Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016 - Page 21

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pingu.tingu

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome one shot i have read after ages ...FANTASTIC work ^_^ waiting for next part eagerly

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 10 years ago

Commenting now. Mere dimaag mein ek hi cheez aati hai iss story ko padhkar khaas kar first part ko, 'Paarijat, Paarijat, Paarijattt!' * Holding my head* Ek ladki ko paarijat bana diya...usko Geet bol deta toh saara locha khatam...lekin I loved what this Paarijat brought...I like the description of Paarijat and Tagore poems...and the passion in this story...this Geet is a goner...total mad...Ab bol do Maan babu ki, ''**Geet**,YOU are my Paarijat.''

This comment aside. I loved it. :).

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

hum wait karat rahe nisha ji...
kaahe tadpa rahi ho hamka??

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Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

aa bhi jao ab

mujhe padhna hai

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Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

have pity on a writer who can't write

kam se kam read karne do mujhe

update pls😃

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

me suddha vaat pahate aahe, nishu

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Krupa

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Posted: 10 years ago

kab update de rahi ho bahot jamana nikal gaya hum aankhe lagaye hue ...

hum garibo ki suno hum tumhari sunenge,tum ek update dogi hum 100 comment denge hum reader logo ki suno...?

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Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
me suddha vaat pahate aahe, nishu

mi pann😃

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 10 years ago

Everyone's speaking Marathi here. Let me try.

Mi tuzhya mulachi aayi honar aahe.

This is the only Marathi line I know 😆

No, wait.

Mala tuzha ved lagla aahe?

Kill me. Now.

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 10 years ago

Tu kashi aahes?

Tu kasa aahes?

Mi tujashi prem karte

Yay. I know not just two lines of Marathi 😆

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