Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016 - Page 49

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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update beautifully written
The entire set up by Shefali to bring them together was superb and the note succeeded in closing the little distance between them
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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazingly beautiful n superb updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful just like a parijit...i remember those flowers from my childhood when my great grandmother used to pick them up make a garland and take it to the temple...maaneet have woven their lives togeterhe just like this and have given to each other fully
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ending. Waiting for epilogue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG... THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!!!!
such a soulful piece of art it is... Loved it to the core

Such a devil u r... Stopped at a Cliffhanger
N the hands can also kiss part was awesome

Do continue soon
Vil b waitin desperately!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing story 👍🏼
Waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Wowie!!! I missed this post Avi. This could be a love between lovers or a divine love. It fits both the criteria. It is absolutely transcendental👏

<font color="#ff0000">As I stare on and on into the past,

in the end you emerge
</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Clad in the light of a pole-star,

piercing the darkness of time:

You become an image of what is remembered forever</font>

How very beautiful.
In many of my stories, you will find references to the pole star or the Polaris. That is because more than anything what I admire the most is a love that is constant like the pole star. A love that shines the brightest and guides you the rightest.

I am so glad I started writing Paarijat.
In my quest for finding the perfect poems, I read and listened to endless Rabindranath Tagore songs. Endless beauty that I was completely unaware of.😳



I am glad you decided to write it too...

now if only you had been a good girl and given timely updates 😲

I am re-reading it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



I am glad you decided to write it too...

now if only you had been a good girl and given timely updates 😲

I am re-reading it 😃

Ouch!!!! You aimed it right at my guilty conscience.😆
I am glad I wrote this too. I never thought I could write this flavor😃
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Originally posted by: Susegad

Ouch!!!! You aimed it right at my guilty conscience.😆
I am glad I wrote this too. I never thought I could write this flavor😃

It is satisfying right?
Someone asked me to write a story on the Laal Ishq song and I wrote it
then there was comedy and tragedy.. managed that too😃
now I have been asked for an arranged marriage story😲
that is tough for me though.. dekhti hu.. posted a prologue on FB and on the blog but pata nahi aage ho paayega ya nahi.
I don't like this concept😕
so give me the conclusion here already Nisha
kitna intezzar karwati ho!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
And people call me the devil😲

Oh gosh!

This was agony and ecstasy rolled into one.

You have so wonderfully captured them in this moment of time.

I could well imagine the husky voice outside the door and here I am mentally screaming, open the door, open the door😆

Hand kiss😳

swooned and gone into heaven

right under a Parijat tree with blossoms falling all over me😆

no I am here eating a PBJ at my office desk but Nish you took me there...

I wish I could write.. bangs head against desk

a better comment even or even a worthy one

I guess we need Mari or Onir for that..

love it so much

Conclude karo jaldi so I can breathe again.

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