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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Amazing update

maan was suggesting geet to do part time job so that she can continue clg but geet misunderstood that and thought that she is fired

glad mu is cleared

shasha is behind geet

maan was angry on geet as she didnt come to him for whole day

but her one touch did the magic

loved it

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

awsemm update maan helping geet

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Great story. Loved it very much so far. Please pdate very soon. Waiting to read your other stories too.

thank u

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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Just read 3 parts in one go..

N I luv it. .

I really like ur way of writing..

Interesting story..

W8ng 4 next part..

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Part 1

Dii !!! I had fallen for this work of urs, one of the best work of gf
Seriously I felt to read all updates again and again
I am able to feel geet vulnerability when mehra forced her
A innocent young girl
Her trust over maan lead her to his cabin was fabulous
I felt her cruse over maan
As all teenager had a role modle.
Maan is her role modle
Maan said he don't have emotions but I found him as gentle men
He respect the sacrifies of mohinder.
I am glad he took geet in his wings

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Part 2

Aww geet is really a innocent kid here, her all excitement
Her all anxiety was just so adorable
Perfectly portrayed about Maan desire for geet
His dilemma was really leading him in a new world of emotions
But left everything a side
Maan cares for geet and that is enough
For me as I loved the khdoos maan
But who secretly care for geet.

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Part 3

How authoritatively, Maan made geet follow his all orders
And when she said sir.. sorry naa...
My mind said ... how cute
I can bet... maan too had felt same heheh
That was the highlighted part of the update
And lift conversation and emotions are just made me read them 2 times.
I really really like this khdoos maan and innocent shemhi geet

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

I started to wait for part 4 now itself
And now officially a reader of this work of urs

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bina_a

@bina_a

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Oye! ye shasha ki bacchi kya plan kar rahi hai! Poor geet she was so scared of maan's anger. I loved Adi character, he has a strong one! great job Heytal :)

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avem

@avem

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

read all the parts now loved it 👏⭐️

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