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Veil

@Veil

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

This is a little something which is coming straight from heart after so many days. Don't forget to share the love in the form of comments in case if you like it.

Scroll down for the story.

Edited by Veil - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

hi congrats on the new OS! superb emotional OS. beautifully written! she suffered so much! he is in love with her so hw can he marry someone else. Is there a next part??

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maanjir

@maanjir

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

All i could think of as i finished reading it was

Oh what tangled web we weave when we first learn to deceive.

I ache for these two parallel lines that can never meet.

Destinies uncrossed.

It hurts, but the aching feeling this story leaves behind... Sometimes the soul craves such melancholy.

I have no adjectives to add that could do justice to this superb piece of writing.

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful os loved the way u wrote their emotion too beautiful hope there will be another part

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Destiny or fate would be the right words to describe this work right!!

Interesting narration

special coz this one I didn't expect from the writer

Different from all ur works so far

Thanks for posting it!!😊

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

No words to appreciate such a wonderful piece...

this story coming straight from your heart..went straight into my heart...

lovely...

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

A beatiful story...the lovers who dont meet ...its painful😭

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D_4_Devil

@D_4_Devil

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful amazing and superb story...

well written...

i hope there is next part...

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

that was a beautiful OS..i love that title...is there a second part.. its just that i look forward to read more

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

She married his twin brother and her life was wrecked : she also lost her baby

now she is convincing him to get married but it was he whom she met seven years earlier

lovely one-shot

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