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Superb part
maan calling geet as monster
he talked to dadimaa after 2 years

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The Bliss



( For Banner credit goes to my dear Priya )


The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 9


Part - 10

There Geet was busy in her study but Maan's thoughts wr coming in her mind nw nd then ,, she remembered DM words that he didn't bear anybody near him bcoz they pitied him ,, DM told her that he did like this very often when he felt depress nd went on drip for few days coz of his stubbornness , but today he ate bcoz she too behaved like him .. stubborn,, a smile crept on her lips nd she mumbled .. good , then let it be like this ..Provocation .

Geet went for dinner in her mess nd came in her room then decided to talk DM before her next sitting of study * DM was sitting near Maan nd listening FM in her new gifted pocket radio ,, Maan was giving her hard galres but he said her nothing ,, she was looking happy after many days ,, DM's phone rang nd fleshes Geet name ,, she smiled looking at Maan nd replied.

DM: hello Geet beta .

Geet: Hi DM ,, how r u?

DM: fine beta .

Geet: nd ur akdoo G Son ? did he take his meal ?

DM smiled : he is also fine , yeah he had .

Geet: good ,, did he trouble u for dinner ?

DM: no beta ,he is my sweet child nd love me a lot .

Geet: I know , give him phone.

DM: what?

Geet: yeah, put it on his ear.

DM looked at Maan who was looking at her from corner of his eyes nd gestured What?

DM: Dr Geet.

Maan: Dr Geet nahi ,, monster Geet.

Geet listened his words nd smiled .

DM: she wants to talk u .

Maan: no .

DM: Geet beta he don't want to talk .

Geet: OK , speaker on karo .

DM: Geet , he'll become angry.

Geet: he won't .

DM put d phone on speaker nd Maan gave an annoyed look .

Geet: if I m a monster then u r not less than a Bhasmasur ,, i'm sure still u r giving ur fav angry glares to DM ,, am I right na ? I know u won't agree, but I know .

DM laughed nd Adi who was sitting on his bed was smiling ,, he was listening this type of light talk 1st time .

Geet: thanks a lot for dinner ,, this keep u away from my ugly face ,, uncle -aunty r not here so don't show ur tantrum to her ,, u cn show me ,, if u want ,, GN , hope this monster won't trouble u in ur dreams too .

Maan: I don't care of u .

Geet: Oh really then better to join u at BF TM ,, what say ?

Maan: no o o,,, not at all ? I want my BF in peace,, not with a devil .

Geet: hummm,, seems scared .

Maan: no , I hate u , don't come here again ,, got it?

Geet: no prob ,, India is a free country nd all have fundamental rights , so u cn hate me ,, any way try to keep me away ,, bye , GN Bhasmasur,, GN DM ,, take care , nd tell me in d mrng what special u make in BF ,, I cn't eat but cn imagine.

DM: sure beta , GN .

Geet cut d call with a smile nd got busy in her books ,, before sleeping she read few pages from d pendrive ,, d matter was imp but nothing was going in her mind ,, she was confused why d owner didn't try to get this work back ? whose work is this nd where is that concern person ? How cd someone forget his/her hard work like this ? Geet wrote down some points on her notepad nd decided to check related books in library .

Geet closed d lappy nd lay down to sleep thinking about that ,, In lab every cubic have diff chemicles nd salts for tests ,, there wr lots of students nd Drs for their research ,, it was very diff to find d ppl wo worked or working on this ,, she can't give this to Dr Dev ,, grrr ,, S*** , har baar notes mei kamiya nikalta hei ,, baat kahin karega aur nazar kahin hogi ,, K**** , don't know how he has reached here ? I have to findout myself ,, i'll catch this person feet to help me in my work ,, Babaji !! plzz help ur child Geet ,, she slept shooting a quick prayer to God .

After cutting d call DM gave a smile to Maan nd he galred at her but soon became calm remembering Geet words... I m sure still u r giving ur fav angry glares to DM ,, he made a face nd cdn't stop himself ,, he laughed out nd shook his head in disbelief mumbling .. Dr Devil , even DM nd Adi wr shocked nd then they too joined him * that night all slept with a contented heart thanking god in their hearts ,, this was d 1st night in last more then 2 yrs that Maan slept without disturbance ,, in place of his dreadful past his encounter with Dr devil occupied his mind .

Next day Geet decided to go library 1st ,, she started searching d books ,, there wr many nd she needed lot of time to see d content , she read few but find nothing related to d points ,, she left for next day nd came back to her lab ,, whole day went in work nd she was back in her room ,, freshen up change nd made a black coffee to refresh her mind ,, sipping coffee she called DM who seemed quiet happy nd talked to her for few min ,, asked about Maan nd felt lil ease that he was not troubling d old lady .


Precap ----- search cont. ...

( i cn be wrong in some tech terms , plzz ignore )



Part - 11



sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Part 9 was luvly ..dadi n maan convo . itne time baad maan ko acche se BT krte dekh dadi emotional ho gyi . geet ka jadu chal gaya yeha bhi but maan itni jldi manega toh nehi :p waitng for next
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Hi Babbie 😃

kaisi ho?

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