as he vanished in the crowd she keps looking at his direction fir a while when some one stopped a car and opened a door for her...

Then she saw Khrish's car passing by and she just got into that car thinking that she is abt to follow Khrish...

Maan saw her getting in from the rear mirror and he left on his way...

Just when her car took the other direction Geet realized that something is wrong and before she could question she was drugged and she fainted...

When she woke up she found herself locked up in a room with her legs and hands tied...

She was scared but she was hopefull that her Khrish wil come to rescue her...

But after a while someone was dumped into the room along with her...

And she found that it is her khrish...

Now she wanted to do something as her Khrish was bleeding...

She forced her hands free with all her strength and she immediately tied her dupatta around his wound...

The beeding stopped and she took utmost care that he is comfortable offering her lad for him...

When Maan woke up he was actually lying on her lap and she was just staring him with tears running down her beautiful hazelnut eyes...

Seeing them deeply worried Maan himself felt sorry for her this time...

Maybe this time it's not Geet's fault but only Maan's...

She is here b'coz of him and not her carelessness or stupidity...maybe it's Maan's irresponsibility just as Sam said...

It's b'coz of Maan's rivalry with c.bhai that Geet has been kidnapped...

And MSK has to do something to get her out...

Maan gets off her lap immediately as if he had committed some crime...

He then stares Geet for making the MSK look like a kid, he is a man, not an ordinary man but the MSK...

Geet: Khrish, aap ko kya hua? Aur aap ko chot kaise lagi?

Maan: sshhh mein Khrish nahi hoon samjhi tum?

Maan whispers not to alert the gundas...

Geet: aap Khrish nahi ho toh aap yahan kyun aaye ho? aap mujhe doondhthe doondhthe aaye haina? mujhe patha hai ki mera Khrish mujhe bachane zaroor aayenge

She is so confident that her Khrish is here to save her only...

But Maan doesn't have an answer to why he is here fisrt of all?

It's not for him to save Geet,he might have told the police like Armaan did and left it to them to find Geet, but no, he is here for her...why?

Maybe he felt guilty that he is some how responsible for her kidnap...or he must be here b'coz he cares for her...like Geet believes...haina?



take a look...

Lakshmi and Priya's Teri Deewani thread...

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4453802


Part48

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan searching geet n finally came to Cb
he is angry but he tries to keep it in control till he saves her
but he too is caged
n geet puts bandage on his wound n says he landed in trouble bcoz of her
she thinks him as krish n talks to him
he is irritated but could c himself losing in her eyes
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
A Splendid Update

Maan was ferious when he came and met Choti Bhai all he wanted was Geet's safety he also did not like when Choti Bhai called Geet pagal Maan got more angry yet he too calls her the same .
Geet calling Maan Krish and he tells her he is not Krish
now I feel that after the rescue Maan needs to take time and explain to Geet that he is Maan and perhaps she has confused him with the name Krish because he is always there saving her
maybe just maybe if he tries than Geet could understand

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi wonderful update! superbly written! Maan finds n saves her! she calls him Krish n he corrects her! Maan lost in Geet wen she tends to his injuries! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 47 - so finally maan found out where geet is...b'coss of his rivalry chhota bahi kidnapped geet to revenge. maan came to rescue her but he too got held by them. he was irritated by her calling krish but stunned to see her care for him
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part - 48

Geet keeps staring him for an answer...

Maan tries to ignore her again...

Geet: humme yahan se jaana chahiye

Maan: toh?

Geet is puzzled...

Geet: toh kya? kuch karo, warna mujhe hi kuch karna padega

Geet starts thinking...

Maan now thinks that it's better that he does something before Geet does anything stupid...

He had already informed the Sam abt his hunch and she would be coming here with the police...

All he has to do is somehow keep this stupid Geet from inviting danger for both of them...

He could save Geet if he wants but he doesn't want that, he wants the polive to come and save them both, then Geet would realize that MSK is not Khrish material and she'll stop calling him Khrish...haina?

Any ways as he is here he has to save the both of them from these goons until the police come...for he is the mighty MSK if not Khrish...he wants to be carefull that nothing goes wrong with Geet for she has nothing to do with this, she is really innocent and she doesn't even know why she is here...

Maan goes to the door and tries to find out what's happening outside for there seemed to be some serious matter going on else c bhai wouldn't have left them like this...

Geet follows him and she keeps watching him with curiousity...

She is looking at him with a lot of expectations...

Maan: what?

Geet: jaldhi Khrish, thod dho iss darwaze ko humme jaldhi yahan se baaghna padega

Maan: mein isse thodoon?

Geet: aur kya? mein thodoon?

Maan: tum kuch dher chup nahi reh sakthi?

Geet: aap ko kya ho gaya? Aap itna dar kyun rahe ho?

Maan: kya? MSK aur dar?

Maan smirks...

Geet: phir kya soch rahe ho? ek laat marke thodo isse, Khrish style mein

Maan: Khrish style mein?

Geet: haan Khrish, mujhe na aap ki Khrish avatar ko dekhna hai, kitne din ho gaye hai aapko aaise dekhke? Ab toh aap bahut sadu aur nikambe ho gaye ho

Maan: nikamba? Tummari ye himmat? Aaj tak kissi ne MSK ko aaise nahi kaha?

Maan pushes her to the wall and pins her...he stares her with full of rage in his eyes...

Geet stares back...

Maan is surprised...

Maan: tumme dar nahi lagthi?

Geet nods her head...nahi

Maan is all the more surprised, even Sam backs off when he is in badmood...

But this girl is tough to handle for him...

Maan: tum MSK se darthi nahi?

Kyunki har koi MSK ke gusse se dartha aur usse dhoor baagtha...aaise koi usske samna nahi kartha...aur iss pagal ne toh sab kuch badal dhi...

Geet: mein kissi MSK ko nahi jaanthi, aur mein apne Khrish se kyun darthi? Haina Khrish?

Maan: khrish Khrish Khrish, kaun hai ye Khrish?

Geet: aap hai mera Khrish

Geet looks at him with love and she trusts him so much...

Maan could break open the door in a second and save her like she wishes but he doesn't want to project himself as a hero, as Khrish, as that would make her false hopes real, that would be like making her dreams real...that's the last thing Maan wants...he wants to prove her wrong...he wants to make it clear that her dreams can never be true...

But Geet is not going to wait for help...

She has to help her Khrish...haina?

Wah wah what a chance for Geet to show her love?

Geet goes to the door and tries to open it...

She knocks it hard...: koi hai? darwaza kolo

Maan runs and catches hold of her hand and stops her...

Geet turns and looks at him, she likes it, Khrish is here to help, haina?

Maan: tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: hum yahan se kaise jaayenge?

Maan: mein yahan tumme bachane nahi aaya hoon, samjhi tum?

Geet: toh aapko bhi unlogon ne kidnap kardhiya hai? haawww

Geet is shocked...

Geet and her antics...

Maan toh usski adaaoon ko sirf admire kar saktha, he can't ignore her completely and it's just impossible, haina?

Maan: ye log tummare liye nahi mere liye aaye the, samjhi tum?

Maan wants to portray as if he has nothing to do with her and he is here on his own...b'coz of his rivalry with the c. bhai...

Geet: lekhin aap toh mere liye hi aaye haina?

Maan: mein tummare liye kyun aatha?

Geet: Khrish?

Maan: tum samajthi kay apne aapko? Koi aasmaan se uthri hui ek pari?

Geet: haan mein toh aapki pari hi hoon, Angel, haina Khrish?

Maan ko toh lagtha hai ki Maan Khrish ho ya nahi lekhin ye toh ek pari se kuch kam nahi hai, haina?

Maan keeps staring her and is lost in her beauty...

Geet: Khrish

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai, samjhi tum

Maan stares her and tries to look down upon her...

Geet is little upset...: mein itni bhi toh bhuri nahi hoon, haina babaji?

Maan: kya?

Geet: kuch nahi

Geet has succefully distracted him and she goes and knocks the door even harder...

Geet: darwaza kolo, kuthe, kamine

She yells at the top of her voice...

Maan runs and shuts her mouth this time...

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...

They are lost in each other when they hear foot steps...

One gunda comes and opens the door...

Gunda: hey ladhki, yahan koi awaaz nahi karthe, samjhi tum?

He gets hold of Geet and tries to warn her with his knife... ...

Maan controls himself and tries to act as if he is not bothered...

Geet: Khrish? Dekho isse, mera haath chodo, kamine

That gunda gets angry and pushes Geet hard, poor Geet falls on the ground and is hurt...

Geet: khrishhh

That's it...Maan couldn't take it any more...

Even if that wasn't Geet he wouldn't just watch something like that happen...

Maan punches that roughe...and he takes Geet's hand and takes her out of that place immediately...

They keep running until they come across c bhai conversing with his boss...

They stop and Geet is abt to say something...

Maan doesn't want to be get caught now...

Maan closes her mouth with his hand and asks her to keep quiet which is the toughest part for her, haina?

Geet stares Maan and asks him to release her...

Maan lets her off still warning with his bib big eyes...

And Geet too knows the danger and silently listens to their conversation...

C bhai seems to be very happy and he wants to make his boss also happy for whatever he got...

There is some illegal dealing...

C bhai: Sarkar aap ke liye ek aur tofa hai

C bhai smiles devilishly...

Boss smiles back showing his interest too...evil grin...

C bahi: aaj ka taaza taaza maal khaas aap ke liye

Boss: hmm hmm chalo hum bhi dekhthe hai ktna taaza hai

C bahi: motu ussko lao

Motu: ji boss

Maan senses the danger coming and he holds Geet's hand tight...

This time he won't let her whatever happens...

Geet feels the strength of her Khrish and she is happy to be with him, with Khrish holding her hands she only prays that he never lets it go...


Part49

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
maan trying to get rid of krish tag
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nice update..
waiting for next update..
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part 48 - nice part. geet so much want to see her krish in action but never wanted her to get hopes. but finally seeing their intention he had to act fast and he ran away with her. hope they could get out of there before anything wrong happens.

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