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Posted: 10 years ago
maan kaun hai?uske pass supernatural powers kahanse aya?

awesome updates...


loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates!!Vicky is trully love Sam...because of his father he lost his love...really feeling bad for him...Maan collects some evidence about Vicky...Rajveer worried about his sisters...what will happen when Madhu will come to know that RK's father had killed her father??I think Maan is Prince of Tusk...Vicky's father is really monster...Thank aGod Maan returns home safely...Loved it so much...waiting for the next...Thanks for the PM dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch. 44A
Superb Update

Poor Vicky drownd in his sorrows, totally depressed and shattered , missing sameera badly, he knows that sameera will not come back, he knows his mistakes axcept one that his blind love for his father destroying him, maan watching him and feeling bad for Vicky but don,t know why, I think there is some connection between them like Vicky and RK

Wow!!!!! Maan,s adventurous trip to Vicky,s cottage and he got so many things to know about Vicky and escaped from there safely, loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
CH. 44 B
Wonderful Update

Prince Rajveer knows every details regarding Vicky, RK and his sisters, now he came to know about Maan who is possessing exceptional supernatural powers and Rajveer don,t know this , now mystery behind Maan,s birth and powers will be solved

That B***** King is selfish and cunning beyond limits, fooling everyone, always busy in making air castles, now I m hating him more, don,t know paapo ka ghadha bharne mein kitne din lagege
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updates .
vicky is totally broken nd shattered coz he thinks smeera betrayed him .
He ws remembering all of their beautiful moments together .
Maan felt pity on him ,
ahhh maan got queen's pic with king .it surprised him .
bt in all this the big thing ws "HISTORY OF
NEOTOPIA".
hmm I am really eager to know more about it .
aww rk baby ws gussa .
In zymond Rajveer ws tensed thinking about their destiny,
yaar plzz make rk kill this king very soon.
I can't tolerate him anymore .
Is maan the son of the king of tuskers ??
as he hs the supernatural powers .
Edited by mskfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch 45A & 45B updated...

Note:
I want to say that from now onwards my updates will be irregular...I have decided to rest as much as I like , then if I feel like I will update...


Teaser

"Vikram, Vikram...Slow down please," Sam screamed from behind. But his eyes were searching something. She got hold of him & pulled him towards herself.

"What's it baby? Do u want something? Tell me na...I will bring it for u" Sam said, cupping his face, but he seemed not to hear a single word & he just roamed his eyes everywhere. He jerked her hands away from his face & ran outside of the cottage.Sam panicked seeing him behaving in an unstabilised manner & screamed, "RK...RK, where are u?"

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one... Geet got to know about madhu and rk affair... She was hell angry but that Anaya lied to her and that is the reason she have bad opinion about him... Rk sincerely told him but she was adamnt that he would leave her sister... And also geet rudely talked to madhu... Geet should realize that its her own behavior which makes her to stand back...
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Posted: 10 years ago
why geet is behaving like dis...i hate geet fr dis...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

THANKSSS...FOR THE DETAILED CLARIFICATION ON MY NEVER ENDING DOUBTS...🤗

HEHEHEH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

GHOSH DAT KING HE IS SUCH A BAS***D YAAR...HE IS FOOLING ALL..😡

WAT D HELL HE GONNA DO WIT ALL DIS POWERS...OKAY NOW I HAV A DOUBT ...DEY HAV POWERS..ND WIT ALL DIS POWERS ...ISNT HE GONNA AGE AND DIE OF BEING OLD ..OR IS IT...UNKA UMAR BADNA B THAM SA JAYEGA WIT DER ..POWERS...

GEET OKAY UNDERSTOOD DAT SHE IS BEING POISNED WIT ANNANYA KA LIE ABOUT RK BEING BAD..BT DEN AGAIN... WOH KAUNSI DOODH KI DHULLI HAI...I HATE HER REALLY FOR HER BEHAVIOUR AND POSSESIVE NATURE...ITS ALL ME ME ME FOR HER...😡

SHE IS NOT EVEN TRYING TO JUDGE...ITS AS IF ALWAYS ALL SHOULD ME PRAISING HER ..

NOT LIKING WAT RK DOES...

MADHU GAVE CORRECT ANSWER TO HER..SO TRUE...SHE CANT JUDGE ANYONE WITHOUT KNOWIN D TRUTH...

AND REALLY FELT BAD FOR RK..HOW HE BCAME SAD KNOWING ...DAT HOW GEET FEELS ABOUT HIM...

I HATE HER HA...REALLY...

OHH SO FEELING BAD FOR VICKY...HE IS SO BROKEN...AND SEEMS LIKE HE IS ON THE PATH OF REDEMPTION ..BT DEN AGAIN ..HAIN NA USKA EVIL DAD TO BRAINWASH HIM AGAIN..

BT NOW AM REALLY REALY CURIOUS ..I STILL HAV A FEELING DAT MAAN IS REALTED TO VICKY SOMEWHERE ...

OKAY DAT NEOTOPIA BOOK AND ITS RULE...KITNA EXHAUSTING HAI...

BT SEEMS LIKE MAAN IS NOT AT ALL GOT ANY CLUE FROM READING SUCH A BIG BOOK..

FEEL BAD HEARING HOWMUCH RK N MAAN STRUGGLED IN DER CHILDHOOD..

ND LOVE DER BONDING ...

RD AND KV...OKAY RV IS ANGRY AS MOHINI DIDNT GOT DAT PUNISHMENT WHCH HIS SIS GOT...

NOW MY QN IS Y DEY STILL SERVING DIS KING..WEN DEY IN ACTUAL DISLIKE ..IT..DEY CAN LEAVE ALL DIS WORLD AND MAKE A GOOD LIVELY COMMONAR LIFE NA..???????????????

OHH GOT A GLIMPSE OF MY CHARMER..HEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHH HOO!!!!!!!!!! NOT BAD ..SARI KHABAR NIKAL RAKHI HAI..VEER NE ..MAAN N RK KE BAREMAIN...

OKAY EVEN I WANT VEER TO DIG MORE ON MAAN KA PAST...

SO HE IS WORRIED FOR KNOWIN HIS DI KA REACTION ON KNOWING DAT RK KA DAD IS KILLER OF DER PARENTS..BT Y TO BLAME RK...BECHARE KO KHUD USKA BAAP MARNA CHAHTA..HAI...

MANY TIMS I AM GETTING TO READ ONE RULE DAT A GIRL IF GETS PREGNANAT WITOUT WEDLOCK IS TO B KILLED OR SOMETHIN...Y I FEEL ...GEET MADHU OR DIPS ..WILLL B IN DANGER IN FUTURE..OKAY DATS MY ASSUMPTION...

PRECAP SEEMS LIKE...VIKRAMM IS GETTING ONE OF HIS PANIC ATTACK ..HOPE SAM CONTROLS HIM...

OKAY I SEE.. MOHINI AND GEET BEEN D BIGGEST HURDLE FOR OUR RISHBALA..BECHARE ..HAR TARAF DUSHMAN BARE PADE HAI..

HIS DAD ..HIS BROTHER..HIS MOTHR ..HIS GF SIS..ALL BECHARA RISHBALA..

NOW WIAITN FO RNEXT PART..

CONT SOON..WILL BE WAIITN..

WAITIN

WAIITN

AMAZING UPDATE...

PS..WATS DAT LINE U GIVE

Thank u for commenting for so long & encouraging me & tolerating my story...

WATS DAT TOLERATING AND ALL HA...I LOVE UR WAY OF TELLING D STORY..UR AN FAB WRITIER..

LOVE UR WRITIN..

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