APSARA MG OS Part 2 updated

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

hi congrats on the OS! superb start! well written! Annie n Get share a lovely bond! Maan smitten by Geet! he sees her n falls for her beauty! update soon

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

interesting n awesome starting...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Yup she is apsara
And maan babu flat on her
Wow geet sure is innocent
Thank god for Annie
Well Annie you won't have to worry now about geet
There is someone to protect her now
And you know he will protect her from all evil
Annie is so possessive of her best friend
Can't say I blame her
Geet hai hi aisi
So cute the way he fell or her
And this is just her pix
If he sees her then what will he do

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nice start

Maan was in geet' s land after seeing geet photo

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Fatema 🤗...thank u for the lovely story...what an awesome start...Annie is so sweet...love her friendship with Geet...she is so caring and protective of her innocent friend...and why not Geet is so beautiful ...truly a Apsara ...loved the way u gave MSK's intro...the most eligible bachleor was spell bound by our princess ❤️...glad his Daadi and Mom noticed his interest...u wrote everything so beautifully...plz keep writing more...u have the talent to tell a story interestingly 👍🏼