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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

nice ud

he is not educated but seem to understanding guy
not look like village deminating type


Thanks for reading😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part...
Continue writing and waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zornitsa

Falling love with Geet char...

Wow what a positive attitude ...
hats off gal..👏
Its like ..when we want something ..we automatically finds ways of working it..
you had brought her to stage..where she doesn't want to sit and sulk..
and think ways of opening up...superb..
Maan ...I find a bit funny...or wish to say male ego...and giving reason...
there is quote..in tamil..
goes as.."I want drink the lassi..but doesn't wish to spoil my moustache"..
😛

..wonderful ..usage of words for his feeling..😉


It's maan n his ego which is going to be the base of next few parts!

Don't like him so soon god knows u might hate him in the very next part!!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: frnd.of.frndz


hellooo..! Update toh mat tha amazing ekdum.. part 4 mein I felt bad that may be Girls ki NO ko humesha shyness hi kyun samjha jaata hai.. it can be firm no aswell.. but iss part mein Maan ka POV bhi samajh aaaya.. n it is really a fact that men want to cross that physical barrier first before baring their emotional side to their wives.. but Maan is still cute in his ways of missing Geet's dominance n her claim over him.. but buddhu bhi hai samajhta nahi k usne abhi tak geet ko haq se kuch bolne ka mauka hi kahan diya hai.. lolzz.. waiting to see how this wall of self made misunderstandings is gonna fall between Maaneet.. I hope Geet's denial to Maan's touch will not annoys him to take any bad step in future..

luv Rucha


Chalo thank god u liked it!
To be honest this is one part I felt was bit out of the track...
For some reason I didn't like it much maybe Maan's pov needs to be worked on a little bit more...

But glad u liked it!

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Excellent Update

Now after reading this update I kind off understand Geet and Maan too
a little better .
Geet knows now that her marriage is her life even though her husband is uneducated but he is her husband and now she has accepted that fact . she also knows talking to him could create certain problems as he might take her talks wrong .
Geet however seems to be restless without Maan and she hangs onto his pillow .
Maan on the other hand already knows his wife is beautiful and wants to spend time with her however the moment she is in front of him he does not realize his words are always harsh towards her giving her a feeling that he does not like her near him .
both Maan and Geet wants to make the marriage work but both seems to give off wrong signals to the other like Maan again been harsh with her and Geet steps away from him again he assumes
she wants her space right now there is major communication problem between them and misunderstandings between them are created in seconds but I'm thinking both are not at fault the situation is such and Maan been or seen as a closed minded person it will be difficult for him to understand anything from Geet's pov


Yep this is what I wanted to say even though the seed will be from geet the result or the blame would be on Maan's head!

This is our world even if a girl has tears slicing onions we assume her husband might have ill treated her!

Thanks for understanding me... or I guess I should stop saying this coz sooner or later u just replicate my thoughts😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08

Nice update

Waiting for next update

thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 11j25sam

Miss thedhi cheez

Kindly concentrate on this ff first. I love this story so much. It is so refreshing and close to reality


Hay yaar!
Thanks for liking it so much n I know it too have seen ur likes here...

But wanted a little help from you. .. is there any story in our forum with the title "Ishq wala love!"

Don't glare at me plz plz plz help!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

beautiful update geet is right past gone nothing will gain remembering it best thing is she understand very well maans education is not bigger for her marriage n she also want to talk to him liked the way u wrote maans point of view about girls n marriage n looks like he really hate citys robotic life lovely part thnx 4 update


maans pov would have been stronger!
I was actually disappointed with the outcome!

Glad u liked it though😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mamatha.

Nice part...

Continue writing and waiting for next part...


Thanks for reading!😃

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