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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear first of all plz take care of urself we will wait for updates
Thank god maan reached to her
And geet having that pepper spray saved her
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ... maan saved geet ...
precap ... hi dreamy waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
maan saved geet on right time

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Hello my dear friends,,,

Updating ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 102


Part - 103

Geet had changed nd was waiting for Manu ,, her eyes wr still red nd wet recalling those horrible moments ,, she was looking very disturbed nd lost ,, again a Q was hitting her mind ..What if something happened to her ? there was no end of her fear nd worries ,, not for her but for Manu .

Maan saw her nd understood that she was very disturbed nd it was not good to leave her alone here ,, Manu saw Geet nd run towards her shouting ,, Mommy ,, Mommy u come .

Geet turned nd took him in her arms nd showered love ,, Maan went back in kitchen nd preared manu's Milk ,, it was his time to sleep ,, he came back , handed bottled to Geet nd gestured her to give Manu ,, he sat near them on bed ,, Manu was in Geet's lap nd started sucking his milk nd giving all d info in breaks .

Manu: mommy I ate with Dadu ,, lice (rice) nd nd lajama .

Geet nd Maan smiled at his talk ,, Geet was caressing manu's head nd patting softly to make him sleep .

Geet: good ,, did u eat enough ?

Manu: yeah ,, tummy said .

Geet smiled: OK ,didn't u eat choco ?

Manu: I eat big one ,, glanny gave me ,, mommy tongue buln ,, aayy ( he showed his tongue )

Geet: why ?

Maan: did u eat chilly baby ?

Manu: yeah ,, in lajma .

Maan: Oh ,, I scold nakul who put chilly in my baby's rajma.

Geet: why ,, no , plzz , nakul dada didn't know ,,

unhe kya pata Manu bhi dinner karega ,, it's OK .

Maan: he cd make anything for manu.

Manu: uncle Maan I ate big choco .

Geet: OK , now finish ur milk nd sleep baby ..

Manu finished his milk nd came in Maan's lap ,, Maan lovingly started patted him to make him sleep ,, Geet smiled nd got up ,, changed manu's lower nd prepared his bed to sleep ,, Maan settled manu in his cot when he slept nd came out in kitchen where Geet was warming dinner .

Geet: dinner laga du ye aunty wait ker rahi hein ?

Maan: nahi , laga do ,, wahan sab ker chuke .

Geet gestured him to sit nd served him ,, she didn't serve for her ,, Maan held her hand nd made her sit in d chair .

Maan: tum nahi kahogi to mai bhi nahi kahunga Geet .

Her eyes turned wet again nd sniffed : bhook nahi hei ,, plzz force matt karo .

Maan: I know ,mujhe bhi nahi hei , lekin mai tumhare liye kha raha hu ,, chalo thoda sa kha lo .

Geet: plzz nahi .

Maan: plzz ,, thoda sa ,,( he took a morsal , brought near her mouth nd gestured her to eat )

Geet nodded in a no but he pleaded with his eyes ,, tears rolled down from Geet's eyes ,, Maan kept d food back in plate nd sat next to her giving her side hug,, Geet leaned nd cried out placing on his chest ,, he too was very disturbed ,, Geet faced a fearful situation nd anything cd be happen with her .

Maan: Geet , plzzz don't cry ,, see u r safe nd sound with manu nd me ,, I m sorry I didn't thing about ur cab ,, I always stopped u to take cab but took this casual , thinking that it was hired from ur Co ,, KC's staff also use cabs provided by us ,, I m sorry, I had to give u personal car .

Geet in cracking voice : agar kuch ho jata to ,, mai kya kerti mere Manu ka kya hota ?

Maan: sshh,, don't think bad ,, kuch nahi hone deta mei tumhe ,, I had send police behind u to search u nd u r a brave girl Geet , u r very brave ,,I m proud of u , how u faced him to save urself nd that B***** won't come out from jail .

Geet snifed: aap nahi hoty to ?

Maan: I was lucky that u didn't cut d call Geet nd I overheard ur words ,, now onward be very careful , nd I myself will check ur nd Manu's safty & security ,, calm down ,, that was a bad time nd passed .

Geet : aapko meri wajah se etna sab...

Maan: chup ,, what meri wajah se ,, remember one thing Geet u nd manu r my part now ,, so don't think meri ya teri wajha ,, ess sach ko samjho Geet ,, try to trust me .

Geet mai dad ko mil ker aata hu , tab tak tum coffee banao , mind bhi divert hoga ,, hummm ,, chalo.

Geet nodded ,, Maan wiped her eyes nd brought her in kitchen , then went to meet Yash who was in his warm comfy bed busy in reading a file ,, Maan wished him nd sat near him ,, Rashi too was there .

Yash: Maan u became very late nd not responding d calls , is everything is fine on site ?

Maan: yeah dad nd sorry for not taking d calls ,, I was with Geet that time nd not able to call ,, she was in trouble nd faced a horrible time ,, even that time was like a hell for me too .

Rash: why ,, what happened ,,is she fine ?

Yash: kya hua Geet ko,, aur tumne mujhe phone ku nahi kiya ?

Maan: Geet abhi theek hei lekin bahot disturbed hei ?

Yash: abhi theek hei matlab ? ,, kya hua tha usse ?

Maan: dad ,, she was coming from her office in her cab nd ...

Maan described everything to Yash nd Rashi which shocked them ,, Rashi gasped ,, OMG!!! nd Yash heart sank he was looking at Maan with pale face .

Very hardly he asked : wo theek to hei na Maan ? usse kuch hua to nahi ? tum sach batana mujhe .

Maan: trust me dad .. wo theek hei lekin bahot disturb hei .

Rashi: tumne use akele ku choda OH mei ,, hume wahin bulana tha ,, Yash , chalo abi uke paas.

All get up nd came OH where Geet was talking with one of her collegue ,, her whole team got d news nd they wr calling her one by one,, geet saw Yash nd Rashi with Maan nd cut d call saying sorry to them .

Rashi hugged Geet at once with wet eyes nd then Yash ,, both wr very tense .

Rashi: tum theek ho na beta ? hume phone ku nahi kiya ?

Yash: tum dono akele sab face kerty rahe ,, mujhe inform kerna tha na .. mai kal wahan ke ACP se baat karunga ,, Maan Police officer se bola ki news bahar na aaye, Geet ka naam nahi aana chahiye ,, aur uss B****** ki to mei zindgi haram ker dunga .

Maan: I told them Dad .

Yash: tum kal se meri gadi mei jaogi ,, aur koi if - but nahi .

Rashi : nahi meri mei jao ,, mere aur maa ke liye ek kafi hei.

Maan: dad wo mai dekh lunga ,, aap plzz ACP ko jaroor phone ker dena to keep d news wrap.

Yash: huumm,, don't worry ,, Geet ke office inform kiya ? they have to be carefull for other girl employees too.

Maan: kiya Dad , aur kal mai Geet ke office bhi jaunga head se milne,, i'll meet him personally .

Geet: he talk to me few min back , he was worried nd saying sorry ,, they had contacted with priv driver who placed this at his place .

Yash: koi nahi uski to kundli mai niklwa lunga ,, lekin ab tum kabhi cab use nahi karogi ,, samjhi .

Geet nodded ,, she knew that he nd Rashi wr very worried for her so quietly accepted ,, she too was fearing to think about cab ,, she remembered that Maan always stopped her for calling a cab ,, he thought for her saefty ,, she looked gratefully at Maan .


Nothing ever goes away until it teaches us what we need to know.


Precap --- some Maaneet moments ...


Part - 104




sorry for mistakes ...


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi barbee ...🤗
hw r u nw..??fever gaya aur bkace,,??
me bsy ,,,so hello 2 all gapus,,,,

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Posted: 10 years ago
😃HI Barbie doll Hi Lils, Gappus😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
Waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
App ki tabiyat ab kaisi hai..
i mean u back pain ..🤔 hope teek ho gaya hai...

comming to update...geet nd her pepper spray saved her
maan was so restless..
geet was so scared...nd helpless as she was years back...bt here she could save herself...
her fear...was so reflecting...nd maan was all so tensed...
for her..nd finally she found solace wen she saw maan..here dis time he was like a saviour for her...

precap...oh wow cant wait for d same..
waitin
waitin

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Posted: 10 years ago
Congozz on new thread dear

PARTS 101 and 102

Nice parts

They have to come close now, since maan has to bring Geet at home 😉

Thanks for pms sweets

waiting for more

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