MG SS The play of destiny #3.Part 14 /Page 88 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
nice update.loved a maan a lot.will be waiting for u dear.take ur own time,but plz come back as soon as possible.dont take a very long break.will miss u n ur updates a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Amazing update i was missing your writing
loved this update superb maan ..Nt and pammi lol
hope to see you soon wid bang updates but atleast try to gave one update for all ff once in month
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
awesome update
naina ke toh hosh hi uud gae 🤣
bechari naina...nahi nahi n bechari abhi v kuch pakk raha h
lolzzz kahi geet ke kangan churate churate iska or band na baj jae
aroo is now maan's legal son aaelooo yeh v shock se kam thode tha naina n pammi ke lie
adi is shocked to see geet as kid
n now adi n maan searching for best doc for geet
m waiting for next kya hoga maan babu ka 2 kids ke sath ek jo unka beta h or ek jo unki patni ji h šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

humrahiii v de doo ab intejar nahi hota 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Finally Vrinda di... aap update post kiya..
Maan ne NT ki kya band bajayi... so funny NT khud bahut smart samajhti hai. Maan ke plan se uska muh band ho gaya... Dev Maan ko maska lagane ke chakkar me NT ke against bol raha hai... Maan Aarav ko adopt karne se Pammi aur NT ko shock laga...
Ye NT Geet ke kangan churayegi kya.??? .. bas Maan pakad le usko... huh..

. Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
hello,
nice update. waiting for next eagerly...:). i never get pm for blog password...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
hi valli
superb update
maan taking care of geet and arnav ..
nt too jealous ..but ab kya kar sakti hai woh ..kuch nahi ..
maan hai na sab theek karne ko ..
arnav is now leagally adopted by maan...nice ..
hope geet get her senses back soon
thank u for update
will of waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
MAAN ne pura fasa diya NT ko next time panga lene se pehle sochegešŸ˜†
bechara maan 2-2 babies ko handle kaise karega
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
n has trapped nanina , very nicely,'
bechari naina,
loved the part ..we will wait till june ..for you,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
hi
i just came to read this one recently...
happy its getting cont...and got a update..

your story is very diff .. starts with Maan feeling guilty for be careless with Dev..couldn't save from NT... get Drunk and geet come to sleep with him...pammi's talk led maan to marry geet..
you have showed very well all emotions..went thru by each char..
maan very well recognize NT and pammi's thoughts...
very smart and clever..
geet and aarav's char was liked most...with all their sweet talks and naughtiness..
happy and sad ..maan is getting attracted to geet...and unble show his love in this condition...
all the events ...with NT and Pammi's villains...excepting to do something and Maan's smartness to solve...geet and aarav's sweetness...making to stick on this ...

Never give up Hope...
there are gud and bad times...
all will turn well and normal..
you are among few writers ...i always wants read and re-read ur stories..
book marked ur thread..
sooorrry with all my hesitation...i did not say/comment
will be waiting for you to come back and cont...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan itne aache se sab kuch handle krta h, its lovely and it will be fun to watch maan tackling aareet , I want maan to spend some alone time aareet somewhere else

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