You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi
Interesting concept...
nice update...

Thank you!😳

Quote

spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
loved the part maan is very rude but he loves her family very much maaneets first night but misunderstanding begins very nice start thnx 4 update

Thank you so much for reading!!😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Amazing part... i think arrange marriages must be like this only... starting awkwardly , missunderstanding eachother's actions and talk...
loved the concept... maan is furious on her being arrogant and Geet is Feeling helpless and Sad because she thought he don't like her...
loved it

Quote

spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD
Amazing part... i think arrange marriages must be like this only... starting awkwardly , missunderstanding eachother's actions and talk...
loved the concept... maan is furious on her being arrogant and Geet is Feeling helpless and Sad because she thought he don't like her...
loved it

Thanks for understanding my pov😃

Quote

srikantharaja

@srikantharaja

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Great ff something definitely news plz do continue man character something new good work plz do updated regularly thanks a lot for update

Quote

spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: srikantharaja
Great ff something definitely news plz do continue man character something new good work plz do updated regularly thanks a lot for update

Thanks for reading!!😳

Quote

spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Part #2

Tactics!!

She could sense he was taking her wrong she wanted to wake him up and clear up things but looking at him sleep so soundly she thought otherwise. .. If she wakes him up then he might think it was her acceptance to get physical!!

So weighing all the pros and cons she choose to rest for a while... looking at the large space he left for her maybe unintentionally she was thankful to him...

The night passed for her in a disturbed sleep even a slight moment from him she would wake up from her sleep to see if he was awake or changed his mind... moving to the farthest end of bed she tried to close her eyes when she felt him turn in his sleep, so giving up on the idea she got up to get ready for the day!

It was an hour before the sunrise he woke up with the faint sounds he heard in the room... but he really wanted to see if she would try waking him up or at least talk about the last nights events!!

More than an hour passed she was busy doing something with her stuff making sure there was minimal sound... cursing himself for even expecting something from her... he woke up n walked directly to the washroom!!

His first day of his marriage he wanted to take everything on a positive note but maybe stars weren't favouring him!

when he was back she was nowhere to be seen the room was clean like never before!!

Did she do it??

Forget it maan her highness wouldn't even lift her finger cleaning the room is a far off dream laughing at his personal joke he walked out to meet his dadi!

Half of the relatives left after gifting the new bahu for her first meal of the house which was actually cooked by his maa!

Not even a day this women started ordering her maa around... in all his wandering thoughts he failed to notice the sudden comfort level she was sharing with his family!!

He sat to have his breakfast when his got a call!

Washing his hands he rushed to his room leaving his bride who was standing beside him to serve shattered again!

Y does he dislike her so much hiding her tears she served the rest of the family when she heard him shout from the room

Secretly a look of understanding passed among the elders and she was sent to help him if he needed something!!

This wasn't her house she wasn't even familiar with everyone around her every few min she was feeling she was an unwanted member in the group of ladies... she didn't know if she had the liberty to excuse herself from the conversation to aid her freshly burnt fingers. ..

If it wasn't her mother in law she didn't knew what would have happened!

Shrugging her thoughts she walked to his/ her room to find him getting ready to go somewhere... it was first day of her marriage n he who was supposed to be the only one she could relay on was leaving her alone...

Hearing her bangles sound he frowned n looked at her questioning her presence...

clearing her throat she somehow managed to start a conversation dabbing her wet pallu on her burnt hand...

Are u going to office??? She asked in a meek voice... he was strong and a powerful man she somehow didn't find it in her to talk in higher pitch of voice

He quite didn't understand her question

Office?? He asked with a raised eyebrow combing his hair...

Do u mean baba's sarpanch office no I rarely visit it y?? Do u want to complain about your husband?? He added a bit of sarcasm to his question which she failed to notice

No no ... I was asking about ur... n she ate up her words walking to the washroom to get the toothpaste to apply for her burns...

Grabbing her hands he slammed her to the wall squeezing the toothpaste between...

I'm a farmer! n farmers in our land are not so developed to build offices for themselves... seeing her widened eyes and shocked expression he bit out adding more venom to his words not realising the damage he was causing

Oh poor u ashamed of ur husband already!! I still wonder if it wasn't for our wealth y would u be interested in a uneducated villager like me!!

Tears of betrayal blurred her vision she felt cheated by her family... if not for his hold he would have collapsed!!

Looking at her tears he smirked at his fate his wife didn't even respect his values rather was interested only in materialistic things... he wasn't wrong in judging her after all ...

Giving her a painful glance he walked out of the room thanking his stars that she hasn't seen the broken dreams he built around her...

Tears finally poured out of her eyes looking at her hand which was almost filled with toothpaste!!

To Be Continued...

127

Quote

893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

Tum ko koi aur story nahi mili thi padne

U could have asked me I have a lambi list of super awesome stories😃

U seriously want to read my nonsense😆

Thanks for reading anyway!!🤣

😆 agar mera nonsense padh sakti ho toh main kyu nahi?

Waise this is not nonsense.

Mazaa aa raha hai 😃

Quote

spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: dqno1

😆 agar mera nonsense padh sakti ho toh main kyu nahi?

Waise this is not nonsense.

Mazaa aa raha hai 😃

haan ha kal jab geet maan ko thapad maregi aur bhi maza ayega🤣

Quote

preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Really interesting story
Lagta ge kisi third person ko hi aa k maan ko samjgana hoga k atkeast geet k effort ko samjge aur yekaam sirf dadi hi jar sakti ge

Quote

1 ... 4 5 6 7 8 ... 108

You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131) - Page 6

Related Topics

Explore Topics