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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi starting a new story how geet meets Mann threw her parent wish to marry him but Mann is Casanova and does want to marry her but he changes his mind when something happens in his life and geet his obsession in life without her he can't breath.

Proglue at bottom page enjoy guys leave comment please

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Part two page 10

Teaser on page 13

Partthree page 14

Teaser on page 18

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Mann Singh khurana ruthless business man

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Mann Singh khurana ruthless businessman and very rich live with his grandma and brother Vicky Lost his parents at a very young age in a plane crash a Casanova at the moment dating Sam I hate the word marriage tI'll he meet geet
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Drashti Dhami
Geet handa. Do it architecture degree in Usa came from India three years to go Study her father is one rich businessman and she she respects her parents values and will never ago against then will have a range marriage even though she's come from a rich background they are quite modern butstrict when it comes to marriage apart from that she has had all the freedom she's wanted and she respects her parents wishes

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Mann daidma savitra devi after her husband and son and daughter in law this bought up Mann and Vicky and built the khurana empire with her knowledgevery strong woman and stubborn love the grand sons to bits now semi retired well my Mann CEO of Khurana construction and want him to get married

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proglue
Look girl whatever your name is geet I not the marrying kind so tell your parents I'm not interested I have a girlfriend already so I'll be best if we left it at that Mann said left the room
Geet had her head down she didn't even see face she went back to her parent papa I don't like the boy he's not for me please stop show me a boys I want to finish my degree first then work with you then think about marriage
Geet you are 23 year old and we looking to settle you down this is 10 time your embarrassing turn down boys want will people say mohinder handa daughter got no vaule Mann Singh khurana One of the richest boy in our country and doing really well in the business world then want the problem geet why are you doing this to me I let you go and study abroad I let you do what you want all asked for you do is keep my honour you can't even do that no papa don't say that I would value your honourand I wouldn't go against your word but he was in the right person papa, do here Rana he was hold his chest when speaking too his wife and had an heart-attack mo hinder ji Rana shout The he collapsed on the floor and was rushed to emergency hospital where he was critical
Geet. What you have done to your father stay away from us go back to London. No mama don't say that yes I will do anything to say I wouldn't say no to anybody I will marry you ever you asked me to let me see papa she cried holding on to her mum.

Couple of days later Mann walk in too the hospital and in mohinder room and see geet back and says I will marry you I have no problem but do not expect too much from me Mann walked out say those word with out look at geet he changes his mind why because what he saw 2 hours ago which made him really angry

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept.
Both are getting married due to family pressure.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on the new story! superb prologue! well written. Poor Geet! her parents blame her wen Maan is nt interested in marriage! bt he agrees! lovely cs! update soon! n do pm! Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly congtraz on new story
The CS and Prologue is Interesting

Geet is modern yet hold family values and her father wants her to meet Maan so that they can marry but Maan when he first meets Geet he is very rude to her and rejects her saying he has a girlfriend .
Geet tells her father no to the alliance of Maan but instead her father takes it wrong as if it was Geet that rejected and he gets a heart attack .
now shockingly Maan too appears and says he'll marry Geet but she must not aspect anything from him

I'm eagerly waiting to know why he came back and what made him angry that made him agree to marry Geet

looking forward for the story to unfold

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nice cs interesting pro maan didnt want to marry geet but what happened that he agreed lovely start

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