You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1041

Originally posted by: jj23
not justified

Koi baat nahi

When I write the end after the next part

Sab apne aap justify ho jaye ga😆

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1042

Originally posted by: mamta-salian
Beautiful update dear..
Yeh phone humesha galat waqt pe hi kyon aata hai..😲

Let me think

Kafi valid question hai

Maybe coz the other person really has something important😉

Thanks for reading! 😆

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#1043

😊

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1044

😊Thanks for all those wonderful people who shared their personal experiences with me n helped me to shape up this story!🤗

Baki log koi thanks wagira expect mat karna😎

-Spoorthi

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#1045

Sweety!! To be frank something I felt something is not right..

Something I couldnot pin-point..

I just don't know what to say..😕

I am not saying the update is bad but I felt there something lacking behind..

It seemed like you had rushed up things to end the story..

I am sorry if I have hurt you with my words..

But this not spoorthi like..😔

All in all this is OK update for me..

Once again sorry..

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#1046

Originally posted by: kkmouli
Sweety!! To be frank something I felt something is not right..
Something I couldnot pin-point..
I just don't know what to say..😕
I am not saying the update is bad but I felt there something lacking behind..
It seemed like you had rushed up things to end the story..
I am sorry if I have hurt you with my words..
But this not spoorthi like..😔
All in all this is OK update for me..
Once again sorry..

It's ok

I know n expected this so chill n sleep!

Good night! 🥱

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aashi14

@aashi14

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1047

last part was like u just finished it,the story was movib=ng forward so nicelyn den it was an abrupt ending.

i loved the whole story bt nt satisfied wid the last part...

sry if i hurt u ,no offence.

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1048

It's very nice update. This story's starting was very interesting and with each part, it was getting more interested and entertaining .but ending doesn't seem perfect.