New OS : TILL ETERNITY on 10/3/15

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Tanu

@butterfly.tanu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow...its indeed an eternal love story...

very beautifully written...

i got tears in my eyes while reading...😭

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful and Soulful OS

The memories both shared in their 48 years of marriage was truly
precious

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Emotional os made me cry... Theyr r ttogether always. After death too. Till eternity

loved it

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

It was awesome. It's a heart touching story. maneet journey of their love is narrated by geet. She is remembering every second which she spend with maan.their fight, their love, their argument, their monify phase everything which made them more closer than ever. She is remembering that moment when he decided to leave him as she couldn't able to Conceive n then maan's decision n made her believe his love was so much touching. They live their life together n now geet left this world to accompany maan as they made to live life together for eternity. Amazing os.

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Nice os
Maaneet always together forever

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ReelyROSExx

@ReelyROSExx

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Thats AMAZING ...

geet reminiscing the memories of their Married life .

You have listed out each n everything ... showing how crazily they were in l ove with each other

I knew fromthe start itself tht ... Maan s dead ( I know u didnt mention names ... Well it always Maneet for me 😛) But it still was a sad ending ( I cnt bear a bit of emotions ... Yannoe) But when u mentioned the 48 yrs of Marriage ... I was kinda satisfied . anywyas Geet s going to him FOREVER N EVER

Loved it ... can u pls gimme the link of u r FF ??

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

@ Everyone : Thank you so much guys for your lovely comments...🤗

It means a lot to me.. ALOT..

Unknowingly this OS became so close to my heart.

Its something very special.

I may write many other works later but this will always remain close to my heart.

The other day my friend was talking about "Judaai " song from Badlapur and she said about some other concept but I dont know from where this concept came to my mind and just became my favourite.

So THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN GUYS..🤗

I personally hate sad endings but I guess this is not a sad one infact I felt like I have given Maneet

a happily ever after ending. Dont you think so guys?!!😉

@flowing river : Even I wish the same for you dear. Infact for everyone..😃

@Shree2 : Trust me dear. That is what I felt all the time while writing the OS. Maan is just physically not present but he is alive in Geet.

@sdlife19 : Very true. Loving someone is just not enough U need to show it when situation comes.

@Dazzlingdd : Eventhough the names are not mentioned it is always n will be Maneet for us.😉

Actually I didnot mention 48 yrs of marriage while writing the OS but when updating I realized that I did not mention anywhere that Maneet had a very beautiful married life. Then I added that one.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

lovely moments of their married life, where they were there for and with each other in every sense..
she was like feeling him everywhere through the memories and there was a smile on her lips till the end while remembering the beautiful moments with him, remembering him..
very emotional and touching..
beautifully written.