Short Story - Dream a little dream [Last Chapter - P 34]

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Don't worry, you won't get rid of us so easily. We've managed to forego busy lives and massive time differences to somehow always bhatak around each other 😆
And don't listen to Avi. She has a terrible habit of dissing my favourite stories. Start with The Locket.

Neki aur pooch pooch... started an update at 5am. There should be something today if I don't die of exhaustion first. I want to try a thing where I update quite close together, maybe a day after another. Don't know if readers will cooperate with comments though. I'm trying to be more firm these days lol

will be waiting

I think most readers are just dying to read something

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Sometimes I feel like I let the old days get away with my own hands simply by not being present on IF. I never wanted to write so infrequently... But onwards and upwards. No melancholia here, sis.
(Started Smoke and Mirrors again if you're interested :) Already wrote the last chapter so there's no disappearing this time.)

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

How relatable! The nostalgia over something. A girl not pursuing her chance at love because of society and all.
The updates makes you root for Geet and say , 'Ja Geet, jee le apni Zindagi'. Lol.
Super.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

superb update! Well written! Geet's thoughts well portrayed!

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

The nervous and shy geet! 😆
Thanks for the double update again!!

Waiting for the next!

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fict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Loved it. Maan cooking for them and he is unaware of poor Geet's condition 😉.

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

amazing parts all friends sharing their secret their sadness because it will be their last night like this all r beautifully written wow maan cooked for her n light also gone so candle light dinner atleast for geet poor girl just got nervous hearing her name from his mouth lovely parts thnx 4 update

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Beautiful story veil. I am feeling nostalgic.. Mann still don't know about Geet's crush right? Geet is really shy and she is not willing to share her feelings to anyone. They have their first candle light mid night snack😆. God someway helped poor girl. I can totally relate to her state of mind. This story reminded me of my first secret crush 😆

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divya22

@divya22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Wah 2 parts saath mai.. great...

This what-if question is a part of many girls life..al those who read ronantic stories n watch ronantic movies n secretly dream such romantic love story for themselves.. bt den they al bury it deep inside their heart due to some or other reason..

bt geet dint worry ur dream will soon turn into reality... yr hero is here to make it real...

geet hs already lost hr heart.. i hope maan ka bhi yahi haal ho...