Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#471

aww... loved this story..
always will be one of my favorites. loved everything Maan said..

👏👏

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#472

That was simply Phenomenal Shefali had done Maan's room so that it would reflect both Maan and Geet's taste

she also writes a note for Geet and I liked how she tells Geet that her parents love

her and her younger sister worships her

Maan telling Geet how his nights have been how he could feel her and want her

but now she is the one that has to take the final steps to him and I liked that she did

she loves him she trust him and been with him makes everything perfect

Maan telling Geet how long he wanted this moment but it will only happen if she

wants it to happen his words were soulful it was real it held depth and warmth

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#473

beautifully written ..

The deep words and the expression of love makes it worth reading 👏 .. both their insecurities washed away and fate did mercy ..he wanted to relish her , make her his forever in every sense and she as always tried to hide all her emotions behind those clenched finger , the description about room decoration gave a beautiful picture 😛

thanks ..

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bina_a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#474

Another update Nish!! Finally there are together as a couple so madly in love with each other. No anger, no complaints, no heartbreaks. Both deserve this happiness!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#475

lovely ending finally maan got his paarijat after 5 years such a long waiting cant blame him for being so desparate n thnx to shaif also she helped them loved it

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

#476

hi nisha

love the update ..

finally maan got his parijaat after a long wait of 5 years ..geet understood the trauma and separation faced by both ..hewants to have his geet right now with him forever ..even geet's sister showed her how much maan longing for her and how much geet's family loves her ...

hands can kiss😲 haila yeh toh mujhe aaj pata chala ..what a beautiful way of expression i must say ..love this part a lot nisha ..

mere haath mein tera haath ho ...

saari jaanate apne saath ho ..

thank u for lovely update ...

waiting for epilogue ...

thanks ...

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#478

Beautiful part yaar... All the mu been cleared n now only maaneet. Maan don't want geet to hold her feeling n want her to express her desire fr him... Grrr stop at wrong point yaar.
Can't wait for next part..

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hellgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#479

loved it
how passionate both are for each other ...
sach a sweet note from shef...
lovely

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#480

Final shot - So beautifully written. Shefali did everything for them according to their taste. She wanted to geet to seduce a desperate maan. But here she herself go seduced with his romantic words. How eager he was. Finally they are together. I am speechless to express the feelings.

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