**MG- OS- DO KINARE** 13/4/15

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heyyaa guys...this isnt my new One shot ..But this one i had written for GHSP ANNIVERSARY THREAD..and reposting it..!!


This one shot was requested by ZORNISTA...🤗

Thank u girl for considering me for this os..!!

enjoy!


DO KINAARE

Maan thumped on his seat gnashing his teeth..." I knew this Handa girl would ditch me..dam her..." he ran his hand through his hair groaning...

Maan was waiting for geet since an hour...and there was no sight of her.

He cursed himself for letting her go yesterday ..

FLASHBACK

Maan received his lawyer's call..who stated that in order to transfer the.land under his name..the actual owner should be present in court.

This enraged him more..the thought of meeting the crazy Handa family was unbearable for him..

Nevertheless he decided to visit the family..in evening

He parked his jeep and barrelled inside...As he made his way he bumped into geet...who was running hastily..

" what is ur problem girl cant u even walk properly " Maan retorted angrily glaring her..as she clutched his arm...to balance herself...

But it seemed like his words fell on a numb geet...

She was in a wrecked state..her body was trembling and forehead was sweaty..

her eyes.were fearful ..and she seemed worn out...

Maybe thats why she did not retaliate back ..

Maan furrowed his brows shaking his head and shrugged her hands forcefully..causing her to shiver..

"Dont touch me.." he snarled..

Geet lowered her eyes as tears formed in her eyes..

Maan squeezed his eyes..keeping hands on his waist

" dekho yeh rona dhona...mere samne nai...chalega..." he replied pressing his lips tightly...

Geet took in a sharp breath and wiped her tear...She dint wish to portray herself weak again in front of this ruthless man

"Good since u met me here let's go mujhe time bai waste karna aur. .in ur family 's drama"

Geet raises her head in confusion and next moment she felt maan's hand wrapped around her arm. As he dragged her to his jeep..

" yeh aap kya kar rahe hai...leave me..leave me.." she wriggled under his hold and struggled .

Maan clenched his jaws tightening his grip...and drawing her closer...

He looked in her..eyes..those eyes which now weren't fill with tears but with rage...

She continued wriggling under him..with piercing her eyes through his..


maan blinked his eyes..staring down at her..

The woman in front of him who was vulnerable few moments ago now was struggling hard resisting his hold...

" maine kaha leave me...how dare u touch me.." geet replied tightly. Moving violently against him..

Maan smiled slyly and recoiled his hands pushing her back..

" I m not interested in touching you..." he responded gazing her.from top to bottom..

Geet rubbed her arm..staring him in anger..

" yeh ankhe mat dikhao mujhe...tumhe abhi issi waqt mere sath jana hai...chalo.." he once again..tried to clasp her hand..but this time she dogged him

" dont ..." she pointed her finger at him..making him furious

" mujhe aapke sath kahi nai jana samjhe chale jayiye yaha se.." she uttered gritting her teeth

Maan narrowed his eyes and once again captured her arm pulling her to him..

" mujhe tumhari permission nai chayie...tumhare sath honeymoon mana ne nai jaa rsha hu..property legally pane k liye I need ur word in court...isliye u have to come with me to Amritsar ." he replied fiercely ..

Geet hissed and pushed his chest...stepping back..

" mai kahi nai jane wali aapke sath..chale jayeye yaha se.." with one last look she turned to leave..

" agar tum mere sath nai ayi toh mujhe woh zameen nai grant hogi..u have to come..with geet.." maan muttered annoyingly ..and sauntered towards her...in fast pace instantly grabbing her arm..

Geet gasped as she was hauled by maan with her back hitting the ball..

" no one says no to maan singh khurana " he whispered dangerously.

Both their faces where inches apart...they were extremely close ..Maan caged her within his arms and eyes boring into hers..

She wobbled under his weight but strike back towards him..not giving in into his assault...

" mujhe nai jana aapke sath..." she once again replied this time more firmly ...as her eyes held his captive

Maan dint respond but looked in her eyes... His eyes were peeking into hers trying to read something which was concealed deep within...

This girl possessed something in her..which always made him come to her..her charm always framed him..though he never admitted ..

It wasn't attraction to her physique or body..but her eyes..

MAAN SINGH KHURANA in his life had never spare a glance to any girl..But geet Handa always made him go extreme ...

He never regretted his actions with her...

Like at this instance he was More keen to.read her hazels than to convince her to come with him..

Both were gazing each other lost in each other's eyes..

"Geeettt kithe gayi tu" a voice came breaking their trance..

Geet gasped and pushed him with all her might and scurried inside..

Maan frowned and groan recalling his actions... the uneasiness he felt when she slipped away from his hold...

Later than day he got a call from geet...who agreed to cone with him to Amritsar

Maan sighed in relied and asked her to convey the same to her parents...as he knew they were a little too much...and he wasnt in for any nuisance

She assured him in positive and promised to meet him tomorrow early morning near the entrance of the village...

FLASHBACK ENDS

He was startled out of his thoughts with a cham cham sound..

Maan turned his gaze in that direction and found a faint figure approaching him...

He slanted his neck..in order to glimpse the person.." kaun hai " he roared...The climate was foggy thus everything was obscure..and hazy...

The figure tailed towards him slowly...

There she was standing in front of him...clad in white suit..simple yet beautiful ..

Maan blinked his eyes...gazing her.

Her dupatta was draped across her lips...thus revealing her hazels...

In midst of the fog her hazels were shunning ..Her hazels filled with innocence and beauty..

"Ji chale " geet mumbled through the flimsy material ... She was scared within but determined that this time she will find out dev...if not him then atleast the whole scenario. Will be cleared ...She knew dev will never commit anything like this...But her family 's.reaction flabbergasted her...

Maan looked away and nodded..

" sit inside the car..." he whispered igniting the engine..

Geet climbed inside the car...as due to sudden start up due to which she was startled and she fell..in his lap..

Maan held her waist whilst she clasped his collar for support...

The duppatta fell over them...like curtain

The more he decides to avoid this girl..to shove her..the more close she gets...

His heart skipped beat watching so closely ..her white flawless skin brightly shimmering ..eyes fixed with his...and lips trembling ...

Maam was astonished to find this beauty clad in white outfit in his lap... The girl always managed to strike the chords of his stoned heart ... After samira it was easy to neglect and shove every girl.coming his way...but with geet..something or the other kept binding him...

geet was the first to broke the stare...she gulped her saliva...biting her lip and somehow got up clumsily ..

Maan looked away...as she moved to her side..His hands turned into fists commanding his heart and mind to be in control...

" is ladki ka asar mujh par nai ho sakta...maan aapna kar aur nikalo..." he ranted..and started the engine...driving off..

The journey was silent Geet was lost in her thoughts whereas maan concentrated on driving shoving her thoughts...

Both reached the registrar office within 4 hours and made their way inside...

Geet matched her steps with maan following him..Her heart was churning in anticipation.. This truth is a matter of life and death for her...

She paused and closed her eyes praying for dev's innocence ..

Maan frowned as he dint find her besides him...

He spun his head and spotted her standing at a distance with closed eyes..

He rolled his eyes and mumbled " yeh ladki she is too slow " and then yelled " geeett. I dont have all day for u please "

Geet snapped her eyes open. Hearing his squeal..

" ji..aayi " she replied and went towards him..

After 2 hours maan sighed arranging the papers which geet had signed ...the formalities were completed...

" thanks." he said to her..while she just nodded..

Maan perked up his brow..he definitely noticed her anxiety ..she was constantly fidgeting...

" kya hua? " he questioned her..

Geet raised her head " ji..woh...kya mai...unse akele mai kuch baate kkar sakti hu..aapka kaam hogaya toh aap..bahar..." she trailed off..

Maan was unsure what to say...He just murmured yes and left..the cabin...

Maan thought to wait for her...

Nearly half and hour later she came back..

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maan raised himself ...as she walked outside cabin with tears spilling ..

" ise kya hua "

Geet gasped covering her mouth ..and squeezed her eyes...

The registrar confirmed that dev and sold her property to maan...

All her dreams were shattered ... The sound of her dreams hope breaking down into pieces made no noise. Yet the uproars left her ruined ..

How could destiny be so cruel to her..what was her fault?? She followed everything that was taught to her...she married the guy her family wanted..but fortune shadowed not only her present but her future too..their future...

She clutched her stomach...where another new life was beginning to form..Each and every sentence spoken by darji and brij were floating in her mind...

Dev indeed despised her and ran away with her money...

She lifelessly walked outside the office...turning deaf to maan's voice.. She monotonously walked outside...towards the deserted road...

Maan scurried behind a lifeless geet.. he himself dint knw y was he so worried about her.. But he kept his feelings aside she appeared as if someone had sucked all the blood from her face...

" geeet" maan yelled out and grabbed her hand ...pulling her..to himself...

They were now standing in the middle of road...

Maan drew her closer infuriated with her act..

" are crazy couldn't u see the truck " he uttered in frustration. Holding her shoulders..

More tears spilled out of her hazels..her chin trembled as another gush of tears flowed down her cheek..

" geeet " maan called out again shaking her...

Thats it she broke down..crying bitterly...

maan was stunned watching her cry so hysterically..He cupped her face..

" geet ..kya hua.." he sounded angry as well as worried...

Geet dint answer but wept...loudly..crushing his shirt...

She fell on her knees..and maan went down with her..

" geeet sstop it...stop it geet " this time he blocked out his emotions and faced her firmly..she quieten

He gripped her shoulder..raising her face

" mai nahi puchunga ki yeh asu kis k liye ..but mai itna zarrur kahunga ki yeh asuo se tumhe kuch nai milega.."

She sighed tearfully and shrugged his hands...continuing crying

Maan groaned and clasped her shoulder...He smirked when she gaped him with eyes blazing

" mai toh bhul gaya tum toh kamzoor ho aur kamzoor hi.asuo ko apna hatyaar maante hai..phir tumhe kuch bhi samjha kar kya faida "

He stared...her in pure anger...and stood to his feet..

" aapko kya pata humare sath kya hua..aapkp koi haq nai hi humare ansuo k bare mai bolne ka " she whimpered

Maan paused in his tracks with small smile on his face

He slanted his neck

" mujhe nai pata aur na hi mai jaan na chahata hu...lekin ansu insan. Ko kamzoor banata hai...kapish bhi musqil itni badi nai hoti ki uska solution na mile...aur na hi uska matlab yeh hota ki ansuo se Kaam chalaye... Musqil ka samna kar ke ki use khatam kiya. Jaa sakta hai " with that he turned his face

" mai gaadi mai wait kar raha hu.

Tumhara Rona ho.jaye toh aa jana "

Geet sat there moaning over her pain...crying her eyes out..

She was numb..her life had taken ssuch a turn which cant be healed..

She cringed herself closer hugging her body...

There maan was waiting for her in his jeep when he received call from munsiji ..

He informed maan that geet was missing and here her whole family was hunting her...

This perplexed maan...he had clearly mentioned her to state their visit to her family..

He tighten his jaws and marched towards geet..

She was still weeping.. reckless about her surrounding..

Maan pressed his lips in to a thin line..and reached her arm pulling her up..

" what do u think of urself.." he gritted exasperated with her stupidity

She narrowed her brows...trying to lurch away from him..

" dont geet dint I say apni so call.family ko bata kar ana...b woh tumhe kyu dhund rahe hai..ur brij verji is going mad hunting u in whole hp " he spat

Geet froze hearing his words

Thus means raji couldn't handle brij ...she was very much.worried for her now... she knew brij and darji would go to any extend to dig out the truth from.raji..

" are u even listening to.me.." maan scowled once again when she dint respond to him..

Geet raises her eyes to.him..and blurted

" ji..kya mai aapka..phome use kar sakti hu.." she stammered ..

Maan squeezed his eyes taking in a shrap breath..and handed his cell to her

She immediately dialed a number and prayed raji to pick..

To her luck raji picked up...she knew geet will.call her..

" di..." raji whimpered

" raji ...tu Thik to hai na..brij..verji..."

" brij verji ko pata chal gaya ki tum yaha nai ho..di...tum wapas mat ana...di...woh tumhe " she weeped

" raji..." geet gasped hearing her cry..something was wrong

" betaaa " her papaji snatched the phone

" papaji " She furrowed her brow hearing her papaji's voice...

" beta wapas nai ana..tum..yaha.sab tumhare jaan k dushman ban gaye hai..jab se unhe oata chala ki tum.maa bam ne wali ho...brij toh tumhe...beta mujhe maaf kar dena tumhara baap itna kamzoor hai..kind..woh tumhe darji aur brij se nai bacha sakta...maaf kar dena..mujhe"

Geet closed her eyes in pain...Two days back she was revealed to the fact that she was pregnant ..the ladies of her house though dint say to the mens..of the house ...Her papaji was aware of this...

Her hand protectively wrapped her stomach ...shaking her head she replied..

" nai..papaji Mera bbacha nai.." she murmured determined ..

" di..tum wapas mat ana..inhone raji.di ko bhi bohot mara...aur gurvinder jiju bhi ab nai rahe.." tito said..

Geet sniffed hearing this...gurvinder was no more...brij verji had killed him.too

She fell on the ground..with a thud..

Maan instantly sprang besides her...he looked at her..and found her crying once again..this tine more bitterly..

He took.the phone from her hand..which was still connected

He held the cell and places it to his ear..

" geet beta wapas mat ana is narak mai..brij aur darji tujhe nai chodenge..chali jaa beta yaha se chali jaa " his eyes widened..in shock...

His eyes turned to geet ..and he cut the call

" geet" he called her..after a while overcoming the shock..

She.sniffed not answering him..

" geet..stop it " he finally uttered furiously

He clasped her shoulders making her face him " aise rone se kuch nai hoga..geet tumhe apne aap k liye kuch karna hai toh khud hi karana hoga.. apne Zindagi ki faisle karne ka haq kisi aur ko mat do.."

she stared...up in his eyes..

" jin logo k liye tum zaruuri nahi ho..unlogo k liye apne aap ko takleef dena bewakoofi hogi.."

Each word he uttered was true...she had given her whole life to her family the right to take decision for her...thats the reason today she is in this stage of life..

she dropped her eyes close ...in response..

" geeettt " maan screamed as he.. Glimpsed the red coloured blood flowing through her arm..

His eyes widened and he held her..closer in reflex..

" geet geet " he patted her cheek...but she dint open her eyes...

He scanned his surroundings and found..brij and his men..coming towards them..

He examined her wound. Thankfully the bullet had just passed through it dint hit her...

He held...her .body in.his arms...and ran to his jeep..

" Oyeee ruk jaa geet ko yehi chod ne humara tere se koi lena nai.hai..chod de usse " brij growled. Loudly from his jeep following maan..

Maan...kept mum.and drove as fast as he could...He glanced at geet who.was turning pale..

" oye teri to...tujhe abhi bata ta hu.." brij and his men barrelled him.with bullets...

Maan dodged the bullets but he took a rasp turn causing the jeep stumble and geet nearly fell down

"ggeeet" maan screeched and held her hand..on time..but in the process the jeep got clashed to the tree

Maan climbed down..scooped geet in his arms and ran...

He knew the guys were insane but at this time geet needed medical attention...

But before he could run..brij and his mens circled them..

" tujh se kaha tha na..meri behn ko chod de..." brij spat clasping maan's.collar..

" utar isse...chup chap " he ordered ..

Maan placed her on the ground..her wound was bleeding a lot..

" isse goli chu kar gayi.hai..hospital lekar jana hoga " he stated getting up..

Brik smirked..." dekho ..toh jise marna chahate hai usse hi doctor k pass leke jane bol raha hai..yeh..".. everyone laughed at maan..

Brij gestured his men.to check geet..and confirm ..

He obeyed .. " bhai ji zinda hai yeh geet. "

Brij roared in anger.. " aaj toh tujhe zinda nai chodunga mai geet " he vowed. And moved in her direction ..

Two.goons came by maan's side and held him..

" aaj toh tujhe koi nai bacha sakta geet..." brij whispered...and pressed the nosle of rifle on her stomach..

Before he could press the triggger...he was shove by maan..who had topped the two goons prior to brij

He gripped the rifle and threw it away..and thereafter punched brij across his jaw

All the goons attacked him..but maan.was smarter..he already captured brij 's.neck.in.his hands...making them.halt...

He removed a small.sharp knife from his back pocket and positioned it across brij..

" sare hathyar waha neeche khaye mai phenk do..chalo.." maan pressed the knife to his neck tighter..

Brij nodded his head...and his.men followed his command..

Once they threw their guns..he Pierced brij 's neck.making it bleed...

" ah.." brij yelled in pain..when maan pushed.him on the floor..making sure the cut was deep...enough to leave them scared..

He then scooped geet..and in his arms carefully and ran away..leaving behind a injured brij with his mens to handle him..

Next morning

Geet woke up feeling lethargic and dizzy..

She opened her eyes slowly..and frowned scanning her surroundings..

"Hmmm" she hissed slightly..carefully raising her injured arm..

" mai yaha .." she once again scanned the room and found maan sleeping on the couch.. he had brusies over his arm...and forehead ..

Thats when yesterday 's incident came back in her mind..

She cringed in disgust recalling the cowardly act of her brother ..

It can be only him..who can pursue something so henious like this..

Tears gathered in her eyes..but she wiped them..recalling maan's words..

She wouldnt let anyone control her life...

She got down from her bed..limping and moved towards the exit..

" rukoo " a voice called out..automatically pausing her steps..

She blinked her eyes...and halted..

Maan got alert with the sounds..of bangles...He instantly got his feet and stopped geet

" tum kaha jaa rai ho..." he questioned her in confusion ..

Did she really wanted to go to her family..the same family who wished her dead??

" mere adhoore kaam ko pura karne.." she replied calmly

Maan gnashed his teeth..and uttered " tum sach mai un logo k paas wapas jaana chahati ho..jinho ne tumhe..." he trailed off

Geet slowly spun to.. face him..

" mai.unke pass nai nai jaa rai.hu..kabhi nahi jaa skati " she said firmly looking. Direct in his eyes.. Her eyes were pitch black as she said these words...

" phir? " he asked curiously

" mujhe kuch kaam pure karne hai ...kya aap mujhe waha chod sakte hai..?" She whispered looking him pensively ..

Next maan knew he was driving geet to hp police station..

Surprise wasnt the word to be use he was stunned...hearing this from her..He knew she was a naive girl ..a soft hearted person..but his decision of hers made him baffled ..Proved that she is strong enough ..to punish brij..

For geet brij wasnt just her culprit ..he even killed channi gurvinder and their unborn baby... and today he tried to kill her baby too.. she would have forgiven him.as a sister but as a mother she cant...and she couldn't do injustice to channi..her only frnd..

She wiped the tear from the corner of her eyes...

She had decided ...for once she wont loook back..this was her decision to leave this city her family who was ready to kill her in the name.of traditions and society ..

She desired to live her life independently and freely..If dev abandoned her..it was her fate..but she wont let this affect her daughter ...

Now she is mother..she just can't sit and cry over her past..she needs to move on..but before that she had to do this last bit of thing..in order to leave this city peacefully without any burden ..

A screech sound of across bought geet out of her thoughts ..

Geet got down so did maan..

" aap...ji..woh thank u...aapne meri inti Madat ki..uske liye thank u.." she was really grateful to this ruthless man.. He was the one who inculcated these thoughts in her mind... Though she wished to leave this city without his push ut wouldn't have been possible...

Maan...simply nodded..and stepped ahead but stopped hearing geet's next set of words

" aapko hmare sath andar ane ki zarrurt nai hai..mai yaha khud dekh sakti hu..."

He turned towards her and looked her perplexed..

" lekin..."

" maine kaha na..mai dekh lungi..aapne yaha tak mere sath diya Yaaha liye shukriya..."

Maan couldnt sense whether it was pride or shock which he felt at this moment...the Handa girl was definitely one of a kind...

" are u sure..?"

Though he was positive to accompany her in police station he dint wanted to force her..it was her personal matter...

"Ji " she nodded..tucking her fair behind ..

Maan fisted his hands.. on either sides..staring down at her head which was lowered...

With no.words to speak..he thumped inside the jeep...and gave geet once final glance..hoping to glimpse her face..

As if she heard his restlessness..she peeked up and smiled at him..

A smile automatically formed on his lips..which was hardly visible..

" always be the same feet I knw u have the capacity to overcome all the hurdles in ur life..." he whispered to himself..and drove off..

Geet smiled waving bye to.maan and free he left..she entered the police station. She lodge complaint against brij and his mens..

After she was done..she went to the temple and offered her prayers...for the last time and headed to the bus depot..

Maan came home freshen up..and returned back to the police station.. He just couldn't sit at home...

He enquired about geet and they said she lodge a complaint and they have arrested brij and his mens ...and thereafter she left..

he sighed heavily when he couldn't find her anywhere in the city ..his brain was asking him.to visit the...haveli once but his heart knew she will never go back there...

Contemplating deeply he decided to leave the city as his work was done..

While driving the moments he spent with her in the car were floating in his.mind.. " stop.it maan its okay..dont think about her.." he chided himself..

Here geet was gazing outside the window of her bus which was heading towards delhi..Thinking of maan. .

Both smiling slightly remembering their moments and looking forward for the new start in their life..But both were unaware.of what their destiny had planned for them...


heyyaa guys since i m free this week.. I m planning to give u'll updates..of any tow stories...

But i m confused which ones to update 😆

So let me knw... which two u want me to update!

And do comment and let me..knw how was this Oneshot..

Love sweta
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow !! Superb os dear,
I hv read it on ghsp anniversary thread ,but I luved reading it again,
Edited by mskfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow baby i lovd dis OS👏
bt can u make it as SS coz it is different 4m d serial though d concept is same
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtypie

wow baby i lovd dis OS👏

bt can u make it as SS coz it is different 4m d serial though d concept is same



heyyaa pie.. seems like meeting u after a long time ya..how r u 😃

awww ss?? ill pakka think sweety
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u priyaaa 😳
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Originally posted by: crazy_sweta



heyyaa pie.. seems like meeting u after a long time ya..how r u 😃

awww ss?? ill pakka think sweety

yea baby aft long time im 5n wt abt u?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb os based on ghsp concept finally geet got the courage n punished them because of maan she could do that his words made her strong enough to fight with her own family lovely story . I want only me n ishqya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os
Took me back to the hoshiarpur scenes😊
Would definitely love to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtypie

yea baby aft long time im 5n wt abt u?


m good sweety wassup

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