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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Amazing update. totally loved it.. loved how maan saved geet n helped her.. geet is falling for maan... waiting for next part..

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asmita.jain

@asmita.jain

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Superb prologue and amazing updates...
Continuee soon n can u add me to ur pm list?

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D_4_Devil

@D_4_Devil

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

wooow awesome story line...

totally amazing concept...

poor geet she had to suffer a lot at such early age...

this Mehra guy is such a leech...he hadn't even respected the fact that she is like daughter to him...

thank u babaji...maan came at time...and save geet...

i loved the way geet had trusted him just by his name...

maan and geet both are attracted to each other one by love and another by lust...

it will be really interesting to see how predator becomes protector...

really loved it...

continue it soon...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

CS - both mothers ruined their children's lives ...maan was more rude, arrogant, head-strong man and geet was meek, weak, less-confident girl...dadi was more concern about maan...geet's siblings only source of her love & happiness...she believes in love but maan not

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

part 1 - mehra tired to rape geet and maan saved her from him...only his name was sufficient for her to willingly trusted him... he was a savior in diff way...he gave her diff job, to work with him...liked how maan punished mehra...background of the situation was nice...geet admired him so much and maan so much fall in her beauty and lusted her...he doesn't have to do much...his pray came willingly in his trap...lets se who wins love or lust...

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Congrats for new story

Awesome prologue

Nice cs

Maan is affected by Geet 's beauty

I loved the way jis tarah Maan helped Geet

Feeling sad for Geet itni chooti age mai usse itni muskilo ko face karna pad raha hai

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

awesome update

Mehra was forcing himself over geet & maan saved her.

Maan was blown away with geet's beauty & lust was trying to overpower him but his duty didn't let him to do that.

Now geet will work with him.

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

awesome starting ... maam saved geet from mehra and is attracted to her .. he promised mohinder that he will protect geet but his lust towards geet is increasing ... loved it

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Love v/s lust...

Savior v/s predator

and who is the prey Geet Handa...

Nice thought... Lust consuming her predator will he attack his prey or will love and savior save her from his lusty side...

and geet unknowingly falling for her predator who is trying hard but how long will he try hard to get his grip and when he loses.. bombbb the savior will becomethe ultimate predator...

very much interesting and waiting

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..

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