You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1061

Badi der se aaye hai..
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Posted: 10 years ago

#1062

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy
Badi der se aaye hai..
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Kaha hai😕

I couldn't find any😆

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1063

Ch 14
the update was really good. Everything..the way marraige making her mature and the silent acceptance of this being her new home.
The best parts were pencil scene and the previous maan finding her playing with clothes.
I really like it. Simple and realistic.
So geet presence has now a calming effect on him.

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1064

Ch 15
this is the difference between man and woman's love . For man to feel loved they have to have thir partner near them. While women its emotional attachment firat and then physical.

Lekin maan is also right...someone or the other has to take initiative.
And its a big leap in their relationship they can be in each other arms and she has accepted him as her husband.
Really liked the update

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 10 years ago

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1065

Ch 16
jab wife gussa jaye to bhai khana bhi naseeb nhi hota yahaan to chai kam se kam mil gyi..
Loved the pati patni takraar ...
Yaar ye dadi log ka kaam hai sab pe nazar rakhna...par i like reading it ...family bonding
so maan has got a laptop for her...
How considerate of him
and aanchal was to be married to him but now it seems they have become good frds .
Lekin maan babu you better start shopping with geet ...jav ho patni ghar mein toh kisi aur ka kya kaam.

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 10 years ago

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1066

Raat me comment edit karenge

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1067

Originally posted by: supriya_anand
Hello..
I came across ur work jus today.. N i read all the 18 parts on one go..
I really liked the story..
But i felt u kind of rushed up in the end..
The Aanchal part remained incomplete..
The way Geet gave in to him also seemed incomplete..
I have liked each part of ur story...
Im really sorry for telling this..
Whole in all i loved the story...

Thanks for reading!

N about the end will try n give it a better end this time

N thanks for letting me know the flaws too🤗