MG OS#27: Koi Mujh Ko Yun Mila Hai - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
hi
just amazing story ..
it was so heart wrecking at the start but eventually turned out to be happy as both maan and geet find out each other ..their solace and heaven in each other arms ..broken relations harm to a great extent but here maneet started a new life with new zest and thus promised to live with each other forever ..
i like the way u describe maan as an ordinary person ...mistakes bound to happen but maan accepted his faults andnow giving second chance to his life ..
here maneet both r lucky that they got each other .life gave them second chance..


thank u for wonderful story ..
waiting for more stories from u


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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Amazing...

Such sensitive concept ... portrait in one of the finest of ways...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
a nice one...

true when we get a second chance you we should not let it go and make teh same mistakes again coz if we do it will be the end and here maan and geet got a second chance and they held it tight
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was one of the sweetest OS's I have ever read!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi beautiful emotional OS! Wonderflly written! They were married 2 other people n gt divorced! they met at crt! they share their pain! den later wen she started to wrk in the same company! they became friends n shared their past! Love developed! Maan asked 2 marry him! they confess! it was their second chance at love! Pls post epilogue! thanks! Love all ur stories!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey really nice concept...liked how u build their story...waiting for part two if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL OS
IT STARTED WITH THEM AS STRANGERS MEETING FOR THE FIRST TIME ON THE MOST TRAUMATIC DAY OF THEIR LIVES AND TOOK THEM ON A JOURNEY AS COLLEGUES, THEN FRIENDS AND SLOWLY THEY FELL FOR EACH OTHER
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just love love love this is.very well written. love the way u described both maan and geets emotions here.Pain and hesitation of both of them still love for each other. I just love the whole plot very much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww I super loved the OS. Two people getting divorced on the same day and meeting and just sharing a few words from which one took strength and at last broke all the ties with his family.

I really felt for Maan and Prakriti both. Though I did felt a bit of anger at Maan for really not able to stand for wife for so long that her patience snapped and literally asked for a divorce. I wish he had shown the guts to break ties with his mother and sister before his divorce or at least stood his wife's respect than taking a step after divorce when everything was shattered in his life. The saying is better late than never, and here though Maan finally took a stand it was truly very late. So more than Maan I felt for his wife.

About Geet's in laws better not even say a word. I really hate them for ruining their own friends daughter life by getting a married to their son who was already in love with someone and forced him into this marriage. But what made me lose respect was that they hide the fact from her for 6 months and knew probably that he was staying with his gf despite having a wife at home. They could really have saved her from the divorcee tag but were so selfish that they rather chose to ruin an innocent girls life. And less said the better about her so called husband.

Coming to MG story now, I really loved how you showed them becoming strangers to colleague to start trusting to becoming friends to caring and finally falling for each other. The whole journey from strangers to lovers felt so real and beautiful that I feel short of words. There were moments I felt for them. Seeing them lonely and hurting. Or when they simply cared for each other and started having normal conversations, I would smile.

I really really enjoyed how the story was written and it had so many emotions in it. Moreover it felt real and not just a fiction. There are couples who break up cos of family despite love each other and there are girls who are betrayed and lied to get them married to their son thinking he would come back to them.

But the best part of the OS was that it was balanced and it really covered everything that was needed. Not much rona dhona neither showing them moving on immediately. The pace was simply perfect. All in all it was a wonderful read.

-Sanjana!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so beautiful story both got divorced the same day both r in pain but slowly both came close n unknowingly reduce each other pain liked the way u wrote each emotion of them but wish maan could take a stand before it was too late may be pakriti n maan was not meant to be together forever loved maans confession to geet that he will try to not make his previous mistake very lovely story loved it very much

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