Jigsaw- A Slice Of Life OS - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Yes... i read this in os competition and loved it too...i always love the comic touch to your stories..funny os... It's a beautiful journey fo their married life. I liked her online purchasing and his irritation over it, geet's drunken tamasha, his sleeping habbit, their arguing, annoying and love & care and supporting each other all the time.
waiting for your other stories..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
LOVE THE STORY
HOW WELL THEY UNDERSTAND EACH OTHER AND HOW THEY HAVE ACCEPTED EACH OTHERS'S FAULTS AND IDIOSYNCRASIES TO COMPLETE THEIR FAMILY JIGSAW

BUT NO KIDS

WAITING FOR THE OTHER STORIES


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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a wonderful OS by you!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
so beautiful n lovely os...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Read it again and felt exactly the same

Wonderful
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Miss you yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Finally I could comment on this! 😆 Such a wonderful story! Loved it to bits 😳 The title is beautiful & perfectly suits the story! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
*blisss* 😳 🤗
Nisha ji hugs 🤗 sometimes ..all we need is hug...and how good we feel with the other person's presence and their arms around us. 🤗

You know what.. this is one of the most ..sorry scratch that Best Fiction ever i read on a couple!

"I no longer believed in the idea of soul mates, or love at first sight. But I was beginning to believe that a very few times in your life, if you were lucky, you might meet someone who was exactly right for you. Not because he was perfect, or because you were, but because your combined flaws were arranged in a way that allowed two separate beings to hinge together."

This quote i pictured it for Avi's Chura liya M&G ...but now...

But now... i love this quote ..and its meaning..such depth..and meaningful..and beautiful..
and the person who made me understand the meaning of this quote& soulamate..is YOU!!!

You wont realize few things until they are said/done in different way...

I always loved Mayyo's writing more than anyone else,,,cause she writes such "normal" things (which usually happens in our day-to-day life) in a simple way (just-like-her), so neatly she presents them... we cant stop loving those lines and thoughts! And those mundane/silly conversations, which are written so perfectly ... Ahaaan.. i miss her writing..

But then again when i read this.. *i- for-one-moment-didn't-believe- it-could-be-YOU!!* 😆

No..not offence... genuinely 😃

Cause i am soo used to your way of writing.. that i didnt realize that ... there is a soft and sweet person hidden behind my Catty-meow jungli Nisha ji.😆🤗

I have never felt this needy to re-read everyday..but i am doing it... .. i don't want to miss this...

i wanna savor this moment and words..and feeling...and and.. and.. LOVE!!!

Oh my..its sooo filled with love ..just like you are!!! 🤗

You have no clue ..how badly i have fallen in love with your words and...thoughts...!!😳

More than anything ..hats off to your thought process...

never ever knew that ..there would be a woman (like YOU) who would be as funny as Geet ..and as beautiful as her(Thoughts again 😃😆) 👍🏼 *I bow you lady*


i love everything about it ...be her wrinkles...be it his annoyance towards her nautanki... and even snuggling beside her ☺️

shopping online...being clumsy ... pouring honey...valuing CARRR more than anything else...😡 ...
that lamp...tour... her actions...and his silent acknowledgement ...

Her words.. his thoughts..
her acceptance..and his selflessness...huh ..this is what is called as LIFE ..LOVE...

"I find the best way to love someone is not to change them, but instead, help them reveal the greatest version of themselves."

"Through my love for you, I want to express my love for the whole cosmos, the whole of humanity, and all beings. By living with you, I want to learn to love everyone and all species. If I succeed in loving you, I will be able to love everyone and all species on Earth... This is the real message of love."

"Submission is not about authority and it is not obedience; it is all about relationships of love and respect."



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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
hai nisha

first of all mera freind request accept karlo

ur pms go to my pmid... and i check that id only when i send pms...

kithni der se dekha tumhaara pms patha hain

so pehle mera ye waala freind requezt accept karo

hades par tho pehra deke baiti hoo

but if u come in other ways how will i know😆😆😆

book marking this... will read soon...

bete ka exams jaldi finish kardo babaji🥱😉😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

still am missing u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai nisha

first of all mera freind request accept karlo

ur pms go to my pmid... and i check that id only when i send pms...

kithni der se dekha tumhaara pms patha hain

so pehle mera ye waala freind requezt accept karo

hades par tho pehra deke baiti hoo

but if u come in other ways how will i know😆

book marking this... will read soon...

bete ka exams jaldi finish kardo babaji🥱😉😆

Aww!!! Looks like exams bete ke hi nahi tumhare bhi chal rahe hai😆
All the best to the both of you😉
Wish I could come online more often but the net here is killing me, plus dad needs to use the computer mostly during the day. You won't believe it, but the Paarijat story was handwritten and then typed out by me on the laptop😛
Take your time aaram se and read when you feel like 😃

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