Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Angeline124

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Wonderful story
Read first two parts
speechless by the intense love story
Continue soon and pm me the next part if u can

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Part 2 - So beautiful part nisha and beautifully written..Loved it to the core. This confrontation was needed to put some sense in her mind. How well he knows her, all in & out, every emotion he can read.. she is really helpless in front of her and can never lie or hide her feelings. I liked how he took out his anger when he came to know about her profile in matrimonial site. how insanely she loves him...stored all in her...she is ready to do anything if it makes him happy. but I think he loves her more than she loves him. how can she stay away from him.. loved every bit of his dialogues. I liked the part her praying for his super success in his exams, which included the her note stick in banana too...lol...crazy geet...he came to know about her feelings after reading poem that wrapped in the saree he gifted...ab to geet phas gayi...how boldly he carried and hugged her in front of all...

waiting eagerly for the precap...its mouth watering...cont soon...

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

part 2 was beautiful...

with maan pouring out all he had to say to her... and geet; well her heart is not ready to believe that it was actually hers, the person she loved and desired the most and gave up to someone else for his happiness just bcoz of a mere misunderstanding!

the affect of the fake engament on her over the night was intense.. i loved tht part very much!

then the morning again with lots of surprises n shocks!

and finally the time to lift all veils n face the truth on the face of it!

lovely dear 😊

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

MAAN HAS BEEN THE CONSTANT PERSON IN HER LIFE WHO KNOWS HER INSIDE OUT

BUT BOTH DONT KNOW THE FEELING IN THE OTHERS HEART

GEET CAN GIVE HER LIFE FOR MAAN

AND MAAN - HIS LIFE IS STILL AT THE MOMENT WHERE SHE GAVE HIM AWAY

BUT NOW MAAN HAS A HINT OF HER FEELINGS FOR HIM AND HE WILL NOT LET HER GET AWAY

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anmirza

@anmirza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

What a read!!!

So different and omG how can Geet be so dumb?

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

speechless with the intensity of the love you brought into both the parts !!
the first part poured Maan's heart out and this let out the unspoken love that Geet kept in her heart.
Geet is still under the misconception created by herself about Parijaat even after him expressing almost everything...not to blame her totally, his words are sometimes misleading, leaving the uncertainty and doubt in Geet's mind for her to think in other way..it is in her nature too to take all the sufferings for the happiness of her loved ones...
and thanks to the matrimonial advertisement, it pushed Maan to the limit to let go of his ego, bringing back his possessive love..and now he knows from the poem & her writing about her sufferings and the equally intense but selfless love she holds for him.

loved the way Maan uses his ways with her..his words making her accept his proposal, although fake fiance from her view and reading out the poem loud making her come out of the bathroom...

beautiful update..

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

i was totally bowled over maan's confession. Damn, this man loves her from every cell of his body. It's as if his whole existence is nothing without geet & she is crazily in love with him. What we say, TRULY, MADLY & DEEPLY IN LOVE.

brilliant part

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Such a Beautifull Story...Just Loved Maan's love for geet
Very well written !!!

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Infinity.

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Part 2
Geet is so Dumb..grrr Poor Maaan
Awesome update
continue soon

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: dqno1
Nisha

I am not able to write because of you 😕

mujhe ye story sata rahi hai

jaldi update karo pls

😃 pls

with puppy eyes 😳

Mujhe pata chal gaya. Meri kahani padhke tumhare dimag pe orange blobs cha gaye na?😆

I will complete it and post it as soon as I can, I promise.😃