Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Thap Thap Thap for Final SHOT 😳

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Susegad

Mujhe pata chal gaya. Meri kahani padhke tumhare dimag pe orange blobs cha gaye na?😆

I will complete it and post it as soon as I can, I promise.😃

😆 Haan!

Utha ke le gaya sab ke samne..

sigh!!!

gift .. wo bhi saree ..

pata nahi kya hota hai saree ki gift sunkar

meri Indianness jag jati hai.. 😆 thinking about it.

me dead! 🤢

jaldi karo..

orange blobs nikalo 😆

maine Laal Ishq repost kiya hai 😳 so I can survive until I can write again

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Just B***** Brilliant! Love it...

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Nisha 🤗...hi dear...u updated the 2nd part 😲...how come i missed it for so many days 😕...going to read and comment now 😊

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Ratna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Nisha 🤗...thank u for this wonderful update...the fake fiancee drama is still going on...Maan is trying to convince her saying his ego will be hurt in front of the family...she is still resisting...he is so in love with her...the way he is angry her profile is up for suitors 😡...the way he is worried no one will understand her and her feelings like he did 😕...what an amazing bond they have ...what all they shared...so rare and precious ...the way u said it all through his impassioned speech in the past and present is awesome 👏...what else could she do but give her consent...she was so miffed he kissed her so chastely on the forehead 😆...her thinking about the past seeing the saree he gifted...Tagore's poem and the lines she wrote underneath...her hot dreams and Maan's kisses 😳...then the one line let us end it all...again a MU...ufff...but glad it made her speak the truth even though it was through a closed door.😛...loved the angry,jealous and frustrated MSK ❤️...all the yelling and banging made their mom's come up...the way he sent them away...i am so glad he finally decided to truly end all the MU's once and for all...reading the line she wrote made him all 😭...all he had to do was read aloud few lines of the poem and she was rushing out straight into his arms...sighhh the way he carried her down and introduced her as his fiancee ...his joy in having his love in his arms 😃...u wrote it all so beautifully Nisha 👍🏼...the teasing precap's u gave are making us more eager for the final part...want to ask for more parts but know u have other stories to finish...but plz think of an epilogue when u have time...would really love to revisit this Maaneet story once more 😊

For u with love ❤️

Edited by --Ratna-- - 10 years ago

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gudmeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

When are planning to post the next part dear

eagggerly waiting for the next part

please post it as soon as possible

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divya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

waaah.. this is absolutely wonderful story.. n funny at the same time.. mind blowing story.. absolutely loved it. please continue asap..

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honeygrape

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

nisha diii...next part ??????

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anky_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Oka, now this one is an out of the world, outstanding, awesome, fantastic, mind blowing one shot or fiction I've had read in the recent times. It's truly magnificent, marvellous story...
each and every emotion of both protagonists has been depicted in heavenly manner...
The story has so much depth in it which is another wonderful aspect of it...
If Geet's love for Maan is divine and undying, then Maan's love for her too is no less...
Maan's love has passed the barrier of patience...
the entire story is an epitome of divine eternal love...
both had loved each other selflessly...
brilliant piece of writing...great work...