You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131) - Page 23

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

maans pov would have been stronger!

I was actually disappointed with the outcome!

[DIV]Glad u liked it though😊 being an uneducated farmer i liked his pov most of he respects women

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

hmm I see with this part his character has a bit mellowed down a bit...

I want him to be too strong n powerful like even if he says Geet!

A shiver should run through her! Out of fear of course 😉

Originally posted by: KasiKasi

Awesome update
loved it

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

wow sound intense hope next part

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

only then when he romance his wife it would be all so interesting to read n for me to write too

Ok will catch up with the next update!

Got to go getting late to work. ...

Thanks for reading again😃

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Originally posted by: annirogc

beautiful part.. geet was in confusing state.. maan wants geet to claim her rights on him.. but he need to understand her situation also.. waiting for next

Originally posted by: muskeeter

wooow...

amazing update...

maan and geet both want their marriage to work...but don't know how to approach...

i just hope that...they will have some proper talk soon...

awesome update...